Dear WG members, Please find attached Part 2 of the overall WG Public Comment Review Tool. Picking up from where Part 1 (WG preliminary recommendations #1-9) left off, this document covers the WG¹s preliminary recommendations #10-15 (following the numbering in the WG¹s Initial Report). The final document Part 3 will cover the remaining preliminary recommendations (save for those that have been taken up by the various Sub-Teams), these being: (1) initial provider actions to relay on receipt of a disclosure request; (2) notification in the event of persistent delivery failure; and (3) recommendations covering de-accreditation. There are also general comments and additional suggestions that do not fit perfectly into any of the recommendations or open question categories, and we will include these in Part 3 of the Tool as well. As a reminder, do note that neither Part 1 (circulated previously) or Part 2 (attached) of the overall WG Public Comment Review Tool includes those comments that are being reviewed preliminarily by the Sub Teams. These are: Sub Team 1 - escalation of relay requests, and open questions on disclosure/publication by non-IP requesters Sub Team 2 Section 1.3.3 (domains associated with online financial transactions relating to commercial activities) Sub Team 3 Annex E (illustrative disclosure framework for IP requesters) In addition, there is a Sub Team 4 that is preparing a possible list of Additional Topics not otherwise specifically covered by comments categorized according to the WG¹s preliminary recommendations/open questions. Please accept our apologies that we were not able to complete the entire Tool by this weekend as we had originally set out to do. We hope that this new Part 2 will nevertheless allow the WG to proceed in good time with its review of the community input received. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong@icann.org