Dear Work Track 5 members, As discussed on the WT5 call today, the co-leaders are pleased to share with you the “working document” that we will be using to collect input from WT5 calls and the email list. You can find a Google Document version here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BRzHr2FxSTYHX1I8F3FHSt6Bo1cvJsKyWX8WZXRU.... Word and PDF extracts are attached. Please keep in mind the following when reviewing the document, which was produced by staff under the direction of the Work Track co-leaders: - This is work in progress and will continue to evolve as discussions continue. - The document is intended to summarize perspectives and key points raised in Work Track discussions and on the Work Track mailing list. - The document does not attempt to evaluate the level of consensus in support of the different ideas and positions at this time. Once Work Track leaders hold consensus calls, information about level of consensus will be added. You are encouraged to provide feedback on the document if you feel that an important point raised in the Work Track has been missed or has not been captured sufficiently, or if you want to add new points or arguments not yet discussed. We only ask that you do not suggest deleting points or ideas that were raised by someone other than yourself. You can comment in the following ways: - Insert a comment in the Google Doc: Highlight the text where you want to insert the comment. In the top menu, click the “add comment” icon (it appears as a speech bubble with a “+” sign). Please make sure your name is included with your comment). - Insert a comment in the Word Doc: If you do not use Google Docs, you can insert a comment into the attached Word document and send it to the Work Track 5 mailing list. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. Updated versions of the document will be regularly circulated. - Send comments to the mailing list: You can comment by sending an email to the mailing list and including the page and section number of the text you are referencing. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. We look forward to receiving your input. Kind regards, Annebeth Lange Olga Cavalli Martin Sutton Javier Rúa-Jovet
Hello Javier Just a quick point of clarification…did you want WT5 members to submit comments prior to next week’s call so that a new version of the document could be produced? Not quite sure of the cycle of editing/commenting. Thanks to the staff for producing a helpful tracking of what we’re all doing. Liz …. Dr Liz Williams | International Affairs .au Domain Administration Ltd M: +61 436 020 595 | +44 7824 877757 E: liz.williams@auda.org.au<mailto:liz.williams@auda.org.au> www.auda.org.au<http://www.auda.org.au> Important Notice This email may contain information which is confidential and/or subject to legal privilege, and is intended for the use of the named addressee only. If you are not the intended recipient, you must not use, disclose or copy any part of this email. If you have received this email by mistake, please notify the sender and delete this message immediately. On 31 May 2018, at 6:30 am, Javier Rua <javrua@gmail.com<mailto:javrua@gmail.com>> wrote: Dear Work Track 5 members, As discussed on the WT5 call today, the co-leaders are pleased to share with you the “working document” that we will be using to collect input from WT5 calls and the email list. You can find a Google Document version here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BRzHr2FxSTYHX1I8F3FHSt6Bo1cvJsKyWX8WZXRU.... Word and PDF extracts are attached. Please keep in mind the following when reviewing the document, which was produced by staff under the direction of the Work Track co-leaders: * This is work in progress and will continue to evolve as discussions continue. * The document is intended to summarize perspectives and key points raised in Work Track discussions and on the Work Track mailing list. * The document does not attempt to evaluate the level of consensus in support of the different ideas and positions at this time. Once Work Track leaders hold consensus calls, information about level of consensus will be added. You are encouraged to provide feedback on the document if you feel that an important point raised in the Work Track has been missed or has not been captured sufficiently, or if you want to add new points or arguments not yet discussed. We only ask that you do not suggest deleting points or ideas that were raised by someone other than yourself. You can comment in the following ways: * Insert a comment in the Google Doc: Highlight the text where you want to insert the comment. In the top menu, click the “add comment” icon (it appears as a speech bubble with a “+” sign). Please make sure your name is included with your comment). * Insert a comment in the Word Doc: If you do not use Google Docs, you can insert a comment into the attached Word document and send it to the Work Track 5 mailing list. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. Updated versions of the document will be regularly circulated. * Send comments to the mailing list: You can comment by sending an email to the mailing list and including the page and section number of the text you are referencing. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. We look forward to receiving your input. Kind regards, Annebeth Lange Olga Cavalli Martin Sutton Javier Rúa-Jovet <Work Track 5 - Initial Report Working Document - 30 May 2018.pdf><Work Track 5 - Initial Report Working Document - 30 May 2018.docx>_______________________________________________ Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5 mailing list Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org<mailto:Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5
Hi Liz, Good point, thank you for flagging this. The sooner we have comments in, the better. It will take some time to review and make edits, so this may be a challenge prior to next weeks’s call (unless, of course, no-one has any comments!), but it would be very helpful if WT5 members could review and comment by that time.. It is essentially a living document, so we will be able to adapt further as we go along. Kind regards, Martin Martin Sutton Executive Director Brand Registry Group martin@brandregistrygroup.org<mailto:martin@brandregistrygroup.org> www.brandregistrygroup.org<http://www.brandregistrygroup.org> The contents of this email message and any attachments are intended solely for the addressee(s) and may contain confidential and/or privileged information and may be legally protected from disclosure. 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Dr Liz Williams | International Affairs .au Domain Administration Ltd M: +61 436 020 595 | +44 7824 877757 E: liz.williams@auda.org.au<mailto:liz.williams@auda.org.au> www.auda.org.au<http://www.auda.org.au/> Important Notice This email may contain information which is confidential and/or subject to legal privilege, and is intended for the use of the named addressee only. If you are not the intended recipient, you must not use, disclose or copy any part of this email. If you have received this email by mistake, please notify the sender and delete this message immediately. On 31 May 2018, at 6:30 am, Javier Rua <javrua@gmail.com<mailto:javrua@gmail.com>> wrote: Dear Work Track 5 members, As discussed on the WT5 call today, the co-leaders are pleased to share with you the “working document” that we will be using to collect input from WT5 calls and the email list. You can find a Google Document version here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BRzHr2FxSTYHX1I8F3FHSt6Bo1cvJsKyWX8WZXRU.... Word and PDF extracts are attached. Please keep in mind the following when reviewing the document, which was produced by staff under the direction of the Work Track co-leaders: * This is work in progress and will continue to evolve as discussions continue. * The document is intended to summarize perspectives and key points raised in Work Track discussions and on the Work Track mailing list. * The document does not attempt to evaluate the level of consensus in support of the different ideas and positions at this time. Once Work Track leaders hold consensus calls, information about level of consensus will be added. You are encouraged to provide feedback on the document if you feel that an important point raised in the Work Track has been missed or has not been captured sufficiently, or if you want to add new points or arguments not yet discussed. We only ask that you do not suggest deleting points or ideas that were raised by someone other than yourself. 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Thank you Liz for your comment! And Martin, thanks for your response. As Martin says, the challenge is for co-leads to keep up; WT members can and should weigh in when they can and choose. Also, we are all -Members, co-leads & staff- challenged with a demanding and ambitious WT schedule, so we must keep moving forward at a good pace whilst making sure all voices are heard and accounted. Regards, Javier Rúa-Jovet ALAC +1-787-396-6511 twitter: @javrua skype: javier.rua1 https://www.linkedin.com/in/javrua
On May 31, 2018, at 5:04 AM, Martin Sutton <martin@brandregistrygroup.org> wrote:
Hi Liz,
Good point, thank you for flagging this. The sooner we have comments in, the better. It will take some time to review and make edits, so this may be a challenge prior to next weeks’s call (unless, of course, no-one has any comments!), but it would be very helpful if WT5 members could review and comment by that time..
It is essentially a living document, so we will be able to adapt further as we go along.
Kind regards,
Martin
Martin Sutton Executive Director Brand Registry Group martin@brandregistrygroup.org www.brandregistrygroup.org
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On 31 May 2018, at 08:02, Liz Williams <liz.williams@auda.org.au> wrote:
Hello Javier
Just a quick point of clarification…did you want WT5 members to submit comments prior to next week’s call so that a new version of the document could be produced? Not quite sure of the cycle of editing/commenting.
Thanks to the staff for producing a helpful tracking of what we’re all doing.
Liz …. Dr Liz Williams | International Affairs .au Domain Administration Ltd M: +61 436 020 595 | +44 7824 877757 E: liz.williams@auda.org.au www.auda.org.au
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On 31 May 2018, at 6:30 am, Javier Rua <javrua@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear Work Track 5 members, As discussed on the WT5 call today, the co-leaders are pleased to share with you the “working document” that we will be using to collect input from WT5 calls and the email list. You can find a Google Document version here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BRzHr2FxSTYHX1I8F3FHSt6Bo1cvJsKyWX8WZXRU.... Word and PDF extracts are attached.
Please keep in mind the following when reviewing the document, which was produced by staff under the direction of the Work Track co-leaders:
This is work in progress and will continue to evolve as discussions continue. The document is intended to summarize perspectives and key points raised in Work Track discussions and on the Work Track mailing list. The document does not attempt to evaluate the level of consensus in support of the different ideas and positions at this time. Once Work Track leaders hold consensus calls, information about level of consensus will be added. You are encouraged to provide feedback on the document if you feel that an important point raised in the Work Track has been missed or has not been captured sufficiently, or if you want to add new points or arguments not yet discussed. We only ask that you do not suggest deleting points or ideas that were raised by someone other than yourself.
You can comment in the following ways:
Insert a comment in the Google Doc: Highlight the text where you want to insert the comment. In the top menu, click the “add comment” icon (it appears as a speech bubble with a “+” sign). Please make sure your name is included with your comment). Insert a comment in the Word Doc: If you do not use Google Docs, you can insert a comment into the attached Word document and send it to the Work Track 5 mailing list. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. Updated versions of the document will be regularly circulated. Send comments to the mailing list: You can comment by sending an email to the mailing list and including the page and section number of the text you are referencing. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. We look forward to receiving your input.
Kind regards,
Annebeth Lange Olga Cavalli Martin Sutton Javier Rúa-Jovet
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@staff: please consider these suggestions Thanks and regards Jorge Von: Cancio Jorge BAKOM Gesendet: Dienstag, 5. Juni 2018 17:36 An: 'Javier Rua' <javrua@gmail.com> Cc: Martin Sutton <martin@brandregistrygroup.org>; 'Annebeth Lange' <annebeth.lange@norid.no>; 'olgacavalli@gmail.com' <olgacavalli@gmail.com> Betreff: AW: [Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] WT5 working document Estimado Javier y demás co-leads, First of all thanks very much for the consultation and for the opportunity to comment on the working document prepared by staff, which is a good starting point to reflect the debates had in wt5. Please find attached some proposals in track changes and a limited number of comments that seek to more fully reflect the points that have been made during the discussions up to date, including some precisions where I thought this would be helpful. I sincerely hope you may include these changes in future iterations of this working document. Kind regards Jorge P Von: Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5 [mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5-bounces@icann.org] Im Auftrag von Javier Rua Gesendet: Mittwoch, 30. Mai 2018 22:30 An: gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org<mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org> Work Track 5 <gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org<mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org>> Betreff: [Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] WT5 working document Dear Work Track 5 members, As discussed on the WT5 call today, the co-leaders are pleased to share with you the “working document” that we will be using to collect input from WT5 calls and the email list. You can find a Google Document version here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BRzHr2FxSTYHX1I8F3FHSt6Bo1cvJsKyWX8WZXRU.... Word and PDF extracts are attached. Please keep in mind the following when reviewing the document, which was produced by staff under the direction of the Work Track co-leaders: · This is work in progress and will continue to evolve as discussions continue. · The document is intended to summarize perspectives and key points raised in Work Track discussions and on the Work Track mailing list. · The document does not attempt to evaluate the level of consensus in support of the different ideas and positions at this time. Once Work Track leaders hold consensus calls, information about level of consensus will be added. You are encouraged to provide feedback on the document if you feel that an important point raised in the Work Track has been missed or has not been captured sufficiently, or if you want to add new points or arguments not yet discussed. We only ask that you do not suggest deleting points or ideas that were raised by someone other than yourself. You can comment in the following ways: * Insert a comment in the Google Doc: Highlight the text where you want to insert the comment. In the top menu, click the “add comment” icon (it appears as a speech bubble with a “+” sign). Please make sure your name is included with your comment). * Insert a comment in the Word Doc: If you do not use Google Docs, you can insert a comment into the attached Word document and send it to the Work Track 5 mailing list. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. Updated versions of the document will be regularly circulated. * Send comments to the mailing list: You can comment by sending an email to the mailing list and including the page and section number of the text you are referencing. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. We look forward to receiving your input. Kind regards, Annebeth Lange Olga Cavalli Martin Sutton Javier Rúa-Jovet
Dear Javier, Dear WT5 participants: Further to the Initial Report Working Document and the discussion on the WT5 Call yesterday evening, please find attached my comments and suggestions for the text. I attach an Open Office and PDF version. With many thanks for your attention Regards to you all Christopher
El 30 de mayo de 2018 a las 22:30 Javier Rua <javrua@gmail.com> escribió:
Dear Work Track 5 members,
As discussed on the WT5 call today, the co-leaders are pleased to share with you the “working document” that we will be using to collect input from WT5 calls and the email list. You can find a Google Document version here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BRzHr2FxSTYHX1I8F3FHSt6Bo1cvJsKyWX8WZXRU... https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BRzHr2FxSTYHX1I8F3FHSt6Bo1cvJsKyWX8WZXRU... . Word and PDF extracts are attached.
Please keep in mind the following when reviewing the document, which was produced by staff under the direction of the Work Track co-leaders:
* This is work in progress and will continue to evolve as discussions continue. * The document is intended to summarize perspectives and key points raised in Work Track discussions and on the Work Track mailing list. * The document does not attempt to evaluate the level of consensus in support of the different ideas and positions at this time. Once Work Track leaders hold consensus calls, information about level of consensus will be added.
You are encouraged to provide feedback on the document if you feel that an important point raised in the Work Track has been missed or has not been captured sufficiently, or if you want to add new points or arguments not yet discussed. We only ask that you do not suggest deleting points or ideas that were raised by someone other than yourself.
You can comment in the following ways:
* Insert a comment in the Google Doc: Highlight the text where you want to insert the comment. In the top menu, click the “add comment” icon (it appears as a speech bubble with a “+” sign). Please make sure your name is included with your comment). * Insert a comment in the Word Doc: If you do not use Google Docs, you can insert a comment into the attached Word document and send it to the Work Track 5 mailing list. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc. Updated versions of the document will be regularly circulated. * Send comments to the mailing list: You can comment by sending an email to the mailing list and including the page and section number of the text you are referencing. Staff will incorporate these comments into the Google Doc.
We look forward to receiving your input.
Kind regards,
Annebeth Lange Olga Cavalli Martin Sutton Javier Rúa-Jovet
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