Thanks for your input, Elsa! Staff have taken note on the points you raised. I will respond quickly regarding your first point – staff are working with Rafik to map out the interdependencies between improvements. Thanks for pointing out the link between #2 & #3 and we have taken note on that. Good idea to cross reference related improvements -- we can do that after figuring out the interdependencies and apply consistently across documents. Best Regards, Ariel From: Elsa S <elsa.saade@gmail.com> Date: Wednesday, August 7, 2019 at 5:07 PM To: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org> Cc: "gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org" <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT] REMINDER - Final Call: Review Improvement #2 by Wednesday 7 August 2019 Thanks for sharing again Ariel. First comment I have is that I think several parts in the document should take into account our considerations from Recommendation #3 with members and what they need to take into consideration (maybe we could add a referencing footnote to #3’s docs). Also, observers’ status should particularly be double checked in both Recommendation Implementation plans #2 and #3 so that we’re consistent over all. I don’t think we’ve specified their status change process from observer to member in either. Second comment is that I think before ACs in the tables, we should say, “in some cases”. Because the way our current EPDP’s charter is, does not dictate the development of other EPDP charters whereby ACs might not need to be a part of the PDP in certain cases. But I’m open to discuss this further. I’d say this is more of a sentence structure conversation in any case, so no big deal. Thanks again, Elsa — On Wed, Aug 7, 2019 at 7:27 PM Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org<mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org>> wrote: Dear All, This is a gentle reminder that by COB today (Wednesday, 7 August), please provide your final input for Improvement #2 (see document attached). In absence of concerns/objections, staff will coordinate with the Small Team leads to produce a clean version and distribute it by the Finalization Target Date of 12 August. Improvements #2 will then be considered as finalized according to the timeline/implementation plan. Best Regards, Ariel Ariel Xinyue Liang GNSO Policy Support Specialist Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Mobile: +1 310 804 2761 Skype: ariel.liang.icann www.icann.org [icann.org]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.icann.org&d=DwMFaQ&c...> From: GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-pdp3dot0-dt-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, August 1, 2019 at 12:18 AM To: "gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org<mailto:gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org>" <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org<mailto:gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org>> Subject: [GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT] Final Call: Review Improvement #2 by Wednesday 7 August 2019 Dear All, Please find attached for your final review the PDP Team Models document for improvement #2. Note that this version is in redline format so you can review further updates that were in made in response to comments/edits that were received most recently, but note that most of these are for consistency reasons and/or aim to reflect the most recent discussions. Once this document is in its final format and approved by the GNSO Council, the idea would be that a link to it is provided in the charter template to help guide the Council or a DT’s consideration of the appropriate model and characteristics. If you have any concerns, please share these by 7 August at the latest. 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