All, I've listed below some additional comments and suggestions on Section 1.12. 1. 1.12.1.e, first bullet: Need citation to statement that delegation deadline put into place to avoid squatting and warehousing 2. 1.12.1.f, 3rd sentence: Even if terms aren't precisely defined, report should provide whatever definitions are being relied upon. 3. 1.12.1.f, para 2, 4th & 5th sentences: Confusing to have "use" in quotations. Juxtaposition of sentences 4 and 5 (not clear what use is, but use satisfied) is confusing. 4. 1.12.1.f, para 3, 3rd sentence: Need to explain what constitutes "actively used" - especially given statements in preceding paragraph. 5. 1.12.1.f, para 5, 2nd sentence: It's a stretch to refer to targeted deadlines as SLAs (although I wish they had been). 6. 1.12.1.f, para 6, 3rd sentence: "in relation to this issue" is unclear. Identify the issue (e.g., in relation to X). 7. 1.12.1.f, para 6, 4th sentence: words missing after support - the view that? 8. 1.12.3.b, para 2: need citations to RA provisions 9. 1.12.3.c, 2nd sentence: replace "granular" with "detailed" and/or "more specific" 10. 1.12.3.e, question 1: need to provide basis for referring to application statements as "representations and/or commitments"; also, second-to-last question should be revised to ask commenter to explain why they've identified any specific representations and/or commitments. 11. 1.12.3.e, question 2: Need to ask "How will the proposed mechanisms effectively address these issues"? 12. 1.12.3.f, para 1, 3rd sentence: Base Registry Agreement (for consistency) 13. 1.12.3.f, para 2: revise 4th bullet - Should representations made by the applicant be integrated into the Registry Agreement going forward and, if so, why and how? 14. 1.12.3.f, para 4, 2nd sentence: insert ", non-confidential" between "additional" and "data" Talk to everyone later. K Kristina Rosette Senior Corporate Counsel, IP - Domains rosettek@amazon.com<mailto:rosettek@amazon.com>