Hello Flip, Thank you very much for your review and input! Much appreciate it. To facilitate the Small Team’s review and make sure we are working off the same document, I have converted Flip’s word document into Google Doc, which automatically imported all the comments and suggested edits from Flip. I also responded to some of his comments on the Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pIHFupCdXoH3BSgRfu6KbzUm2jt1AQ-_MEk0JeMG... To summarize Flip’s substantive comments (not including editorial ones): * Replace “dispute” with “disagreement” throughout the document; * Add the point that “If one party insists on legal representation, other parties may seek assistance in the proceeding to ensure a level playing field” (page 11); * Note in improvement documents for WG leadership, liaison, and the GNSO Council about their responsibilities in handling 3.7 complaint process; Thank you, Ariel From: Flip Petillion <fpetillion@petillion.law> Date: Friday, November 1, 2019 at 1:58 PM To: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org>, "gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org" <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT] ICANN66 Proposed Agenda & Materials for PDP 3.0 Small Team Meeting & Presentations Dear All, I have taken the time to review the document in detail. I downloaded the text and worked on it on the plane to Montréal. I have limited changes as much as possible. I have added some comments. Not a big deal. Happy to discuss. The most essential change would be the avoidance of the word ‘dispute’. Curious to know what you think. Best regards to all and I am looking forward to see you all in Montréal. Flip Flip Petillion fpetillion@petillion.law +32484652653 www.petillion.law [signature_1731316798][petillion.law]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.petillion.law_&d=DwM...> Attorneys – Advocaten - Avocats From: GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org> Date: Wednesday, 30 October 2019 at 06:54 To: "gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org" <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org> Subject: [GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT] ICANN66 Proposed Agenda & Materials for PDP 3.0 Small Team Meeting & Presentations Dear All, Below, please find the proposed agenda for the PDP 3.0 Small Team working session at ICANN66, on Monday, 4 November at 13:30-15:00 local time: https://66.schedule.icann.org/meetings/1116967 [66.schedule.icann.org]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__66.schedule.icann.org_m...> 1. Welcome and roll call 2. Package 4 Improvements: Finalize the draft proposals (~Flip, Ariel & Julie) a. #9 Provide further guidance for section 3.6 and clarification of section 3.7: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CDwJe7UroRNnou-VGwN6vMCRjVYFyi8RRNlWmtJD... [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_documen...> (new content on pages 23-28) b. #15 Independent Conflict Resolution: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dZxdlhXaGqp2zsSkSqjcjFJtDaUv3VIaNzgZ629z... [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_documen...> 3. Package 3 Improvement: a. #17 Resource reporting for PDP working groups: Initial discussion (~Berry & Rafik) 4. Post ICANN66 work planning 5. AOB In addition, please find the slide deck prepared for PDP 3.0 presentations at ICANN66, including: * GNSO Council Working Session (Sunday, 3 November at 13:20 - 14:00 local time); and/or * GNSO Council Public Session (Wednesday, 6 November at 13:00-15:00 local time) Safe travels all and see you soon in Montreal! Best Regards, Ariel