Re: [GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT] [Ext] Re: ICANN66 Proposed Agenda & Materials for PDP 3.0 Small Team Meeting & Presentations
Hello Flip, Thank you very much for your review and input! Much appreciate it. To facilitate the Small Team’s review and make sure we are working off the same document, I have converted Flip’s word document into Google Doc, which automatically imported all the comments and suggested edits from Flip. I also responded to some of his comments on the Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pIHFupCdXoH3BSgRfu6KbzUm2jt1AQ-_MEk0JeMG... To summarize Flip’s substantive comments (not including editorial ones): * Replace “dispute” with “disagreement” throughout the document; * Add the point that “If one party insists on legal representation, other parties may seek assistance in the proceeding to ensure a level playing field” (page 11); * Note in improvement documents for WG leadership, liaison, and the GNSO Council about their responsibilities in handling 3.7 complaint process; Thank you, Ariel From: Flip Petillion <fpetillion@petillion.law> Date: Friday, November 1, 2019 at 1:58 PM To: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org>, "gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org" <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT] ICANN66 Proposed Agenda & Materials for PDP 3.0 Small Team Meeting & Presentations Dear All, I have taken the time to review the document in detail. I downloaded the text and worked on it on the plane to Montréal. I have limited changes as much as possible. I have added some comments. Not a big deal. Happy to discuss. The most essential change would be the avoidance of the word ‘dispute’. Curious to know what you think. Best regards to all and I am looking forward to see you all in Montréal. Flip Flip Petillion fpetillion@petillion.law +32484652653 www.petillion.law [signature_1731316798][petillion.law]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.petillion.law_&d=DwM...> Attorneys – Advocaten - Avocats From: GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org> Date: Wednesday, 30 October 2019 at 06:54 To: "gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org" <gnso-pdp3dot0-dt@icann.org> Subject: [GNSO-PDP3Dot0-DT] ICANN66 Proposed Agenda & Materials for PDP 3.0 Small Team Meeting & Presentations Dear All, Below, please find the proposed agenda for the PDP 3.0 Small Team working session at ICANN66, on Monday, 4 November at 13:30-15:00 local time: https://66.schedule.icann.org/meetings/1116967 [66.schedule.icann.org]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__66.schedule.icann.org_m...> 1. Welcome and roll call 2. Package 4 Improvements: Finalize the draft proposals (~Flip, Ariel & Julie) a. #9 Provide further guidance for section 3.6 and clarification of section 3.7: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CDwJe7UroRNnou-VGwN6vMCRjVYFyi8RRNlWmtJD... [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_documen...> (new content on pages 23-28) b. #15 Independent Conflict Resolution: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dZxdlhXaGqp2zsSkSqjcjFJtDaUv3VIaNzgZ629z... [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_documen...> 3. Package 3 Improvement: a. #17 Resource reporting for PDP working groups: Initial discussion (~Berry & Rafik) 4. Post ICANN66 work planning 5. AOB In addition, please find the slide deck prepared for PDP 3.0 presentations at ICANN66, including: * GNSO Council Working Session (Sunday, 3 November at 13:20 - 14:00 local time); and/or * GNSO Council Public Session (Wednesday, 6 November at 13:00-15:00 local time) Safe travels all and see you soon in Montreal! Best Regards, Ariel
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Ariel Liang