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Revised Subteam 3 Summary with Overview
by Darcy Southwell Sept. 8, 2015

Sept. 8, 2015

Hi, all! In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the beginning. I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what I¹ve done. I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate overview. I also made some minor revisions to Section V (³Comments that did not fit neatly into any of the above categories²) that I realized after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit more sense. Again, I¹ve redlined the changes so you can easily see what changed. Please let me know if there are any questions. Thanks, Darcy

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Revised Subteam 3 Summary with Overview
by Holly Raiche Aug. 27, 2015

Aug. 27, 2015

Folks Just to elaborate on what I was trying to say. Some in this group (and others in the larger WG) hold the view that support for ‘verifiable evidence’ amounts to support for Annex E. Others believe that the term verifiable evidence calls for a higher standard of evidence than is required in Annex E. The significance of this second view is that it is in a separate category to those whose view is that ‘reveal’ should only occur after a court order or some legal judgment on a request (court order, subpoena etc). That is not making a judgment on either of the views - it is trying to explain both in more detail. Holly On 28 Aug 2015, at 12:56 am, Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler(a)riaa.com> wrote: > Kathy – my comment about going backwards was with respect to your email, not Holly’s. I apologize for the confusion. With respect to your earlier email, we agreed to the categories b/c we wanted to capture the nuance in the comments. You are suggesting our thinking has changed from that. I don’t think that is true, and I think it better to provide that nuance to the larger working group. > > Moreover, the standard of evidence for Annex E has been noted as an issue for discussion. If Holly thinks we need to amplify the different views on the standard of evidence, I think that is fine, and welcome her suggestion. But it is not fine to suggest that any particular interpretation of the comments beyond their plain meeting is necessarily accurate, or it is what a commenter intended. > > I view the goal of the subteam to capture the substance of the comments in a neutral manner, and note where there is divergence or questions about the comments that the subteam has about the comments or about how to interpret the comments. It is not our place at this stage to advocate for a particular view. I think that is for the larger working group discussion. > > From: Kathy Kleiman [mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com] > Sent: Thursday, August 27, 2015 9:17 AM > To: Victoria Sheckler; Holly Raiche > Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org > Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Revised Subteam 3 Summary with Overview > > With respect, I don't think we are going backwards. I think Holly has really hit at the nub of the issue now in front of us (not when we started, but now, after we have spent so much time with the comments). It is what standard of evidence is needed for Annex E, if we keep Annex E? > > I think Holly's reasoning below makes sense and I would welcome her drafting of a sentence or two to reflect it. > > Best, > Kathy > : > I feel like we are going backwards > > Sent from my iPad > > On Aug 26, 2015, at 11:16 PM, Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net> wrote: > > I won’t worry at this stage. > > My concern is with the following > > . Some on the subteam viewed these comments as supporting Annex E because of the plain meaning of the text and because Annex E calls for verifiable evidence, while others on the subteam interpret ‘verifiable evidence’ as requiring a court order and therefore not in support of Annex E.[DS1] > > I am not sure that the ‘plain meaning’ of ‘verifiable evidence’ is support for Annex E - but if that is the take away for some, okay. I think I am in the ‘others’ camp and that position more complex. While ‘verifiable evidence’ suggests a very high standard of evidence, it does not imply a court order (or other legal process). As I said in an earlier comment at some point, the word verifiable does not imply that the evidence has been tested through a legal process; it suggests instead that the evidence is credible/provable enough so that, in a legal process, it would withstand legal scrutiny - but hasn’t so far. The implication therefore, is that this test is apart from the court/legal process route - implying something apart from that. James Bladel’s words were that he was thinking of provable in the context of the RAA - not a legal process, but a very high standard of credibility. > > I realise that may seem like nitpicking, but it opens doors for fort her work in a way that Darcy’s first paragraphs don’t. > > So if everyone is happy with my slightly different summation, I’ll draft a sentence or two > > Holly > > > > Since the subteam can’t agree on the meaning of “verifiable evidence” as used in the petition, it doesn’t seem we should include this in the support for section. I’ve moved it here to indicate the need for further interpretation by the PPSAI WG. > > > > On 27 Aug 2015, at 11:45 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com> wrote: > > > Sorry Holly, I must have missed the email with your edits. If you could kindly add them into the text, that would be great! > RE: the last call, I was referring to the Subteam 3 call... about a week ago, I think. > > To Todd: I'll be back in touch later tonight. In the midst of packing for a trip to see my parents before the summer is over... > > Best, > Kathy > > : > Hi Kathy > > Great job. > > First - I did suggest some changes to the first paragraph - I gather you aren’t happy with them? > > Next - you refer to the ‘last call’. Is that the full PPSAI or one just for Subteam 3 > Thanks > Holly > On 27 Aug 2015, at 7:16 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com> wrote: > > > Hi All, > Tx to Darcy for the Overview work. I've taken her draft and added to it my work on Section III as promised on the last call. I added more quotes from commenters seeking court orders and the use of existing legal due process mechanisms prior to disclosure of proxied data. There was a wide array of comments on this issue, including from ISPs, individuals, organizations, and companies. > > I used Darcy's version as the base. Both her edits (Overview) and my edits (Section III) are shown in "track changes." > > Best, > Kathy > > : > Hi, all! > In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the beginning. I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what I’ve done. I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate overview. > > I also made some minor revisions to Section V (“Comments that did not fit neatly into any of the above categories”) that I realized after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit more sense. Again, I’ve redlined the changes so you can easily see what changed. > > Please let me know if there are any questions. > > Thanks, > Darcy > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list > Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org > https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 > > <Summary of Annex E comments - 10 August - consolidated (Darcy's overview added 2015-08-21)(Kathy's Section III added).doc>_______________________________________________ > Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list > Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org > https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list > Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org > https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Revised Subteam 3 Summary with Overview
by Kathy Kleiman Aug. 27, 2015

Aug. 27, 2015

With respect, I don't think we are going backwards. I think Holly has really hit at the nub of the issue now in front of us (not when we started, but now, after we have spent so much time with the comments). It is what standard of evidence is needed for Annex E, if we keep Annex E? I think Holly's reasoning below makes sense and I would welcome her drafting of a sentence or two to reflect it. Best, Kathy : > I feel like we are going backwards > > Sent from my iPad > > On Aug 26, 2015, at 11:16 PM, Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net > <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net>> wrote: > >> I won’t worry at this stage. >> >> My concern is with the following >> >> . Some on the subteam viewed these comments as supporting Annex E >> because of the plain meaning of the text and because Annex E calls >> for verifiable evidence, while others on the subteam interpret >> ‘verifiable evidence’ as requiring a court orderand therefore not in >> support of Annex E.[DS1] <#_msocom_1> >> >> I am not sure that the ‘plain meaning’ of ‘verifiable evidence’ is >> support for Annex E - but if that is the take away for some, okay. I >> think I am in the ‘others’ camp and that position more complex. >> While ‘verifiable evidence’ suggests a very high standard of >> evidence, it does not imply a court order (or other legal process). >> As I said in an earlier comment at some point, the word verifiable >> does not imply that the evidence has been tested through a legal >> process; it suggests instead that the evidence is credible/provable >> enough so that, in a legal process, it would withstand legal scrutiny >> - but hasn’t so far. The implication therefore, is that this test is >> apart from the court/legal process route - implying something apart >> from that. James Bladel’s words were that he was thinking of >> provable in the context of the RAA - not a legal process, but a very >> high standard of credibility. >> >> I realise that may seem like nitpicking, but it opens doors for fort >> her work in a way that Darcy’s first paragraphs don’t. >> >> So if everyone is happy with my slightly different summation, I’ll >> draft a sentence or two >> >> Holly >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> >> [DS1] <#_msoanchor_1> >> >> Since the subteam can’t agree on the meaning of “verifiable evidence” >> as used in the petition, it doesn’t seem we should include this in >> the support for section. I’ve moved it here to indicate the need for >> further interpretation by the PPSAI WG. >> >> >> >> On 27 Aug 2015, at 11:45 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >> <mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com>> wrote: >> >>> Sorry Holly, I must have missed the email with your edits. If you >>> could kindly add them into the text, that would be great! >>> RE: the last call, I was referring to the Subteam 3 call... about a >>> week ago, I think. >>> >>> To Todd: I'll be back in touch later tonight. In the midst of >>> packing for a trip to see my parents before the summer is over... >>> >>> Best, >>> Kathy >>> >>> : >>>> Hi Kathy >>>> >>>> Great job. >>>> >>>> First - I did suggest some changes to the first paragraph - I >>>> gather you aren’t happy with them? >>>> >>>> Next - you refer to the ‘last call’. Is that the full PPSAI or one >>>> just for Subteam 3 >>>> Thanks >>>> Holly >>>> On 27 Aug 2015, at 7:16 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>> <mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com>> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Hi All, >>>>> Tx to Darcy for the Overview work. I've taken her draft and added >>>>> to it my work on Section III as promised on the last call. I added >>>>> more quotes from commenters seeking court orders and the use of >>>>> existing legal due process mechanisms prior to disclosure of >>>>> proxied data. There was a wide array of comments on this issue, >>>>> including from ISPs, individuals, organizations, and companies. >>>>> >>>>> I used Darcy's version as the base. Both her edits (Overview) and >>>>> my edits (Section III) are shown in "track changes." >>>>> >>>>> Best, >>>>> Kathy >>>>> >>>>> : >>>>>> Hi, all! >>>>>> In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an >>>>>> updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the >>>>>> beginning. I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what >>>>>> I’ve done. I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate >>>>>> overview. >>>>>> >>>>>> I also made some minor revisions to Section V (“Comments that did >>>>>> not fit neatly into any of the above categories”) that I realized >>>>>> after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit >>>>>> more sense. Again, I’ve redlined the changes so you can easily >>>>>> see what changed. >>>>>> >>>>>> Please let me know if there are any questions. >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks, >>>>>> Darcy >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>> >>>>> <Summary of Annex E comments - 10 August - consolidated (Darcy's >>>>> overview added 2015-08-21)(Kathy's Section III >>>>> added).doc>_______________________________________________ >>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>> >>> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Revised Subteam 3 Summary with Overview
by Sara Bockey Aug. 23, 2015

Aug. 23, 2015

Darcy, This looks great. Thank you for your efforts. I’ve been working on some edits/revisions as well and hope to forward them to the list by tomorrow. Best, Sara From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Darcy Southwell Date: Friday, August 21, 2015 at 2:44 PM To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Revised Subteam 3 Summary with Overview Hi, all! In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the beginning. I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what I’ve done. I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate overview. I also made some minor revisions to Section V (“Comments that did not fit neatly into any of the above categories”) that I realized after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit more sense. Again, I’ve redlined the changes so you can easily see what changed. Please let me know if there are any questions. Thanks, Darcy

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MP3 PPSAI WG SubTeam3 - Tuesday 18 August 2015 at 1500 UTC
by Nathalie Peregrine Aug. 19, 2015

Aug. 19, 2015

Dear All, Please find below the attendance and MP3 recording for the Privacy and Proxy Services Accreditation Issues PDP SubTeam 3 call held on Tuesday, 18 August 2015 at 15:00 UTC. Transcript will follow upon receipt. MP3: https://icann.box.com/shared/static/zfjzi6pv10ynirslwrw76pmlkz4nx60s.mp3<http://mailer.samanage.com/wf/click?upn=zZ8xDDIU4PY795Cika7Nmy-2FNugFnAwo9a…> Attendees: Philip Corwin Todd Williams Darcy Southwell Vicky Sheckler Sara Bockey Kathy Kleiman Stephanie Perrin Apology: Holly Raiche ICANN staff: Mary Wong Nathalie Peregrine Thank you. Kind regards, Nathalie ------------------------------- Adobe Connect chat transcript for Tuesday 18 August 2015 Mary Wong: Transferring now for Sub Team 3 stephanie Perrin: If I can hear am I in the correct place for subgroup 3? Nathalie Peregrine: yes Kathy: Does everyone agree that we should provide alternatives? alternative language? Sara Bockey: Yes, I think that would be a good idea. Nathalie Peregrine: Please remember to say your names before speaking, for the transcript Philip Corwin: If we can reach any consensus on Annex E language then yes we should go beyond just analyzing the comments. Let's not prejudge our output now. stephanie Perrin: That sounds like a plan Mary.... Kathy: Right - I would be comfortable first with our finalizing our summary before we move on to analysis. Sara Bockey: @Kathy +1 Kathy: So here's the recommendation: clarifying and crystalizing the comments. stephanie Perrin: +1 Kathy stephanie Perrin: This was the point I made in the previous call. "to the extent the document can be changed"....we are in the midst of a discussion, of course it can change. Sara Bockey: I agree with Kathy that the summary does read lopsided, but I also think that working thru some of the comments as Todd suggested and revising based on that review could provide a clearer view of the comments and in the end hhave the effect of reworking the summary. Kathy: @Todd: yes Darcy Southwell: Agree with Sara Kathy: That is what I was proposing Sara Bockey: my computer crashed...so I missed the last few mins Sara Bockey: I hear that I've been volunteered for something...please restate what it is that you would like me to do. sorry. Missed it the first time. Sara Bockey: ok, thanks. I can help with that. Darcy Southwell: Will do. Darcy Southwell: Yes Sara Bockey: yes Philip Corwin: Sounds good Sara Bockey: thank you everyone

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PPSAI Subteam 3 Transcription 18 August 2015
by Nathalie Peregrine Aug. 18, 2015

Aug. 18, 2015

Dear all, Please find attached the transcription of the PPSAI Subteam 3 call held today on the 18 August 2015 Kind regards Nathalie

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PPSAI Sub Team 3 call on Tuesday 18 August
by Mary Wong Aug. 17, 2015

Aug. 17, 2015

Dear Sub Team 2 members, We would like to schedule the proposed Sub Team all for TOMORROW, Tuesday 18 August, immediately followingthe full WG call. Please let us know as soon as possible if ou are NOT able to stay on after the WG call to continue with the Sub Team call. GNSO Secretariat is it possible for us to just stay on the same call-in line after the WG call concludes, but staring a new recording and transcript? Please let me know tanks! Agenda-wise, we can walk through the follow-up questins I posted last week, including Holly¹s comments, if that sounds feasible and appropriate. However, please let me know if you have other suggestions! Thanks and cheers Mar Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation or Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> Date: Thursday, August 13, 2015 at 17:18 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] P.S. Re: Follow up from WG call on Tuesday > Thanks Mary. Call to discuss next steps sounds good to me. I could do > immediately following the WG call next Tuesday, or am happy to complete a > Doodle poll. > > TW. > > > From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On > Behalf Of Mary Wong > Sent: Thursday, August 13, 2015 4:14 PM > Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org > Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] P.S. Re: Follow up from WG call on Tuesday > > > SORRY not 1 September but 8 September as the ³due date² for deliverables > from this Sub Team 3; 1 September is the deadline for Sub Team 2! > > > Cheers, and don¹t panic, > > Mary > > > > From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong > <mary.wong(a)icann.org> > Date: Thursday, August 13, 2015 at 16:07 > Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> > Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Follow up from WG call on Tuesday > > >> >> Dear Sub Team 3 members, >> >> >> >> I¹m writing to ask how you would like to proceed with your work in terms of >> finalizing your analysis of the comments and developing recommendations for >> the Working Group. The current Work Plan has the 1 September meeting as when >> those recommendations should be presented to the WG (though obviously things >> can be moved around depending on the progress made by each Sub Team). >> >> >> >> From the WG discussion on the call, the following questions may merit further >> deliberation: >> >> >> >> -Does "verifiable evidence" mean more (i.e. a higher standard) than what is >> currently in Annex E? >> >> -The Save Domain Privacy petition drafters did not intend for detailed >> parsing as between ³verified² and ³verifiable²; their context was what's in >> the RAA, which basically means not just taking the word of the requester "as >> is". In view of this explanation, should the Sub Team, in dealing with the >> SDP petition (not the additional comments sent in along with it) use the >> plain meaning of "verifiable" (which may, but does not necessarily mean only, >> a court order) or some other meaning? >> >> -What approach does the Sub Team wish to take in relation to the additional >> comments sent in by signatories to the Save Domain Privacy petition? >> >> -Since requiring a court order may not always be practical and certain >> providers already have a practice where they disclose upon what they judge to >> be sufficient evidence, how (if at all) should this factor into the Sub >> Team¹s recommendations? >> >> >> >> There are of course also substantive comments that the team included in its >> summary that were not as fully discussed on the WG call this week. >> >> >> >> Would a Sub Team call to work through those comments and the questions above >> be helpful? I can send around a Doodle poll for early next week if so, unless >> you would like to have a call immediately following the WG meeting on Tuesday >> 18 August next week? >> >> >> >> Thanks and cheers >> >> Mary >> >> >> >> Mary Wong >> >> Senior Policy Director >> >> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >> >> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >> >> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org >> >> >> >> >> >> >> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong >> <mary.wong(a)icann.org> >> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 21:00 >> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >> >>> >>> Thanks much, Vicky and everyone I will accept all changes in this document >>> and send it out to the WG. If it¹s all right with you, I¹ll see if I can add >>> some brief descriptive sub-headings to the various sections. As noted >>> previously, when sending it out I¹ll be sure to mention that this is still a >>> draft document and certain aspects continue to be the subject of discussion >>> amongst the Sub Team. >>> >>> >>> Cheers >>> >>> Mary >>> >>> >>> >>> Mary Wong >>> >>> Senior Policy Director >>> >>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>> >>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>> >>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> From: Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler(a)riaa.com> >>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 20:39 >>> To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net>, "Williams, Todd" >>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>> Cc: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" >>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> >>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> >>>> >>>> Please see attached. I¹ve tried to incorporate Todd¹s suggestions. I¹ve >>>> also deleted stuff that seemed repetitive with other noted comments or >>>> comment descriptions and/or provide a more neutral description of the >>>> criticisms where applicable. Please note this is preliminary, and I may >>>> have further comments down the line. - V >>>> >>>> >>>> From: Holly Raiche [mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net] >>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 8:02 PM >>>> To: Williams, Todd >>>> Cc: Victoria Sheckler; Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> Folks >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> I think I am repeating myself here, but we are getting into dangerous >>>> territory if we put ourselves in the place of the signatories and/or >>>> drafters to decide what they meant by verifiable evidence¹. Personally, I >>>> think it means something one would be happy to place before a court, (but >>>> clearly PRIOR to the outcome of a judicial process) but that is just me. >>>> Arguably, the context of the term could agree with my interpretation - or >>>> something akin to a legal judgment of some sort. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> So yes, we need to agree to disagree. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> And I think it is a sensible suggestion to have two or three of us explain >>>> that we haven¹t reached agreement on the implications of the use of the >>>> term. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Holly >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> On 11 Aug 2015, at 8:38 am, Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>>> Thanks Vicky. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> For everybody: the more I¹ve thought about it, the more I¹ve come to the >>>>> conclusion that we¹re probably not going to resolve our differences on how >>>>> to interpret ³verifiable evidence² before 10:00 AM tomorrow. So in the >>>>> interest of being able to circulate something to the WG before our call, I >>>>> propose that the only reference to the SDP submissions in our document be >>>>> something like: >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> We also note that the Save Domain Privacy petition which had 10,042 >>>>> signatories and also included [x] number of comments argued that >>>>> ³privacy providers should not be forced to reveal my private information >>>>> without verifiable evidence of wrongdoing.² We as a sub-team could not >>>>> agree on how to interpret ³verifiable evidence,² and will leave that >>>>> discussion to the larger WG. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> And then Kathy, Sara, and I can each just take a little bit of time on the >>>>> call tomorrow to explain our respective suggested interpretations of >>>>> ³verifiable evidence² to the larger WG and leave it to them. What does >>>>> everybody think of that? >>>>> >>>>> TW. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: Victoria Sheckler [mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com >>>>> <mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com> ] >>>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 5:01 PM >>>>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org >>>>> <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Please wait for my comments before distributing anything to the broader >>>>> group. I will send them tonight. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >>>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:50 PM >>>>> To: Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Thanks Mary. No, I¹m not putting my name on this. Nobody has responded >>>>> to the questions that I raised earlier today (see attached). And we still >>>>> don¹t have Vicky¹s comments. Just to reiterate my problems with the >>>>> attached: >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> · The attached says that our sub-team is debating whether >>>>> ³verifiable evidence of wrongdoing² either means court order or ³a higher >>>>> standard of evidence and proof in Annex E (which is not currently a >>>>> ³verifiable evidence² standard) before disclosure.² But that is not an >>>>> accurate representation of our internal debate, as I¹ve outlined in the >>>>> attached emails. I¹m fine telling the WG that we can¹t decide how to >>>>> interpret ³verifiable evidence² (though I still don¹t understand how to >>>>> interpret ³verifiable evidence² to mean ³court order²). But if we do so, >>>>> we at least have to accurately reflect what the competing arguments are. >>>>> >>>>> · I don¹t understand the statement that ³the sub-team noted but has >>>>> not yet evaluated the 11,000 comments received from commenters arriving >>>>> from the Respect Our Privacy website. These commenters, each >>>>> individually, urged a rejection of Annex E in favor of due process as >>>>> defined by judicial process² and that ³The sub-team is continuing to >>>>> review and weigh these comments.² What does that mean? I thought from >>>>> the attached email exchange that we were adding a bullet point to Category >>>>> Two (after the bullet point about Key Systems) about those comments. Why >>>>> are we now saying that we haven¹t evaluated them and that we¹ll continue >>>>> to review and weigh them? What does that mean? >>>>> >>>>> · I don¹t understand the long inclusion of arguments from Jeff >>>>> Wheelhouse, Simon Kissane, ICA, EasyDNS, Endurance, and Donuts. To be >>>>> precise: I¹m fine if this sub-team wants to provide argumentation in the >>>>> document. But if we¹re going to do that, then we need to do it fairly, to >>>>> give the WG an accurate representation. So I¹ll go back through my >>>>> section and include the argumentation from INTA, MPAA, RIAA, Turner, etc., >>>>> which I intentionally left out of my draft, because I was trying to keep >>>>> this document as neutral as possible (because that was how I viewed the >>>>> objective of our sub-team: to fairly report back to the larger WG). >>>>> Obviously, to the extent that the comments I analyzed presented arguments >>>>> on two sides of a question (e.g., why the cost-recovery provision in >>>>> Section I(B)(iii) should stay or go), then I tried to fairly and >>>>> succinctly summarize those arguments on both sides, for the benefit of the >>>>> WG. But I think the only other argumentation that I included was the one >>>>> sentence from individual commenter Mike Fewings. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Todd >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >>>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:00 PM >>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, Sara! If it¹s all right with everyone, I¹ll send this version >>>>> around to the WG, noting that it is still a draft under discussion by the >>>>> Sub Team and as such there may be further updates on the call tomorrow >>>>> (bearing in mind that Vicky has indicated she may have some comments >>>>> tonight). Additionally, I can also note that some of the language in the >>>>> draft is also still under discussion by the Sub Team, and some of the >>>>> issues the Sub Team is discussing will be highlighted during the update to >>>>> the WG. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Let me know if you would prefer another approach. Thanks! >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Cheers >>>>> >>>>> Mary >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Mary Wong >>>>> >>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>> >>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>> >>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>> >>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 13:32 >>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary, >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Attached is the summary document that now includes my edits. Since it >>>>>> appears that we are now addressing Save Domain Privacy and Respect Our >>>>>> Privacy in separate paragraphs/sections of this document, I have removed >>>>>> references to both petitions from other sections so that there is no >>>>>> confusion. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks, >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Sara >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: Mary Wong >>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM >>>>>> To: Sara Bockey, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi Sara sorry, I haven¹t yet combined your document with Kathy¹s; >>>>>> please feel free to use whichever works best for you (e.g. dropping your >>>>>> document, with edits, into Kathy¹s, or just editing yours and sending it >>>>>> back to me). I attach both for your convenience. If I¹ve missed out a >>>>>> version that came in after these, please, everyone, let me know! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks so much! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Cheers >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 12:31 >>>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I¹m having a hard time locating the latest document. Do we have all the >>>>>>> ³bucket² comments in one document yet? If so, can someone circulate it? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:02 AM >>>>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Todd, yes, certainly thank you! Actually, my second suggestion was >>>>>>> really meant to have us just include a description of the 4 categories >>>>>>> (buckets) somewhere in the document, preferably early on. I agree that >>>>>>> any conclusion about the petition comments shouldn¹t be included unless >>>>>>> the Sub Team has agreed on it. As has been the case elsewhere, it may >>>>>>> also be possible to ³square bracket² or otherwise highlight the >>>>>>> options/differences under consideration, should that be a more >>>>>>> appropriate alternative before tomorrow. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 11:54 >>>>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Mary. To your last point: I think the question of whether the >>>>>>> 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition support or >>>>>>> oppose the basic premise of Annex E is what we¹re debating. So no, we >>>>>>> shouldn¹t use that sentence until we¹ve decided that point. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I think we¹ve still got some good emails going on these open questions. >>>>>>> But we shouldn¹t hold up your sending out the agenda. Could you send >>>>>>> out the agenda noting that our sub-team will be presenting, but then >>>>>>> circulate our final document later once it¹s done (but before tomorrow >>>>>>> morning obviously)? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >>>>>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 11:38 AM >>>>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Dear all, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> As I¹m preparing to send out the agenda for the WG call tomorrow, along >>>>>>> with associated documents, I¹m trying to consolidate Kathy¹s edited >>>>>>> document with Sara¹s review that wasn¹t in Kathy¹s version. I also >>>>>>> thought to offer the following suggested edit to the language around >>>>>>> ³verifiable evidence² for your consideration: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "The sub-team is working to better understand the meaning of ³verifiable >>>>>>> evidence of wrongdoing² and whether these commenters intended for this >>>>>>> wording to seek a different or more specific standard for >>>>>>> revealdisclosure, namelysuch as a court order in which the court >>>>>>> ³verifies² the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial >>>>>>> finding, or alternatively, whether the commenters seek a higher standard >>>>>>> of evidence and proof in Annex E (which isdoes not currently specify >>>>>>> what is a ³verifiable evidence² standard) before disclosure. In this >>>>>>> regard the sub-team notes that many signatories to the petition also >>>>>>> added specific comments that may refer to this standard. These comments >>>>>>> are currently under review." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The other suggestion I had was to reorganize the document slightly, to >>>>>>> make it clearer what the ³buckets² are. In this regard, I suggest moving >>>>>>> up the following summary from Sara to where Kathy¹s insertions began >>>>>>> (after the specific suggestions for Annex E and before Darcy¹s >>>>>>> additions): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "Our sub-team also reviewed and analyzed 39 comments including one >>>>>>> with 10,000+ signatures from the Respect Our Privacy petition and one >>>>>>> with 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition that >>>>>>> oppose the basic premise of Annex E. The comments fell into 1 or 4 >>>>>>> categories: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 1 - No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 2 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 3 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 4 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases >>>>>>> of abuse." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please let me know if you have any comments or objections to the above. >>>>>>> Thank you! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 10:13 >>>>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, Kathy >>>>>>> Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, >>>>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Kathy. My thoughts on the attached: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · My only point on the ³contested vs. uncontested² language was to >>>>>>> distinguish those suggested changes to Annex E for which we received >>>>>>> comments on both sides of a question vs. those suggested changes for >>>>>>> which we did not. Mainly it was just to distinguish the final two >>>>>>> paragraphs conceptually. But your changes serve that same purpose well. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · I don¹t understand why we would include ³while seeking >>>>>>> significantly higher standards for disclosure and options to disclosure² >>>>>>> in the third paragraph. We get to what changes the various comments >>>>>>> suggested (including which comments asked for higher disclosure >>>>>>> standards, and which asked for lower) later in the document. That third >>>>>>> paragraph is just noting which comments supported certain sections of >>>>>>> Annex E. Plus I¹m not sure that all of the comments mentioned in that >>>>>>> third paragraph did in fact seek ³significantly higher standards for >>>>>>> disclosure.² >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Isn¹t the analysis of the 11,000 comments from Respect our >>>>>>> Privacy contained in Sara and Holly¹s section (see attached)? Why would >>>>>>> we reference them twice? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Darcy¹s analysis of the ³miscellaneous² bucket looks great. >>>>>>> Many thanks Darcy in many ways I think you took the most difficult >>>>>>> part, because sometimes it¹s hard to make sense of how exactly those >>>>>>> comments were relevant! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally: for the reasons I¹ve already outlined in the attached email, I >>>>>>> don¹t understand why we would say that the process outlined in Annex E >>>>>>> ³is not currently a verifiable evidence standard.² As I mentioned >>>>>>> before, the "evidence" that Annex E requires, as outlined in Sections >>>>>>> II(A), (B), and (C), is extensive. So I don¹t see any argument why >>>>>>> Annex E wouldn¹t meet the ³evidence² part of ³verifiable evidence.² >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> So I think what we¹re really trying to interpret is ³verifiable.² And >>>>>>> Kathy in the attached has offered the interpretation that ³verifiable² >>>>>>> means ³a court order in which the court verifies¹ the abuse or >>>>>>> infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding.² But if that was >>>>>>> the correct interpretation, wouldn¹t the word be ³verified² instead of >>>>>>> ³verifiable²? If a court has issued an order, then it has already done >>>>>>> the verifying. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Rather, I think the basic plain meaning of ³verifiable² and hence the >>>>>>> meaning that we should assume the 10,000+ supporters signed on to is >>>>>>> simply ³able to be checked or proved.² So it seems much simpler to read >>>>>>> ³verifiable² to support the portions of Sections III(A), (B), and (C) of >>>>>>> Annex E that give P/P Providers the ability to verify the evidence >>>>>>> submitted by a Requester by notifying the P/P Customer of the complaint, >>>>>>> reviewing the P/P Customer¹s response, and then responding to the >>>>>>> Requester with either disclosure or its reasons for refusing to disclose >>>>>>> which reasons may come from either the Customer under Section >>>>>>> III(C)(ii), or from the P/P Provider¹s own investigation under Section >>>>>>> III(C)(iii). In other words, the most plausible reading of ³verifiable² >>>>>>> is that it simply means that it is not enough for the Requester to >>>>>>> provide any evidence and then disclosure automatically follows. Rather, >>>>>>> the evidence must be capable of being verified. Which is what Section >>>>>>> III provides. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> ] >>>>>>> Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 7:08 PM >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >; Williams, Todd >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; >>>>>>> gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks everyone, that is a lot of work and a document that will clearly >>>>>>> help advance the WG¹s progress quite a bit! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Kathy can I confirm that the document you edited is Darcy¹s update to >>>>>>> Todd¹s last version, and so does not include what was added/sent by >>>>>>> Sara? I¹m trying to keep all the drafts clear and ordered, and that¹s >>>>>>> what it looks like to me. If that¹s the case, I will add Sara¹s report >>>>>>> to Kathy¹s document (unless there are further changes between now and >>>>>>> the WG call on Tuesday). I¹ll then upload the consolidated draft >>>>>>> document and have that ready for the WG at the Tuesday meeting. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> All it seems to me that the question as to where the comments relating >>>>>>> to ³verifiable evidence² should fit is a question that you may wish to >>>>>>> bring back to the WG on Tuesday, if there is still no agreement amongst >>>>>>> yourselves by then. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally two minor suggested changes, both to do with numbers: first, >>>>>>> I¹d suggest that instead of saying 10,042 comments came with the Save >>>>>>> Domain Privacy petition we should say that the petition had 10,042 >>>>>>> signatories. Secondly, I suggest adding the word ³approximately² to the >>>>>>> 11,000 Respect Your Privacy comments. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I hope this helps, and thank you all again. Following the WG call on >>>>>>> Tuesday, please let me know how you would like to proceed and if there >>>>>>> is a need for the Sub Team to get together for a call to discuss its >>>>>>> final recommendations to the WG (due in about 2-3 weeks from this >>>>>>> Tuesday, according to the current WG Work Plan). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Sunday, August 9, 2015 at 18:40 >>>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Todd and All, >>>>>>> Nice job! I reviewed the entire document and attached is my crack at our >>>>>>> summary. I think it includes everyone additions and edits to date (but >>>>>>> please check!). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I've lost track of who drafted what sections, but I think we are moving >>>>>>> in the right direction. Some really good work has been done. I made one >>>>>>> small change and two bigger ones and few general edits. The small change >>>>>>> is removing the reference to contested and uncontested edits since I am >>>>>>> not sure what an uncontested edit and whether commenters would have >>>>>>> contested it if they knew what the proposed edit would be. >>>>>>> (Unfortunately, since our "Reply Comment" period was removed by ICANN, >>>>>>> we don't have this important reply time to review others edits and >>>>>>> support or contest them.). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I also added in two short paragraphs. The first one describes the Save >>>>>>> Domains Privacy comments, the petition language, and the discussion now >>>>>>> in place in our sub-team over the meaning of these comments. Perhaps >>>>>>> others in the WG can help us shed light on the questions being raised in >>>>>>> our sub-team. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second paragraph summarizes the 11,000 Respect Our Privacy comments. >>>>>>> They told us that "No one's personal information should be revealed >>>>>>> without a court order," and of course, we should reflect them in our >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On my machine, my redlines appear in red, and the prior editor's >>>>>>> redlines (for the paragraphs at the end starting "Finally, our sub-team >>>>>>> reviewed and analyzed 21 miscellaneous comments...") appear in grey. I >>>>>>> hope these redlines are clear for you too. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and enjoy the rest of the weekend, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Kathy: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Attached is my first crack at our portion of the summary (on the Bucket >>>>>>> Two comments). Let me know if you have any suggested edits, additions, >>>>>>> subtractions, etc. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Also, I¹ve copied the entire sub-team mailing list on this email, for >>>>>>> two reasons: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) So that there is a transparent public record of any >>>>>>> back-and-forth red-lining of the document that we may do; and >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) So that Sara and Holly for Bucket One, and Darcy for our >>>>>>> miscellaneous bucket, can see what I envision for our summary report to >>>>>>> the WG. If you all want to add your summaries to this one to make it >>>>>>> consistent in terms of formatting, etc., feel free. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I had one thought Sara and Holly for Bucket One (which came to me as I >>>>>>> was conceptually dividing our Bucket Two comments into general support, >>>>>>> specific support, suggested changes by addition, suggested edits >>>>>>> uncontested, suggested edits contested): it may be helpful for the WG if >>>>>>> we divide our Bucket One comments into categories along a spectrum. As >>>>>>> I envision it (in order along the spectrum): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. I >>>>>>> would put the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² comments here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP). E.g., I think the Google comment would >>>>>>> go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of >>>>>>> abuse. E.g., I think the ICA and EasyDNS comments would go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> For the WG¹s sake, we may also want to distinguish between those Bucket >>>>>>> One comments that couched their discussion of disclosure/publication in >>>>>>> terms of what P/P Providers ought to be required to do (or not required >>>>>>> to do) in response to external third-party disclosure requests such as >>>>>>> from IP owners or LEA (e.g., the Google and Key Systems comments) vs. >>>>>>> those Bucket One comments that simply said ³no publication/disclosure >>>>>>> absent a court order² without distinguishing b/w whether the impetus for >>>>>>> the disclosure was an external third-party request or the P/P Provider¹s >>>>>>> own desire to disclose/publish (e.g., the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> comments). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> TW. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:06 AM >>>>>>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> ; Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> ; >>>>>>> gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Whoops, I left out Jawala at the bottom, who should go in bucket two. >>>>>>> Sorry. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:01 AM >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Yes, thanks Mary. Of the highlighted additions in the attached, I¹ve >>>>>>> added the comments from Stefan Grunder, Reagan Lynch, Reid Baker, and >>>>>>> the Save Domain Privacy petitioners to the second bucket that Kathy and >>>>>>> I are reviewing/summarizing (accept premise of Annex E, but with >>>>>>> changes). I think the highlighted comments from Dan M, Simon Kissane, >>>>>>> Adam Creighton, Jason Weinberg, J Wilson, Dylan Henderson, M.B., and the >>>>>>> Respect our Privacy submissions should go in the first bucket that Holly >>>>>>> and Sara are reviewing/summarizing (reject premise of Annex E). Thanks. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 6:47 PM >>>>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Tx Mary! >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks again, Todd, Kathy, Holly and everyone this is just a note to >>>>>>> follow up on one portion of the discussion during the WG call earlier >>>>>>> today. I¹ll be going through the current WG Public Comment Review Tool >>>>>>> (Part 1, covering the WG¹s preliminary recommendations #1 through #9) to >>>>>>> pick out those additional comments that, though ³attached² to a >>>>>>> different recommendation or question, is actually more directly relevant >>>>>>> to the scope of this Sub Team. What this means, I¹m afraid, is that >>>>>>> there will most likely be an updated version of the Sub Team¹s Review >>>>>>> Tool (i.e. the Word document that you¹re working off of). I will try to >>>>>>> get that to you all as soon as I possibly can with the caveat that as >>>>>>> I complete preparation of the WG Tool Part 2 (covering the remainder of >>>>>>> the WG¹s preliminary recommendations except for those being covered by >>>>>>> the Sub Teams) there may yet be further updates. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I¹m happy to help update any existing summary documents you may already >>>>>>> have as a result, of course, and, Todd, to your point about adding an >>>>>>> extra row to the existing Tool to reflect the Save Domain Privacy >>>>>>> comment in their petition, I¹m happy to do that (per Kathy¹s suggestion >>>>>>> on the call today) while I¹m doing the current update anyway. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:55 >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, Holly Raiche >>>>>>> <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Kathy and Holly. Just to summarize where I think we are (and >>>>>>> again, I¹ve been working backward from what Sub-team 1.3.2 presented >>>>>>> last week, which I¹ve attached I assume that what our sub-team will >>>>>>> present next week will look something like that): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · First there will be a paragraph (or bullet point or however we >>>>>>> want to style it) discussing those comments that argued that the WG¹s >>>>>>> proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can >>>>>>> never disclose and/or publish under any circumstances. This section >>>>>>> will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come >>>>>>> from, what did they argue. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that the WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process. Again, this section will discuss: how >>>>>>> many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they >>>>>>> argue, etc. I agree with Kathy that the ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> submissions should be analyzed in this paragraph. I also agree with >>>>>>> Holly¹s point though that in this paragraph we should note that the >>>>>>> ³Respect our Privacy² submissions took a more extreme position than >>>>>>> others (like Google¹s, for example), in that they argued that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, and >>>>>>> didn¹t accept that other legal or ICANN-recognized processes (such as a >>>>>>> UDRP for example) could suffice. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that our WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court >>>>>>> order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. My plan for this paragraph was to first have a general >>>>>>> summary of whose comments fell in this category. And I agree with Kathy >>>>>>> that the Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit here, in that >>>>>>> ³verifiable evidence of wrongdoing² is what II(A), (B), and (C) of Annex >>>>>>> E contemplate. Following that summary, my plan was then to list each >>>>>>> proposed change to the language of Annex E (perhaps in a bullet point >>>>>>> format), followed by who recommended it, and what their arguments were >>>>>>> for it. That said, I disagree with Kathy that each of those comments >>>>>>> and all of those suggested changes will necessarily be to a ³higher >>>>>>> standard.² From my initial review, I think the comments are going to >>>>>>> recommend changes in both directions, which we ought to reflect in the >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> we¹re not sure what to do with. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> That¹s how I see our task anyway. So far we have Sara and Holly writing >>>>>>> the first draft of the first two paragraphs, me and Kathy writing the >>>>>>> third, and Darcy writing the fourth (though of course we can all edit >>>>>>> the final before it goes to the entire WG). Let me know if anybody else >>>>>>> wants to join. And with that, my quick thoughts on some of the >>>>>>> bigger-picture points below: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Given that our summary will only be on what commenters said >>>>>>> about Annex E, and given that Annex E doesn¹t touch on LE requests, my >>>>>>> thought is that we should leave analysis of comments on LE to the other >>>>>>> sub-teams (I¹m pretty sure LE would fall in both sub-team 1 and sub-team >>>>>>> 4¹s work). Not that I¹m not interested in LE just that we have plenty >>>>>>> of work as it is, without duplicating work that is being handled by >>>>>>> other sub-teams. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · In response to Mary¹s email (attached): I agree that I¹m not >>>>>>> sure that I see the utility of adding the form-based submissions to the >>>>>>> compiled template/matrix Word doc. As I understand it, the attached >>>>>>> Word doc is just a tool to help us get to our final work product, which >>>>>>> is the summary presentation to the rest of the WG. If we make a point >>>>>>> to discuss the form-based submissions in our summary presentation to the >>>>>>> rest of the WG (which, as I noted above, we¹re certainly planning to >>>>>>> do), then I don¹t see why we¹d need to add columns to the attached Word >>>>>>> doc for each of those. I mean, if somebody wants to take the time to do >>>>>>> so, that¹s fine. I just don¹t see how that helps us get to our final >>>>>>> work product. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally, one quick point: I see our sub-team¹s role, and the >>>>>>> role of the summary that we are to present to the entire WG next week, >>>>>>> as purely descriptive. In other words: what did the comments say? To >>>>>>> the extent that there is going to be any normative or substantive >>>>>>> discussion that goes one step beyond that OK, this is what the >>>>>>> comments said, but now what do we do about that? I think that has to >>>>>>> be left to the entire WG to debate after we present our summary. I¹m >>>>>>> just throwing out that reminder b/c I think it will help keep our work >>>>>>> easier. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 5:49 AM >>>>>>> To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net >>>>>>> <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi All, >>>>>>> I support the division of comments into buckets as Todd has created and >>>>>>> Holly has revised. Do we have four buckets now? Below (and preceeded by >>>>>>> "==>") I show where the two large groups of missing comments might go. >>>>>>> Tx! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Everyone >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> First- sorry not to follow up sooner. And Todd - I agree with the >>>>>>> refined break up into three buckets- with an additional element or so. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The first category is clearly no, not ever, under any circumstances. >>>>>>> All that is needed from us is to count the comments and where they are >>>>>>> from. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> So bucket one, no disclosure ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second is one I¹d like to expand a bit - and see where that gets us. >>>>>>> As Todd and I suggest, it is a category that specifically states the >>>>>>> need for a legal process. (it is framed variously as court order court >>>>>>> process, Subpoena) My suggestion is that the overall heading is no >>>>>>> reveal unless there has been a legal process of some sort in the >>>>>>> relevant jurisdiction. The wrinkle here is that, under an ICANN dispute >>>>>>> resolution process (e.g., UDRP) where details of the customer would be >>>>>>> revealed. Given this is a recognised ICANN process in which details are >>>>>>> already revealed, my suggestion is to characterise th category in that >>>>>>> way. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Two, disclosure of data to private parties and law >>>>>>> enforcement only subject to court order. This is where the "Respect our >>>>>>> Privacy" thousands of individual submissions fits: "No one¹s personal >>>>>>> information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of >>>>>>> whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement >>>>>>> agency². (Mary, do we happen to have a final count of these individual >>>>>>> submission?) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My reading of both categories is to say that Annex E is not necessary >>>>>>> for either. (and Kathy - the comments you refer to below would fit into >>>>>>> the first or second basket) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The third category is the only one that goes beyond what is already >>>>>>> required to suggest there may be other circumstances where the contact >>>>>>> details of the customer would be revealed to a third party that is >>>>>>> either not part of an ICANN process or a court process. And the >>>>>>> challenge will be to work through what those situations are. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Three (formerly Two) is now the one that accepts the premise >>>>>>> of Annex E, as Holly and Todd have laid out, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework to the higher standards requested by >>>>>>> commenters. The question for me is what bucket the 11,000 Save Domain >>>>>>> Privacy petition signatories fit in: they wrote "Privacy providers >>>>>>> should not forced to reveal my private information without verifiable >>>>>>> evidence of wrongdoing." Can Annex E be revised to raise the standard >>>>>>> to require "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" w/o a court order? If so, >>>>>>> what changes must be made in Annex E to meet this higher standard? If >>>>>>> not, do these 11,000+ petition signatures really belong in [revised] >>>>>>> Bucket 2, court order? I look forward to our discussions ahead! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My next query is where we put Law Enforcement Agency requests. If they >>>>>>> have a warrant, I¹d suggest that we put them in the second category - in >>>>>>> most jurisdictions, warrants are not granted without some kind of >>>>>>> judicial oversight. Without a warrant (or some judicial oversight), >>>>>>> requests by Law Enforcement/Security requests would be under some kind >>>>>>> of Annex. >>>>>>> ==> Holly, do I understand right that this might be a new Bucket Four - >>>>>>> LE w/o CO -- Law Enforcement w/o Court Order. I think it makes sense >>>>>>> and I would like to see where the comments fall on this issue. Plus >>>>>>> Annex E is only for private individuals/private attorneys/private >>>>>>> companies. So now seems to be a good time to break out informal LE >>>>>>> requests into its own category. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I²ll be having a look at that third category >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My other way of looking at this issue is whether or not the relevant p/p >>>>>>> provider must make some sort of judgment call. For the first category - >>>>>>> the answer is a simple NO. For the second category, there is either >>>>>>> some sort of judicially approved document for that jurisdiction or an >>>>>>> approved ICANN process - or not. It is only in the third category that >>>>>>> the providers must make a judgment call on whether the requirements are >>>>>>> met, or not. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Quick note, we still need the miscellaneous bucket that Todd created >>>>>>> for "unclear" bucket, so [renamed] Bucket Five = unclear? Best, Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Happy to discuss >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Holly >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On 4 Aug 2015, at 8:44 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com> > wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Mary and All, >>>>>>> Glad to be with you on this subteam 3 and looking forward to our >>>>>>> discussion. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary, I was very glad to see that Turner Broadcasting comments had been >>>>>>> included in this comment summary. Let me ask about the 10,000+ comments >>>>>>> we received, the vast majority entitled: ICANN- Respect Our Privacy. All >>>>>>> of these comments contain a clear call: >>>>>>> - No one¹s personal information should be revealed without a court >>>>>>> order, >>>>>>> regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law >>>>>>> enforcement agency. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Sorry if I missed it, but is this call from so many thousands of >>>>>>> commenters for not disclosing p/p data to a private individual (which >>>>>>> would include a private lawyer) reflected in our comment summary tool? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and tx, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Dear all, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive >>>>>>> comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for >>>>>>> spotting this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for >>>>>>> the first question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for >>>>>>> the second question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) >>>>>>> on PAGE 39. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Apologies again for the inadvertent omission they have been added to >>>>>>> these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were >>>>>>> received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I¹ll update >>>>>>> the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>>>> <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 >>>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hello Todd and everyone, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I >>>>>>> apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of >>>>>>> comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting >>>>>>> the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am >>>>>>> very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes >>>>>>> WG members¹ questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits >>>>>>> don¹t replace WG members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. >>>>>>> At the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as >>>>>>> thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our >>>>>>> efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle eyes is the best arrangement. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address >>>>>>> specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the >>>>>>> online template responses that do the same. The Word document is >>>>>>> therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or >>>>>>> the full WG, as appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my >>>>>>> documents/collected comments and don¹t believe I have missed out any >>>>>>> others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word >>>>>>> documents I¹ve compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach >>>>>>> seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves >>>>>>> would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups >>>>>>> to tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, >>>>>>> and in doing so also note any comments that didn¹t address either so >>>>>>> that they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or >>>>>>> considered by the full WG (if appropriate). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked >>>>>>> through it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits >>>>>>> in the document you circulated . ? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance >>>>>>> from staff in any way! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 >>>>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >>>>>>> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was >>>>>>> helpful to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn >>>>>>> might help us decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, >>>>>>> I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two >>>>>>> basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I¹d recommend >>>>>>> that we do the same. Here are the two that I¹d propose: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >>>>>>> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a >>>>>>> court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >>>>>>> Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions >>>>>>> of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address >>>>>>> the arguments raised in these comments? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it >>>>>>> will help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before >>>>>>> us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how >>>>>>> we¹d otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A >>>>>>> comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose >>>>>>> and/or publish absent a court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex >>>>>>> E; it¹s arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the >>>>>>> comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated >>>>>>> (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to >>>>>>> make sure that they agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the >>>>>>> comments? Once we¹re comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the >>>>>>> next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some >>>>>>> members want to tackle the third ³unclear² category) to start reviewing >>>>>>> the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present >>>>>>> to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other >>>>>>> questions that anybody wants to suggest). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >>>>>>> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >>>>>>> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our >>>>>>> sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For >>>>>>> example, I know that Turner¹s comment (available >>>>>>> here:http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3 >>>>>>> VcnSR7.pdf >>>>>>> <http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnS >>>>>>> R7.pdf> ) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the >>>>>>> attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted >>>>>>> it. J So I want to make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex >>>>>>> E that we also ought to be reviewing. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd D. Williams >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Counsel >>>>>>> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >>>>>>> One CNN Center, 10 North >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >>>>>>> P: 404-827-2234 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> F: 404-827-1994 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach >>>>>>> of material service terms such as Internet abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Google >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Access Now >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service >>>>>>> terms such as net abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Greg McMullen >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Ralf Haring >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Liam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Sam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Dan M >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Not your business >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Simon Kissane >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) TS >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Cort Wee >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Alex Xu >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Kenneth Godwin >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Sebastian Broussier >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Andrew Merenbach >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 25) Finn Ellis >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 26) Aaron Holmes >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 27) Michael Ekstrand >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 28) Homer >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 29) Donuts >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 30) Michael Ho >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 31) Key Systems >>>>>>> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework. >>>>>>> 1) BC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) MPAA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) ISPCP >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) INTA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) IACC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) NCSG >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Cyberinvasion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Phil Crooker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Aaron Myers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Mike Fewings >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Name withheld >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Gary Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Byunghoon Choi >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Reid Baker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Nick O¹Dell >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Time Warner >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) RIAA & IFPI >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) IPC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Vanda Scartezini >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Tim Kramer >>>>>>> * Bucket Three: unclear. >>>>>>> 1) Sven Slootweg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Brendan Conniff >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) Marc Schauber >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Aaron Mason >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Kevin Szprychel >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Christopher >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) James Ford >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shantanu Gupta >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Christopher Smith >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Private >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Robert Lukitsh >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Adam Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Charles >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Aaron Dalton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Ian McNeil >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Adam Creighton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Anand S. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Lucas Stadler >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Alan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>

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Follow up from WG call on Tuesday
by Mary Wong Aug. 14, 2015

Aug. 14, 2015

Dear Sub Team 3 members, I¹m writing to ask how you would like to proceed with your work in terms of finalizing your analysis of the comments and developing recommendations for the Working Group. The current Work Plan has the 1 September meeting as when those recommendations should be presented to the WG (though obviously things can be moved around depending on the progress made by each Sub Team). >From the WG discussion on the call, the following questions may merit further deliberation: - Does "verifiable evidence" mean more (i.e. a higher standard) than what is currently in Annex E? - The Save Domain Privacy petition drafters did not intend for detailed parsing as between ³verified² and ³verifiable²; their context was what's in the RAA, which basically means not just taking the word of the requester "as is". In view of this explanation, should the Sub Team, in dealing with the SDP petition (not the additional comments sent in along with it) use the plain meaning of "verifiable" (which may, but does not necessarily mean only, a court order) or some other meaning? - What approach does the Sub Team wish to take in relation to the additional comments sent in by signatories to the Save Domain Privacy petition? - Since requiring a court order may not always be practical and certain providers already have a practice where they disclose upon what they judge to be sufficient evidence, how (if at all) should this factor into the Sub Team¹s recommendations? There are of course also substantive comments that the team included in its summary that were not as fully discussed on the WG call this week. Would a Sub Team call to work through those comments and the questions above be helpful? I can send around a Doodle poll for early next week if so, unless you would like to have a call immediately following the WG meeting on Tuesday 18 August next week? Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 21:00 Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion > Thanks much, Vicky and everyone I will accept all changes in this document > and send it out to the WG. If it¹s all right with you, I¹ll see if I can add > some brief descriptive sub-headings to the various sections. As noted > previously, when sending it out I¹ll be sure to mention that this is still a > draft document and certain aspects continue to be the subject of discussion > amongst the Sub Team. > > Cheers > Mary > > Mary Wong > Senior Policy Director > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) > Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 > Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org > > > From: Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler(a)riaa.com> > Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 20:39 > To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net>, "Williams, Todd" > <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> > Cc: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" > <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> > Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions > about inclusion > >> Please see attached. I¹ve tried to incorporate Todd¹s suggestions. I¹ve also >> deleted stuff that seemed repetitive with other noted comments or comment >> descriptions and/or provide a more neutral description of the criticisms >> where applicable. Please note this is preliminary, and I may have further >> comments down the line. - V >> >> >> From: Holly Raiche [mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net] >> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 8:02 PM >> To: Williams, Todd >> Cc: Victoria Sheckler; Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >> Folks >> >> >> >> I think I am repeating myself here, but we are getting into dangerous >> territory if we put ourselves in the place of the signatories and/or drafters >> to decide what they meant by verifiable evidence¹. Personally, I think it >> means something one would be happy to place before a court, (but clearly >> PRIOR to the outcome of a judicial process) but that is just me. Arguably, >> the context of the term could agree with my interpretation - or something >> akin to a legal judgment of some sort. >> >> >> >> So yes, we need to agree to disagree. >> >> >> >> And I think it is a sensible suggestion to have two or three of us explain >> that we haven¹t reached agreement on the implications of the use of the term. >> >> >> >> Holly >> >> >> >> >> >> On 11 Aug 2015, at 8:38 am, Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> wrote: >> >> >>> Thanks Vicky. >>> >>> >>> >>> For everybody: the more I¹ve thought about it, the more I¹ve come to the >>> conclusion that we¹re probably not going to resolve our differences on how >>> to interpret ³verifiable evidence² before 10:00 AM tomorrow. So in the >>> interest of being able to circulate something to the WG before our call, I >>> propose that the only reference to the SDP submissions in our document be >>> something like: >>> >>> >>> >>> We also note that the Save Domain Privacy petition which had 10,042 >>> signatories and also included [x] number of comments argued that ³privacy >>> providers should not be forced to reveal my private information without >>> verifiable evidence of wrongdoing.² We as a sub-team could not agree on how >>> to interpret ³verifiable evidence,² and will leave that discussion to the >>> larger WG. >>> >>> >>> >>> And then Kathy, Sara, and I can each just take a little bit of time on the >>> call tomorrow to explain our respective suggested interpretations of >>> ³verifiable evidence² to the larger WG and leave it to them. What does >>> everybody think of that? >>> >>> TW. >>> >>> >>> >>> From: Victoria Sheckler [mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com >>> <mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com> ] >>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 5:01 PM >>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org >>> <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> >>> >>> Please wait for my comments before distributing anything to the broader >>> group. I will send them tonight. >>> >>> >>> >>> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:50 PM >>> To: Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> >>> >>> Thanks Mary. No, I¹m not putting my name on this. Nobody has responded to >>> the questions that I raised earlier today (see attached). And we still >>> don¹t have Vicky¹s comments. Just to reiterate my problems with the >>> attached: >>> >>> >>> >>> · The attached says that our sub-team is debating whether ³verifiable >>> evidence of wrongdoing² either means court order or ³a higher standard of >>> evidence and proof in Annex E (which is not currently a ³verifiable >>> evidence² standard) before disclosure.² But that is not an accurate >>> representation of our internal debate, as I¹ve outlined in the attached >>> emails. I¹m fine telling the WG that we can¹t decide how to interpret >>> ³verifiable evidence² (though I still don¹t understand how to interpret >>> ³verifiable evidence² to mean ³court order²). But if we do so, we at least >>> have to accurately reflect what the competing arguments are. >>> >>> · I don¹t understand the statement that ³the sub-team noted but has >>> not yet evaluated the 11,000 comments received from commenters arriving from >>> the Respect Our Privacy website. These commenters, each individually, urged >>> a rejection of Annex E in favor of due process as defined by judicial >>> process² and that ³The sub-team is continuing to review and weigh these >>> comments.² What does that mean? I thought from the attached email exchange >>> that we were adding a bullet point to Category Two (after the bullet point >>> about Key Systems) about those comments. Why are we now saying that we >>> haven¹t evaluated them and that we¹ll continue to review and weigh them? >>> What does that mean? >>> >>> · I don¹t understand the long inclusion of arguments from Jeff >>> Wheelhouse, Simon Kissane, ICA, EasyDNS, Endurance, and Donuts. To be >>> precise: I¹m fine if this sub-team wants to provide argumentation in the >>> document. But if we¹re going to do that, then we need to do it fairly, to >>> give the WG an accurate representation. So I¹ll go back through my section >>> and include the argumentation from INTA, MPAA, RIAA, Turner, etc., which I >>> intentionally left out of my draft, because I was trying to keep this >>> document as neutral as possible (because that was how I viewed the objective >>> of our sub-team: to fairly report back to the larger WG). Obviously, to the >>> extent that the comments I analyzed presented arguments on two sides of a >>> question (e.g., why the cost-recovery provision in Section I(B)(iii) should >>> stay or go), then I tried to fairly and succinctly summarize those arguments >>> on both sides, for the benefit of the WG. But I think the only other >>> argumentation that I included was the one sentence from individual commenter >>> Mike Fewings. >>> >>> >>> >>> Todd >>> >>> >>> >>> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:00 PM >>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> >>> >>> Thanks, Sara! If it¹s all right with everyone, I¹ll send this version around >>> to the WG, noting that it is still a draft under discussion by the Sub Team >>> and as such there may be further updates on the call tomorrow (bearing in >>> mind that Vicky has indicated she may have some comments tonight). >>> Additionally, I can also note that some of the language in the draft is also >>> still under discussion by the Sub Team, and some of the issues the Sub Team >>> is discussing will be highlighted during the update to the WG. >>> >>> >>> >>> Let me know if you would prefer another approach. Thanks! >>> >>> >>> >>> Cheers >>> >>> Mary >>> >>> >>> >>> Mary Wong >>> >>> Senior Policy Director >>> >>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>> >>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>> >>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 13:32 >>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> >>>> >>>> Mary, >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Attached is the summary document that now includes my edits. Since it >>>> appears that we are now addressing Save Domain Privacy and Respect Our >>>> Privacy in separate paragraphs/sections of this document, I have removed >>>> references to both petitions from other sections so that there is no >>>> confusion. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thanks, >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Sara >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: Mary Wong >>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM >>>> To: Sara Bockey, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Hi Sara sorry, I haven¹t yet combined your document with Kathy¹s; please >>>> feel free to use whichever works best for you (e.g. dropping your document, >>>> with edits, into Kathy¹s, or just editing yours and sending it back to me). >>>> I attach both for your convenience. If I¹ve missed out a version that came >>>> in after these, please, everyone, let me know! >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thanks so much! >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Cheers >>>> >>>> Mary >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 12:31 >>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>>> >>>>> I¹m having a hard time locating the latest document. Do we have all the >>>>> ³bucket² comments in one document yet? If so, can someone circulate it? >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Thanks! >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:02 AM >>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Hi Todd, yes, certainly thank you! Actually, my second suggestion was >>>>> really meant to have us just include a description of the 4 categories >>>>> (buckets) somewhere in the document, preferably early on. I agree that any >>>>> conclusion about the petition comments shouldn¹t be included unless the >>>>> Sub Team has agreed on it. As has been the case elsewhere, it may also be >>>>> possible to ³square bracket² or otherwise highlight the >>>>> options/differences under consideration, should that be a more appropriate >>>>> alternative before tomorrow. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Cheers >>>>> >>>>> Mary >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Mary Wong >>>>> >>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>> >>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>> >>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>> >>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 11:54 >>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks Mary. To your last point: I think the question of whether the >>>>>> 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition support or oppose >>>>>> the basic premise of Annex E is what we¹re debating. So no, we shouldn¹t >>>>>> use that sentence until we¹ve decided that point. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I think we¹ve still got some good emails going on these open questions. >>>>>> But we shouldn¹t hold up your sending out the agenda. Could you send out >>>>>> the agenda noting that our sub-team will be presenting, but then >>>>>> circulate our final document later once it¹s done (but before tomorrow >>>>>> morning obviously)? >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >>>>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 11:38 AM >>>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Dear all, >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> As I¹m preparing to send out the agenda for the WG call tomorrow, along >>>>>> with associated documents, I¹m trying to consolidate Kathy¹s edited >>>>>> document with Sara¹s review that wasn¹t in Kathy¹s version. I also >>>>>> thought to offer the following suggested edit to the language around >>>>>> ³verifiable evidence² for your consideration: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> "The sub-team is working to better understand the meaning of ³verifiable >>>>>> evidence of wrongdoing² and whether these commenters intended for this >>>>>> wording to seek a different or more specific standard for >>>>>> revealdisclosure, namelysuch as a court order in which the court >>>>>> ³verifies² the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial >>>>>> finding, or alternatively, whether the commenters seek a higher standard >>>>>> of evidence and proof in Annex E (which isdoes not currently specify what >>>>>> is a ³verifiable evidence² standard) before disclosure. In this regard >>>>>> the sub-team notes that many signatories to the petition also added >>>>>> specific comments that may refer to this standard. These comments are >>>>>> currently under review." >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> The other suggestion I had was to reorganize the document slightly, to >>>>>> make it clearer what the ³buckets² are. In this regard, I suggest moving >>>>>> up the following summary from Sara to where Kathy¹s insertions began >>>>>> (after the specific suggestions for Annex E and before Darcy¹s >>>>>> additions): >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> "Our sub-team also reviewed and analyzed 39 comments including one with >>>>>> 10,000+ signatures from the Respect Our Privacy petition and one with >>>>>> 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition that oppose the >>>>>> basic premise of Annex E. The comments fell into 1 or 4 categories: >>>>>> >>>>>> Category 1 - No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>>> >>>>>> Category 2 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. >>>>>> >>>>>> Category 3 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP) >>>>>> >>>>>> Category 4 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases >>>>>> of abuse." >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Please let me know if you have any comments or objections to the above. >>>>>> Thank you! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Cheers >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>> >>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>> >>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>> >>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>> >>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 10:13 >>>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, Kathy >>>>>> Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, >>>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Kathy. My thoughts on the attached: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · My only point on the ³contested vs. uncontested² language was to >>>>>>> distinguish those suggested changes to Annex E for which we received >>>>>>> comments on both sides of a question vs. those suggested changes for >>>>>>> which we did not. Mainly it was just to distinguish the final two >>>>>>> paragraphs conceptually. But your changes serve that same purpose well. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · I don¹t understand why we would include ³while seeking >>>>>>> significantly higher standards for disclosure and options to disclosure² >>>>>>> in the third paragraph. We get to what changes the various comments >>>>>>> suggested (including which comments asked for higher disclosure >>>>>>> standards, and which asked for lower) later in the document. That third >>>>>>> paragraph is just noting which comments supported certain sections of >>>>>>> Annex E. Plus I¹m not sure that all of the comments mentioned in that >>>>>>> third paragraph did in fact seek ³significantly higher standards for >>>>>>> disclosure.² >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Isn¹t the analysis of the 11,000 comments from Respect our >>>>>>> Privacy contained in Sara and Holly¹s section (see attached)? Why would >>>>>>> we reference them twice? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Darcy¹s analysis of the ³miscellaneous² bucket looks great. >>>>>>> Many thanks Darcy in many ways I think you took the most difficult >>>>>>> part, because sometimes it¹s hard to make sense of how exactly those >>>>>>> comments were relevant! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally: for the reasons I¹ve already outlined in the attached email, I >>>>>>> don¹t understand why we would say that the process outlined in Annex E >>>>>>> ³is not currently a verifiable evidence standard.² As I mentioned >>>>>>> before, the "evidence" that Annex E requires, as outlined in Sections >>>>>>> II(A), (B), and (C), is extensive. So I don¹t see any argument why >>>>>>> Annex E wouldn¹t meet the ³evidence² part of ³verifiable evidence.² >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> So I think what we¹re really trying to interpret is ³verifiable.² And >>>>>>> Kathy in the attached has offered the interpretation that ³verifiable² >>>>>>> means ³a court order in which the court verifies¹ the abuse or >>>>>>> infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding.² But if that was >>>>>>> the correct interpretation, wouldn¹t the word be ³verified² instead of >>>>>>> ³verifiable²? If a court has issued an order, then it has already done >>>>>>> the verifying. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Rather, I think the basic plain meaning of ³verifiable² and hence the >>>>>>> meaning that we should assume the 10,000+ supporters signed on to is >>>>>>> simply ³able to be checked or proved.² So it seems much simpler to read >>>>>>> ³verifiable² to support the portions of Sections III(A), (B), and (C) of >>>>>>> Annex E that give P/P Providers the ability to verify the evidence >>>>>>> submitted by a Requester by notifying the P/P Customer of the complaint, >>>>>>> reviewing the P/P Customer¹s response, and then responding to the >>>>>>> Requester with either disclosure or its reasons for refusing to disclose >>>>>>> which reasons may come from either the Customer under Section >>>>>>> III(C)(ii), or from the P/P Provider¹s own investigation under Section >>>>>>> III(C)(iii). In other words, the most plausible reading of ³verifiable² >>>>>>> is that it simply means that it is not enough for the Requester to >>>>>>> provide any evidence and then disclosure automatically follows. Rather, >>>>>>> the evidence must be capable of being verified. Which is what Section >>>>>>> III provides. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> ] >>>>>>> Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 7:08 PM >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >; Williams, Todd >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; >>>>>>> gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks everyone, that is a lot of work and a document that will clearly >>>>>>> help advance the WG¹s progress quite a bit! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Kathy can I confirm that the document you edited is Darcy¹s update to >>>>>>> Todd¹s last version, and so does not include what was added/sent by >>>>>>> Sara? I¹m trying to keep all the drafts clear and ordered, and that¹s >>>>>>> what it looks like to me. If that¹s the case, I will add Sara¹s report >>>>>>> to Kathy¹s document (unless there are further changes between now and >>>>>>> the WG call on Tuesday). I¹ll then upload the consolidated draft >>>>>>> document and have that ready for the WG at the Tuesday meeting. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> All it seems to me that the question as to where the comments relating >>>>>>> to ³verifiable evidence² should fit is a question that you may wish to >>>>>>> bring back to the WG on Tuesday, if there is still no agreement amongst >>>>>>> yourselves by then. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally two minor suggested changes, both to do with numbers: first, >>>>>>> I¹d suggest that instead of saying 10,042 comments came with the Save >>>>>>> Domain Privacy petition we should say that the petition had 10,042 >>>>>>> signatories. Secondly, I suggest adding the word ³approximately² to the >>>>>>> 11,000 Respect Your Privacy comments. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I hope this helps, and thank you all again. Following the WG call on >>>>>>> Tuesday, please let me know how you would like to proceed and if there >>>>>>> is a need for the Sub Team to get together for a call to discuss its >>>>>>> final recommendations to the WG (due in about 2-3 weeks from this >>>>>>> Tuesday, according to the current WG Work Plan). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Sunday, August 9, 2015 at 18:40 >>>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Todd and All, >>>>>>> Nice job! I reviewed the entire document and attached is my crack at our >>>>>>> summary. I think it includes everyone additions and edits to date (but >>>>>>> please check!). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I've lost track of who drafted what sections, but I think we are moving >>>>>>> in the right direction. Some really good work has been done. I made one >>>>>>> small change and two bigger ones and few general edits. The small change >>>>>>> is removing the reference to contested and uncontested edits since I am >>>>>>> not sure what an uncontested edit and whether commenters would have >>>>>>> contested it if they knew what the proposed edit would be. >>>>>>> (Unfortunately, since our "Reply Comment" period was removed by ICANN, >>>>>>> we don't have this important reply time to review others edits and >>>>>>> support or contest them.). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I also added in two short paragraphs. The first one describes the Save >>>>>>> Domains Privacy comments, the petition language, and the discussion now >>>>>>> in place in our sub-team over the meaning of these comments. Perhaps >>>>>>> others in the WG can help us shed light on the questions being raised in >>>>>>> our sub-team. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second paragraph summarizes the 11,000 Respect Our Privacy comments. >>>>>>> They told us that "No one's personal information should be revealed >>>>>>> without a court order," and of course, we should reflect them in our >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On my machine, my redlines appear in red, and the prior editor's >>>>>>> redlines (for the paragraphs at the end starting "Finally, our sub-team >>>>>>> reviewed and analyzed 21 miscellaneous comments...") appear in grey. I >>>>>>> hope these redlines are clear for you too. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and enjoy the rest of the weekend, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Kathy: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Attached is my first crack at our portion of the summary (on the Bucket >>>>>>> Two comments). Let me know if you have any suggested edits, additions, >>>>>>> subtractions, etc. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Also, I¹ve copied the entire sub-team mailing list on this email, for >>>>>>> two reasons: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) So that there is a transparent public record of any >>>>>>> back-and-forth red-lining of the document that we may do; and >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) So that Sara and Holly for Bucket One, and Darcy for our >>>>>>> miscellaneous bucket, can see what I envision for our summary report to >>>>>>> the WG. If you all want to add your summaries to this one to make it >>>>>>> consistent in terms of formatting, etc., feel free. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I had one thought Sara and Holly for Bucket One (which came to me as I >>>>>>> was conceptually dividing our Bucket Two comments into general support, >>>>>>> specific support, suggested changes by addition, suggested edits >>>>>>> uncontested, suggested edits contested): it may be helpful for the WG if >>>>>>> we divide our Bucket One comments into categories along a spectrum. As >>>>>>> I envision it (in order along the spectrum): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. I >>>>>>> would put the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² comments here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP). E.g., I think the Google comment would >>>>>>> go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of >>>>>>> abuse. E.g., I think the ICA and EasyDNS comments would go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> For the WG¹s sake, we may also want to distinguish between those Bucket >>>>>>> One comments that couched their discussion of disclosure/publication in >>>>>>> terms of what P/P Providers ought to be required to do (or not required >>>>>>> to do) in response to external third-party disclosure requests such as >>>>>>> from IP owners or LEA (e.g., the Google and Key Systems comments) vs. >>>>>>> those Bucket One comments that simply said ³no publication/disclosure >>>>>>> absent a court order² without distinguishing b/w whether the impetus for >>>>>>> the disclosure was an external third-party request or the P/P Provider¹s >>>>>>> own desire to disclose/publish (e.g., the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> comments). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> TW. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:06 AM >>>>>>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> ; Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> ; >>>>>>> gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Whoops, I left out Jawala at the bottom, who should go in bucket two. >>>>>>> Sorry. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:01 AM >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Yes, thanks Mary. Of the highlighted additions in the attached, I¹ve >>>>>>> added the comments from Stefan Grunder, Reagan Lynch, Reid Baker, and >>>>>>> the Save Domain Privacy petitioners to the second bucket that Kathy and >>>>>>> I are reviewing/summarizing (accept premise of Annex E, but with >>>>>>> changes). I think the highlighted comments from Dan M, Simon Kissane, >>>>>>> Adam Creighton, Jason Weinberg, J Wilson, Dylan Henderson, M.B., and the >>>>>>> Respect our Privacy submissions should go in the first bucket that Holly >>>>>>> and Sara are reviewing/summarizing (reject premise of Annex E). Thanks. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 6:47 PM >>>>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Tx Mary! >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks again, Todd, Kathy, Holly and everyone this is just a note to >>>>>>> follow up on one portion of the discussion during the WG call earlier >>>>>>> today. I¹ll be going through the current WG Public Comment Review Tool >>>>>>> (Part 1, covering the WG¹s preliminary recommendations #1 through #9) to >>>>>>> pick out those additional comments that, though ³attached² to a >>>>>>> different recommendation or question, is actually more directly relevant >>>>>>> to the scope of this Sub Team. What this means, I¹m afraid, is that >>>>>>> there will most likely be an updated version of the Sub Team¹s Review >>>>>>> Tool (i.e. the Word document that you¹re working off of). I will try to >>>>>>> get that to you all as soon as I possibly can with the caveat that as >>>>>>> I complete preparation of the WG Tool Part 2 (covering the remainder of >>>>>>> the WG¹s preliminary recommendations except for those being covered by >>>>>>> the Sub Teams) there may yet be further updates. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I¹m happy to help update any existing summary documents you may already >>>>>>> have as a result, of course, and, Todd, to your point about adding an >>>>>>> extra row to the existing Tool to reflect the Save Domain Privacy >>>>>>> comment in their petition, I¹m happy to do that (per Kathy¹s suggestion >>>>>>> on the call today) while I¹m doing the current update anyway. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:55 >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, Holly Raiche >>>>>>> <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Kathy and Holly. Just to summarize where I think we are (and >>>>>>> again, I¹ve been working backward from what Sub-team 1.3.2 presented >>>>>>> last week, which I¹ve attached I assume that what our sub-team will >>>>>>> present next week will look something like that): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · First there will be a paragraph (or bullet point or however we >>>>>>> want to style it) discussing those comments that argued that the WG¹s >>>>>>> proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can >>>>>>> never disclose and/or publish under any circumstances. This section >>>>>>> will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come >>>>>>> from, what did they argue. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that the WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process. Again, this section will discuss: how >>>>>>> many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they >>>>>>> argue, etc. I agree with Kathy that the ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> submissions should be analyzed in this paragraph. I also agree with >>>>>>> Holly¹s point though that in this paragraph we should note that the >>>>>>> ³Respect our Privacy² submissions took a more extreme position than >>>>>>> others (like Google¹s, for example), in that they argued that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, and >>>>>>> didn¹t accept that other legal or ICANN-recognized processes (such as a >>>>>>> UDRP for example) could suffice. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that our WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court >>>>>>> order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. My plan for this paragraph was to first have a general >>>>>>> summary of whose comments fell in this category. And I agree with Kathy >>>>>>> that the Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit here, in that >>>>>>> ³verifiable evidence of wrongdoing² is what II(A), (B), and (C) of Annex >>>>>>> E contemplate. Following that summary, my plan was then to list each >>>>>>> proposed change to the language of Annex E (perhaps in a bullet point >>>>>>> format), followed by who recommended it, and what their arguments were >>>>>>> for it. That said, I disagree with Kathy that each of those comments >>>>>>> and all of those suggested changes will necessarily be to a ³higher >>>>>>> standard.² From my initial review, I think the comments are going to >>>>>>> recommend changes in both directions, which we ought to reflect in the >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> we¹re not sure what to do with. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> That¹s how I see our task anyway. So far we have Sara and Holly writing >>>>>>> the first draft of the first two paragraphs, me and Kathy writing the >>>>>>> third, and Darcy writing the fourth (though of course we can all edit >>>>>>> the final before it goes to the entire WG). Let me know if anybody else >>>>>>> wants to join. And with that, my quick thoughts on some of the >>>>>>> bigger-picture points below: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Given that our summary will only be on what commenters said >>>>>>> about Annex E, and given that Annex E doesn¹t touch on LE requests, my >>>>>>> thought is that we should leave analysis of comments on LE to the other >>>>>>> sub-teams (I¹m pretty sure LE would fall in both sub-team 1 and sub-team >>>>>>> 4¹s work). Not that I¹m not interested in LE just that we have plenty >>>>>>> of work as it is, without duplicating work that is being handled by >>>>>>> other sub-teams. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · In response to Mary¹s email (attached): I agree that I¹m not >>>>>>> sure that I see the utility of adding the form-based submissions to the >>>>>>> compiled template/matrix Word doc. As I understand it, the attached >>>>>>> Word doc is just a tool to help us get to our final work product, which >>>>>>> is the summary presentation to the rest of the WG. If we make a point >>>>>>> to discuss the form-based submissions in our summary presentation to the >>>>>>> rest of the WG (which, as I noted above, we¹re certainly planning to >>>>>>> do), then I don¹t see why we¹d need to add columns to the attached Word >>>>>>> doc for each of those. I mean, if somebody wants to take the time to do >>>>>>> so, that¹s fine. I just don¹t see how that helps us get to our final >>>>>>> work product. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally, one quick point: I see our sub-team¹s role, and the >>>>>>> role of the summary that we are to present to the entire WG next week, >>>>>>> as purely descriptive. In other words: what did the comments say? To >>>>>>> the extent that there is going to be any normative or substantive >>>>>>> discussion that goes one step beyond that OK, this is what the >>>>>>> comments said, but now what do we do about that? I think that has to >>>>>>> be left to the entire WG to debate after we present our summary. I¹m >>>>>>> just throwing out that reminder b/c I think it will help keep our work >>>>>>> easier. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 5:49 AM >>>>>>> To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net >>>>>>> <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi All, >>>>>>> I support the division of comments into buckets as Todd has created and >>>>>>> Holly has revised. Do we have four buckets now? Below (and preceeded by >>>>>>> "==>") I show where the two large groups of missing comments might go. >>>>>>> Tx! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Everyone >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> First- sorry not to follow up sooner. And Todd - I agree with the >>>>>>> refined break up into three buckets- with an additional element or so. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The first category is clearly no, not ever, under any circumstances. >>>>>>> All that is needed from us is to count the comments and where they are >>>>>>> from. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> So bucket one, no disclosure ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second is one I¹d like to expand a bit - and see where that gets us. >>>>>>> As Todd and I suggest, it is a category that specifically states the >>>>>>> need for a legal process. (it is framed variously as court order court >>>>>>> process, Subpoena) My suggestion is that the overall heading is no >>>>>>> reveal unless there has been a legal process of some sort in the >>>>>>> relevant jurisdiction. The wrinkle here is that, under an ICANN dispute >>>>>>> resolution process (e.g., UDRP) where details of the customer would be >>>>>>> revealed. Given this is a recognised ICANN process in which details are >>>>>>> already revealed, my suggestion is to characterise th category in that >>>>>>> way. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Two, disclosure of data to private parties and law >>>>>>> enforcement only subject to court order. This is where the "Respect our >>>>>>> Privacy" thousands of individual submissions fits: "No one¹s personal >>>>>>> information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of >>>>>>> whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement >>>>>>> agency². (Mary, do we happen to have a final count of these individual >>>>>>> submission?) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My reading of both categories is to say that Annex E is not necessary >>>>>>> for either. (and Kathy - the comments you refer to below would fit into >>>>>>> the first or second basket) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The third category is the only one that goes beyond what is already >>>>>>> required to suggest there may be other circumstances where the contact >>>>>>> details of the customer would be revealed to a third party that is >>>>>>> either not part of an ICANN process or a court process. And the >>>>>>> challenge will be to work through what those situations are. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Three (formerly Two) is now the one that accepts the premise >>>>>>> of Annex E, as Holly and Todd have laid out, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework to the higher standards requested by >>>>>>> commenters. The question for me is what bucket the 11,000 Save Domain >>>>>>> Privacy petition signatories fit in: they wrote "Privacy providers >>>>>>> should not forced to reveal my private information without verifiable >>>>>>> evidence of wrongdoing." Can Annex E be revised to raise the standard >>>>>>> to require "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" w/o a court order? If so, >>>>>>> what changes must be made in Annex E to meet this higher standard? If >>>>>>> not, do these 11,000+ petition signatures really belong in [revised] >>>>>>> Bucket 2, court order? I look forward to our discussions ahead! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My next query is where we put Law Enforcement Agency requests. If they >>>>>>> have a warrant, I¹d suggest that we put them in the second category - in >>>>>>> most jurisdictions, warrants are not granted without some kind of >>>>>>> judicial oversight. Without a warrant (or some judicial oversight), >>>>>>> requests by Law Enforcement/Security requests would be under some kind >>>>>>> of Annex. >>>>>>> ==> Holly, do I understand right that this might be a new Bucket Four - >>>>>>> LE w/o CO -- Law Enforcement w/o Court Order. I think it makes sense >>>>>>> and I would like to see where the comments fall on this issue. Plus >>>>>>> Annex E is only for private individuals/private attorneys/private >>>>>>> companies. So now seems to be a good time to break out informal LE >>>>>>> requests into its own category. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I²ll be having a look at that third category >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My other way of looking at this issue is whether or not the relevant p/p >>>>>>> provider must make some sort of judgment call. For the first category - >>>>>>> the answer is a simple NO. For the second category, there is either >>>>>>> some sort of judicially approved document for that jurisdiction or an >>>>>>> approved ICANN process - or not. It is only in the third category that >>>>>>> the providers must make a judgment call on whether the requirements are >>>>>>> met, or not. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Quick note, we still need the miscellaneous bucket that Todd created >>>>>>> for "unclear" bucket, so [renamed] Bucket Five = unclear? Best, Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Happy to discuss >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Holly >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On 4 Aug 2015, at 8:44 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com> > wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Mary and All, >>>>>>> Glad to be with you on this subteam 3 and looking forward to our >>>>>>> discussion. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary, I was very glad to see that Turner Broadcasting comments had been >>>>>>> included in this comment summary. Let me ask about the 10,000+ comments >>>>>>> we received, the vast majority entitled: ICANN- Respect Our Privacy. All >>>>>>> of these comments contain a clear call: >>>>>>> - No one¹s personal information should be revealed without a court >>>>>>> order, >>>>>>> regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law >>>>>>> enforcement agency. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Sorry if I missed it, but is this call from so many thousands of >>>>>>> commenters for not disclosing p/p data to a private individual (which >>>>>>> would include a private lawyer) reflected in our comment summary tool? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and tx, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Dear all, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive >>>>>>> comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for >>>>>>> spotting this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for >>>>>>> the first question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for >>>>>>> the second question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) >>>>>>> on PAGE 39. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Apologies again for the inadvertent omission they have been added to >>>>>>> these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were >>>>>>> received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I¹ll update >>>>>>> the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>>>> <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 >>>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hello Todd and everyone, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I >>>>>>> apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of >>>>>>> comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting >>>>>>> the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am >>>>>>> very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes >>>>>>> WG members¹ questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits >>>>>>> don¹t replace WG members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. >>>>>>> At the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as >>>>>>> thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our >>>>>>> efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle eyes is the best arrangement. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address >>>>>>> specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the >>>>>>> online template responses that do the same. The Word document is >>>>>>> therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or >>>>>>> the full WG, as appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my >>>>>>> documents/collected comments and don¹t believe I have missed out any >>>>>>> others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word >>>>>>> documents I¹ve compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach >>>>>>> seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves >>>>>>> would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups >>>>>>> to tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, >>>>>>> and in doing so also note any comments that didn¹t address either so >>>>>>> that they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or >>>>>>> considered by the full WG (if appropriate). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked >>>>>>> through it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits >>>>>>> in the document you circulated . ? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance >>>>>>> from staff in any way! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 >>>>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >>>>>>> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was >>>>>>> helpful to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn >>>>>>> might help us decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, >>>>>>> I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two >>>>>>> basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I¹d recommend >>>>>>> that we do the same. Here are the two that I¹d propose: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >>>>>>> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a >>>>>>> court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >>>>>>> Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions >>>>>>> of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address >>>>>>> the arguments raised in these comments? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it >>>>>>> will help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before >>>>>>> us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how >>>>>>> we¹d otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A >>>>>>> comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose >>>>>>> and/or publish absent a court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex >>>>>>> E; it¹s arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the >>>>>>> comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated >>>>>>> (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to >>>>>>> make sure that they agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the >>>>>>> comments? Once we¹re comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the >>>>>>> next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some >>>>>>> members want to tackle the third ³unclear² category) to start reviewing >>>>>>> the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present >>>>>>> to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other >>>>>>> questions that anybody wants to suggest). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >>>>>>> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >>>>>>> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our >>>>>>> sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For >>>>>>> example, I know that Turner¹s comment (available >>>>>>> here:http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3 >>>>>>> VcnSR7.pdf >>>>>>> <http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnS >>>>>>> R7.pdf> ) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the >>>>>>> attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted >>>>>>> it. J So I want to make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex >>>>>>> E that we also ought to be reviewing. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd D. Williams >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Counsel >>>>>>> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >>>>>>> One CNN Center, 10 North >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >>>>>>> P: 404-827-2234 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> F: 404-827-1994 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach >>>>>>> of material service terms such as Internet abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Google >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Access Now >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service >>>>>>> terms such as net abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Greg McMullen >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Ralf Haring >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Liam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Sam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Dan M >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Not your business >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Simon Kissane >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) TS >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Cort Wee >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Alex Xu >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Kenneth Godwin >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Sebastian Broussier >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Andrew Merenbach >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 25) Finn Ellis >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 26) Aaron Holmes >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 27) Michael Ekstrand >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 28) Homer >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 29) Donuts >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 30) Michael Ho >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 31) Key Systems >>>>>>> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework. >>>>>>> 1) BC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) MPAA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) ISPCP >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) INTA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) IACC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) NCSG >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Cyberinvasion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Phil Crooker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Aaron Myers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Mike Fewings >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Name withheld >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Gary Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Byunghoon Choi >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Reid Baker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Nick O¹Dell >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Time Warner >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) RIAA & IFPI >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) IPC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Vanda Scartezini >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Tim Kramer >>>>>>> * Bucket Three: unclear. >>>>>>> 1) Sven Slootweg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Brendan Conniff >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) Marc Schauber >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Aaron Mason >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Kevin Szprychel >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Christopher >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) James Ford >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shantanu Gupta >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Christopher Smith >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Private >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Robert Lukitsh >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Adam Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Charles >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Aaron Dalton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Ian McNeil >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Adam Creighton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Anand S. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Lucas Stadler >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Alan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>

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A very general summary of the comments that accompanied the Save Domain Privacy petition
by Mary Wong Aug. 14, 2015

Aug. 14, 2015

Dear all, To various degrees each Sub Team cc¹d here has been discussing how it wishes to approach both the specific language of, as well as the additional comments that accompanied, the Save Domain Privacy petition that was signed by 10,042 people. I did a quick skim of the additional comments that were sent in as an attachment to the petition and prepared the following summary based on the initial categories used by the Save Domain Privacy organizers in their statement. Some of this may be more relevant or useful to one rather than another Sub Team, but I thought it may be helpful to send it to all of you nonetheless. For Sub Team 2 on Section 1.3.3, while there were quite a few comments that did not distinguish between personal-use domains and websites with those used for commercial purposes, there were other commenters who linked their concerns over privacy or anonymity with their specific experiences as registrants or proxy customers of domains that are used in relation to online financial transactions of one sort or other. Please see the categories below for additional details. For Sub Team 3 on Annex E, on the question of whether ³verifiable evidence² means only a court order, no commenter expressly said this is what the phrase must mean, although a few noted that disclosure should only take place upon either a court order, warrant, due process or (in one instance) ³some legal document². Several mentioned the possibility of getting a subpoena or a warrant (with a few adding that this is due process that should be obtained from legal channels, law enforcement or a government agency). Others simply noted that these are existing channels that can be used without specifying if they believed these to be the only ones. One or two mentioned the need that disclosure be made only upon ³probable cause² or ³good cause² but without specifically linking this to a court order. As such, and if I may, I don¹t think we can say that there is unequivocal support from the additional comments to the petition for one specific meaning to the term ³verifiable² (should the Sub Team or Working Group wish to go down that path). While there were numerous comments that simply stated the commenter¹s wish for privacy and/or the need to respect the right to privacy in general terms, there were also numerous commenters that tried to relate their opinions to specific concerns. Generally, the most common concerns that can be gleaned from these additional comments to the SDP petition seem to be: * Doxing/SWAT-ing and concerns about physical safety (e.g. stalking, harassment or where registrant is in an unsafe or threatening location) * Anonymity needs for certain individuals and organizations (e.g. those serving at-risk communities, targeted minorities, political and religious activists) * Lack of separation of online business presence from personal information, in some cases for cost reasons and especially for home-based or small businesses (e.g. online shop owners, freelancers, self-employed persons, writers) * Registrants who use pseudonyms and pen names for legal reasons (e.g. adult entertainers, erotica authors) * Data harvesting concerns * Spam, scams and identity theft (e.g. phishing attempts) * Other legitimate need for privacy of domain information, e.g. new product launches, business competitors, pre-launch websites I hope some at least of this is useful to your groups as you try to complete your discussions on this question and move on to reviewing the other comments. I will try to upload the document that contains all these additional comments to your respective Sub Team wiki pages if I can (it is 554 PDF pages!); in the meantime, here is the link to it in the public comment forum: http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfCL0NdiQmaL.pd f. Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org

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P.S. Re: Follow up from WG call on Tuesday
by Mary Wong Aug. 13, 2015

Aug. 13, 2015

SORRY not 1 September but 8 September as the ³due date² for deliverables from this Sub Team 3; 1 September is the deadline for Sub Team 2! Cheers, and don¹t panic, Mary From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org> Date: Thursday, August 13, 2015 at 16:07 Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Follow up from WG call on Tuesday > Dear Sub Team 3 members, > > I¹m writing to ask how you would like to proceed with your work in terms of > finalizing your analysis of the comments and developing recommendations for > the Working Group. The current Work Plan has the 1 September meeting as when > those recommendations should be presented to the WG (though obviously things > can be moved around depending on the progress made by each Sub Team). > > From the WG discussion on the call, the following questions may merit further > deliberation: > > -Does "verifiable evidence" mean more (i.e. a higher standard) than what is > currently in Annex E? > -The Save Domain Privacy petition drafters did not intend for detailed parsing > as between ³verified² and ³verifiable²; their context was what's in the RAA, > which basically means not just taking the word of the requester "as is". In > view of this explanation, should the Sub Team, in dealing with the SDP > petition (not the additional comments sent in along with it) use the plain > meaning of "verifiable" (which may, but does not necessarily mean only, a > court order) or some other meaning? > -What approach does the Sub Team wish to take in relation to the additional > comments sent in by signatories to the Save Domain Privacy petition? > -Since requiring a court order may not always be practical and certain > providers already have a practice where they disclose upon what they judge to > be sufficient evidence, how (if at all) should this factor into the Sub Team¹s > recommendations? > > There are of course also substantive comments that the team included in its > summary that were not as fully discussed on the WG call this week. > > Would a Sub Team call to work through those comments and the questions above > be helpful? I can send around a Doodle poll for early next week if so, unless > you would like to have a call immediately following the WG meeting on Tuesday > 18 August next week? > > Thanks and cheers > Mary > > Mary Wong > Senior Policy Director > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) > Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 > Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org > > > > From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong > <mary.wong(a)icann.org> > Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 21:00 > Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> > Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions > about inclusion > >> Thanks much, Vicky and everyone I will accept all changes in this document >> and send it out to the WG. If it¹s all right with you, I¹ll see if I can add >> some brief descriptive sub-headings to the various sections. As noted >> previously, when sending it out I¹ll be sure to mention that this is still a >> draft document and certain aspects continue to be the subject of discussion >> amongst the Sub Team. >> >> Cheers >> Mary >> >> Mary Wong >> Senior Policy Director >> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org >> >> >> From: Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler(a)riaa.com> >> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 20:39 >> To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net>, "Williams, Todd" >> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >> Cc: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" >> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> >> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >>> Please see attached. I¹ve tried to incorporate Todd¹s suggestions. I¹ve >>> also deleted stuff that seemed repetitive with other noted comments or >>> comment descriptions and/or provide a more neutral description of the >>> criticisms where applicable. Please note this is preliminary, and I may >>> have further comments down the line. - V >>> >>> >>> From: Holly Raiche [mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net] >>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 8:02 PM >>> To: Williams, Todd >>> Cc: Victoria Sheckler; Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> Folks >>> >>> >>> >>> I think I am repeating myself here, but we are getting into dangerous >>> territory if we put ourselves in the place of the signatories and/or >>> drafters to decide what they meant by verifiable evidence¹. Personally, I >>> think it means something one would be happy to place before a court, (but >>> clearly PRIOR to the outcome of a judicial process) but that is just me. >>> Arguably, the context of the term could agree with my interpretation - or >>> something akin to a legal judgment of some sort. >>> >>> >>> >>> So yes, we need to agree to disagree. >>> >>> >>> >>> And I think it is a sensible suggestion to have two or three of us explain >>> that we haven¹t reached agreement on the implications of the use of the >>> term. >>> >>> >>> >>> Holly >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> On 11 Aug 2015, at 8:38 am, Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> wrote: >>> >>> >>>> Thanks Vicky. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> For everybody: the more I¹ve thought about it, the more I¹ve come to the >>>> conclusion that we¹re probably not going to resolve our differences on how >>>> to interpret ³verifiable evidence² before 10:00 AM tomorrow. So in the >>>> interest of being able to circulate something to the WG before our call, I >>>> propose that the only reference to the SDP submissions in our document be >>>> something like: >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> We also note that the Save Domain Privacy petition which had 10,042 >>>> signatories and also included [x] number of comments argued that ³privacy >>>> providers should not be forced to reveal my private information without >>>> verifiable evidence of wrongdoing.² We as a sub-team could not agree on >>>> how to interpret ³verifiable evidence,² and will leave that discussion to >>>> the larger WG. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> And then Kathy, Sara, and I can each just take a little bit of time on the >>>> call tomorrow to explain our respective suggested interpretations of >>>> ³verifiable evidence² to the larger WG and leave it to them. What does >>>> everybody think of that? >>>> >>>> TW. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: Victoria Sheckler [mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com >>>> <mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com> ] >>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 5:01 PM >>>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org >>>> <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Please wait for my comments before distributing anything to the broader >>>> group. I will send them tonight. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:50 PM >>>> To: Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thanks Mary. No, I¹m not putting my name on this. Nobody has responded to >>>> the questions that I raised earlier today (see attached). And we still >>>> don¹t have Vicky¹s comments. Just to reiterate my problems with the >>>> attached: >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> · The attached says that our sub-team is debating whether >>>> ³verifiable evidence of wrongdoing² either means court order or ³a higher >>>> standard of evidence and proof in Annex E (which is not currently a >>>> ³verifiable evidence² standard) before disclosure.² But that is not an >>>> accurate representation of our internal debate, as I¹ve outlined in the >>>> attached emails. I¹m fine telling the WG that we can¹t decide how to >>>> interpret ³verifiable evidence² (though I still don¹t understand how to >>>> interpret ³verifiable evidence² to mean ³court order²). But if we do so, >>>> we at least have to accurately reflect what the competing arguments are. >>>> >>>> · I don¹t understand the statement that ³the sub-team noted but has >>>> not yet evaluated the 11,000 comments received from commenters arriving >>>> from the Respect Our Privacy website. These commenters, each individually, >>>> urged a rejection of Annex E in favor of due process as defined by judicial >>>> process² and that ³The sub-team is continuing to review and weigh these >>>> comments.² What does that mean? I thought from the attached email >>>> exchange that we were adding a bullet point to Category Two (after the >>>> bullet point about Key Systems) about those comments. Why are we now >>>> saying that we haven¹t evaluated them and that we¹ll continue to review and >>>> weigh them? What does that mean? >>>> >>>> · I don¹t understand the long inclusion of arguments from Jeff >>>> Wheelhouse, Simon Kissane, ICA, EasyDNS, Endurance, and Donuts. To be >>>> precise: I¹m fine if this sub-team wants to provide argumentation in the >>>> document. But if we¹re going to do that, then we need to do it fairly, to >>>> give the WG an accurate representation. So I¹ll go back through my section >>>> and include the argumentation from INTA, MPAA, RIAA, Turner, etc., which I >>>> intentionally left out of my draft, because I was trying to keep this >>>> document as neutral as possible (because that was how I viewed the >>>> objective of our sub-team: to fairly report back to the larger WG). >>>> Obviously, to the extent that the comments I analyzed presented arguments >>>> on two sides of a question (e.g., why the cost-recovery provision in >>>> Section I(B)(iii) should stay or go), then I tried to fairly and succinctly >>>> summarize those arguments on both sides, for the benefit of the WG. But I >>>> think the only other argumentation that I included was the one sentence >>>> from individual commenter Mike Fewings. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Todd >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:00 PM >>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thanks, Sara! If it¹s all right with everyone, I¹ll send this version >>>> around to the WG, noting that it is still a draft under discussion by the >>>> Sub Team and as such there may be further updates on the call tomorrow >>>> (bearing in mind that Vicky has indicated she may have some comments >>>> tonight). Additionally, I can also note that some of the language in the >>>> draft is also still under discussion by the Sub Team, and some of the >>>> issues the Sub Team is discussing will be highlighted during the update to >>>> the WG. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Let me know if you would prefer another approach. Thanks! >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Cheers >>>> >>>> Mary >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Mary Wong >>>> >>>> Senior Policy Director >>>> >>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>> >>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>> >>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 13:32 >>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>>> >>>>> Mary, >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Attached is the summary document that now includes my edits. Since it >>>>> appears that we are now addressing Save Domain Privacy and Respect Our >>>>> Privacy in separate paragraphs/sections of this document, I have removed >>>>> references to both petitions from other sections so that there is no >>>>> confusion. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Sara >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: Mary Wong >>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM >>>>> To: Sara Bockey, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Hi Sara sorry, I haven¹t yet combined your document with Kathy¹s; please >>>>> feel free to use whichever works best for you (e.g. dropping your >>>>> document, with edits, into Kathy¹s, or just editing yours and sending it >>>>> back to me). I attach both for your convenience. If I¹ve missed out a >>>>> version that came in after these, please, everyone, let me know! >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Thanks so much! >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Cheers >>>>> >>>>> Mary >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 12:31 >>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I¹m having a hard time locating the latest document. Do we have all the >>>>>> ³bucket² comments in one document yet? If so, can someone circulate it? >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:02 AM >>>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi Todd, yes, certainly thank you! Actually, my second suggestion was >>>>>> really meant to have us just include a description of the 4 categories >>>>>> (buckets) somewhere in the document, preferably early on. I agree that >>>>>> any conclusion about the petition comments shouldn¹t be included unless >>>>>> the Sub Team has agreed on it. As has been the case elsewhere, it may >>>>>> also be possible to ³square bracket² or otherwise highlight the >>>>>> options/differences under consideration, should that be a more >>>>>> appropriate alternative before tomorrow. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Cheers >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>> >>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>> >>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>> >>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>> >>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 11:54 >>>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Mary. To your last point: I think the question of whether the >>>>>>> 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition support or >>>>>>> oppose the basic premise of Annex E is what we¹re debating. So no, we >>>>>>> shouldn¹t use that sentence until we¹ve decided that point. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I think we¹ve still got some good emails going on these open questions. >>>>>>> But we shouldn¹t hold up your sending out the agenda. Could you send >>>>>>> out the agenda noting that our sub-team will be presenting, but then >>>>>>> circulate our final document later once it¹s done (but before tomorrow >>>>>>> morning obviously)? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >>>>>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 11:38 AM >>>>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Dear all, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> As I¹m preparing to send out the agenda for the WG call tomorrow, along >>>>>>> with associated documents, I¹m trying to consolidate Kathy¹s edited >>>>>>> document with Sara¹s review that wasn¹t in Kathy¹s version. I also >>>>>>> thought to offer the following suggested edit to the language around >>>>>>> ³verifiable evidence² for your consideration: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "The sub-team is working to better understand the meaning of ³verifiable >>>>>>> evidence of wrongdoing² and whether these commenters intended for this >>>>>>> wording to seek a different or more specific standard for >>>>>>> revealdisclosure, namelysuch as a court order in which the court >>>>>>> ³verifies² the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial >>>>>>> finding, or alternatively, whether the commenters seek a higher standard >>>>>>> of evidence and proof in Annex E (which isdoes not currently specify >>>>>>> what is a ³verifiable evidence² standard) before disclosure. In this >>>>>>> regard the sub-team notes that many signatories to the petition also >>>>>>> added specific comments that may refer to this standard. These comments >>>>>>> are currently under review." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The other suggestion I had was to reorganize the document slightly, to >>>>>>> make it clearer what the ³buckets² are. In this regard, I suggest moving >>>>>>> up the following summary from Sara to where Kathy¹s insertions began >>>>>>> (after the specific suggestions for Annex E and before Darcy¹s >>>>>>> additions): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "Our sub-team also reviewed and analyzed 39 comments including one >>>>>>> with 10,000+ signatures from the Respect Our Privacy petition and one >>>>>>> with 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition that >>>>>>> oppose the basic premise of Annex E. The comments fell into 1 or 4 >>>>>>> categories: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 1 - No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 2 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 3 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Category 4 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases >>>>>>> of abuse." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please let me know if you have any comments or objections to the above. >>>>>>> Thank you! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 10:13 >>>>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, Kathy >>>>>>> Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, >>>>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Kathy. My thoughts on the attached: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · My only point on the ³contested vs. uncontested² language was to >>>>>>> distinguish those suggested changes to Annex E for which we received >>>>>>> comments on both sides of a question vs. those suggested changes for >>>>>>> which we did not. Mainly it was just to distinguish the final two >>>>>>> paragraphs conceptually. But your changes serve that same purpose well. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · I don¹t understand why we would include ³while seeking >>>>>>> significantly higher standards for disclosure and options to disclosure² >>>>>>> in the third paragraph. We get to what changes the various comments >>>>>>> suggested (including which comments asked for higher disclosure >>>>>>> standards, and which asked for lower) later in the document. That third >>>>>>> paragraph is just noting which comments supported certain sections of >>>>>>> Annex E. Plus I¹m not sure that all of the comments mentioned in that >>>>>>> third paragraph did in fact seek ³significantly higher standards for >>>>>>> disclosure.² >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Isn¹t the analysis of the 11,000 comments from Respect our >>>>>>> Privacy contained in Sara and Holly¹s section (see attached)? Why would >>>>>>> we reference them twice? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Darcy¹s analysis of the ³miscellaneous² bucket looks great. >>>>>>> Many thanks Darcy in many ways I think you took the most difficult >>>>>>> part, because sometimes it¹s hard to make sense of how exactly those >>>>>>> comments were relevant! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally: for the reasons I¹ve already outlined in the attached email, I >>>>>>> don¹t understand why we would say that the process outlined in Annex E >>>>>>> ³is not currently a verifiable evidence standard.² As I mentioned >>>>>>> before, the "evidence" that Annex E requires, as outlined in Sections >>>>>>> II(A), (B), and (C), is extensive. So I don¹t see any argument why >>>>>>> Annex E wouldn¹t meet the ³evidence² part of ³verifiable evidence.² >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> So I think what we¹re really trying to interpret is ³verifiable.² And >>>>>>> Kathy in the attached has offered the interpretation that ³verifiable² >>>>>>> means ³a court order in which the court verifies¹ the abuse or >>>>>>> infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding.² But if that was >>>>>>> the correct interpretation, wouldn¹t the word be ³verified² instead of >>>>>>> ³verifiable²? If a court has issued an order, then it has already done >>>>>>> the verifying. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Rather, I think the basic plain meaning of ³verifiable² and hence the >>>>>>> meaning that we should assume the 10,000+ supporters signed on to is >>>>>>> simply ³able to be checked or proved.² So it seems much simpler to read >>>>>>> ³verifiable² to support the portions of Sections III(A), (B), and (C) of >>>>>>> Annex E that give P/P Providers the ability to verify the evidence >>>>>>> submitted by a Requester by notifying the P/P Customer of the complaint, >>>>>>> reviewing the P/P Customer¹s response, and then responding to the >>>>>>> Requester with either disclosure or its reasons for refusing to disclose >>>>>>> which reasons may come from either the Customer under Section >>>>>>> III(C)(ii), or from the P/P Provider¹s own investigation under Section >>>>>>> III(C)(iii). In other words, the most plausible reading of ³verifiable² >>>>>>> is that it simply means that it is not enough for the Requester to >>>>>>> provide any evidence and then disclosure automatically follows. Rather, >>>>>>> the evidence must be capable of being verified. Which is what Section >>>>>>> III provides. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> ] >>>>>>> Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 7:08 PM >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >; Williams, Todd >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; >>>>>>> gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks everyone, that is a lot of work and a document that will clearly >>>>>>> help advance the WG¹s progress quite a bit! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Kathy can I confirm that the document you edited is Darcy¹s update to >>>>>>> Todd¹s last version, and so does not include what was added/sent by >>>>>>> Sara? I¹m trying to keep all the drafts clear and ordered, and that¹s >>>>>>> what it looks like to me. If that¹s the case, I will add Sara¹s report >>>>>>> to Kathy¹s document (unless there are further changes between now and >>>>>>> the WG call on Tuesday). I¹ll then upload the consolidated draft >>>>>>> document and have that ready for the WG at the Tuesday meeting. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> All it seems to me that the question as to where the comments relating >>>>>>> to ³verifiable evidence² should fit is a question that you may wish to >>>>>>> bring back to the WG on Tuesday, if there is still no agreement amongst >>>>>>> yourselves by then. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally two minor suggested changes, both to do with numbers: first, >>>>>>> I¹d suggest that instead of saying 10,042 comments came with the Save >>>>>>> Domain Privacy petition we should say that the petition had 10,042 >>>>>>> signatories. Secondly, I suggest adding the word ³approximately² to the >>>>>>> 11,000 Respect Your Privacy comments. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I hope this helps, and thank you all again. Following the WG call on >>>>>>> Tuesday, please let me know how you would like to proceed and if there >>>>>>> is a need for the Sub Team to get together for a call to discuss its >>>>>>> final recommendations to the WG (due in about 2-3 weeks from this >>>>>>> Tuesday, according to the current WG Work Plan). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Sunday, August 9, 2015 at 18:40 >>>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Todd and All, >>>>>>> Nice job! I reviewed the entire document and attached is my crack at our >>>>>>> summary. I think it includes everyone additions and edits to date (but >>>>>>> please check!). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I've lost track of who drafted what sections, but I think we are moving >>>>>>> in the right direction. Some really good work has been done. I made one >>>>>>> small change and two bigger ones and few general edits. The small change >>>>>>> is removing the reference to contested and uncontested edits since I am >>>>>>> not sure what an uncontested edit and whether commenters would have >>>>>>> contested it if they knew what the proposed edit would be. >>>>>>> (Unfortunately, since our "Reply Comment" period was removed by ICANN, >>>>>>> we don't have this important reply time to review others edits and >>>>>>> support or contest them.). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I also added in two short paragraphs. The first one describes the Save >>>>>>> Domains Privacy comments, the petition language, and the discussion now >>>>>>> in place in our sub-team over the meaning of these comments. Perhaps >>>>>>> others in the WG can help us shed light on the questions being raised in >>>>>>> our sub-team. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second paragraph summarizes the 11,000 Respect Our Privacy comments. >>>>>>> They told us that "No one's personal information should be revealed >>>>>>> without a court order," and of course, we should reflect them in our >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On my machine, my redlines appear in red, and the prior editor's >>>>>>> redlines (for the paragraphs at the end starting "Finally, our sub-team >>>>>>> reviewed and analyzed 21 miscellaneous comments...") appear in grey. I >>>>>>> hope these redlines are clear for you too. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and enjoy the rest of the weekend, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Kathy: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Attached is my first crack at our portion of the summary (on the Bucket >>>>>>> Two comments). Let me know if you have any suggested edits, additions, >>>>>>> subtractions, etc. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Also, I¹ve copied the entire sub-team mailing list on this email, for >>>>>>> two reasons: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) So that there is a transparent public record of any >>>>>>> back-and-forth red-lining of the document that we may do; and >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) So that Sara and Holly for Bucket One, and Darcy for our >>>>>>> miscellaneous bucket, can see what I envision for our summary report to >>>>>>> the WG. If you all want to add your summaries to this one to make it >>>>>>> consistent in terms of formatting, etc., feel free. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I had one thought Sara and Holly for Bucket One (which came to me as I >>>>>>> was conceptually dividing our Bucket Two comments into general support, >>>>>>> specific support, suggested changes by addition, suggested edits >>>>>>> uncontested, suggested edits contested): it may be helpful for the WG if >>>>>>> we divide our Bucket One comments into categories along a spectrum. As >>>>>>> I envision it (in order along the spectrum): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. I >>>>>>> would put the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² comments here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP). E.g., I think the Google comment would >>>>>>> go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of >>>>>>> abuse. E.g., I think the ICA and EasyDNS comments would go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> For the WG¹s sake, we may also want to distinguish between those Bucket >>>>>>> One comments that couched their discussion of disclosure/publication in >>>>>>> terms of what P/P Providers ought to be required to do (or not required >>>>>>> to do) in response to external third-party disclosure requests such as >>>>>>> from IP owners or LEA (e.g., the Google and Key Systems comments) vs. >>>>>>> those Bucket One comments that simply said ³no publication/disclosure >>>>>>> absent a court order² without distinguishing b/w whether the impetus for >>>>>>> the disclosure was an external third-party request or the P/P Provider¹s >>>>>>> own desire to disclose/publish (e.g., the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> comments). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> TW. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:06 AM >>>>>>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> ; Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> ; >>>>>>> gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Whoops, I left out Jawala at the bottom, who should go in bucket two. >>>>>>> Sorry. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:01 AM >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Yes, thanks Mary. Of the highlighted additions in the attached, I¹ve >>>>>>> added the comments from Stefan Grunder, Reagan Lynch, Reid Baker, and >>>>>>> the Save Domain Privacy petitioners to the second bucket that Kathy and >>>>>>> I are reviewing/summarizing (accept premise of Annex E, but with >>>>>>> changes). I think the highlighted comments from Dan M, Simon Kissane, >>>>>>> Adam Creighton, Jason Weinberg, J Wilson, Dylan Henderson, M.B., and the >>>>>>> Respect our Privacy submissions should go in the first bucket that Holly >>>>>>> and Sara are reviewing/summarizing (reject premise of Annex E). Thanks. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 6:47 PM >>>>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Tx Mary! >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks again, Todd, Kathy, Holly and everyone this is just a note to >>>>>>> follow up on one portion of the discussion during the WG call earlier >>>>>>> today. I¹ll be going through the current WG Public Comment Review Tool >>>>>>> (Part 1, covering the WG¹s preliminary recommendations #1 through #9) to >>>>>>> pick out those additional comments that, though ³attached² to a >>>>>>> different recommendation or question, is actually more directly relevant >>>>>>> to the scope of this Sub Team. What this means, I¹m afraid, is that >>>>>>> there will most likely be an updated version of the Sub Team¹s Review >>>>>>> Tool (i.e. the Word document that you¹re working off of). I will try to >>>>>>> get that to you all as soon as I possibly can with the caveat that as >>>>>>> I complete preparation of the WG Tool Part 2 (covering the remainder of >>>>>>> the WG¹s preliminary recommendations except for those being covered by >>>>>>> the Sub Teams) there may yet be further updates. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I¹m happy to help update any existing summary documents you may already >>>>>>> have as a result, of course, and, Todd, to your point about adding an >>>>>>> extra row to the existing Tool to reflect the Save Domain Privacy >>>>>>> comment in their petition, I¹m happy to do that (per Kathy¹s suggestion >>>>>>> on the call today) while I¹m doing the current update anyway. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:55 >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, Holly Raiche >>>>>>> <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Kathy and Holly. Just to summarize where I think we are (and >>>>>>> again, I¹ve been working backward from what Sub-team 1.3.2 presented >>>>>>> last week, which I¹ve attached I assume that what our sub-team will >>>>>>> present next week will look something like that): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · First there will be a paragraph (or bullet point or however we >>>>>>> want to style it) discussing those comments that argued that the WG¹s >>>>>>> proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can >>>>>>> never disclose and/or publish under any circumstances. This section >>>>>>> will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come >>>>>>> from, what did they argue. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that the WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process. Again, this section will discuss: how >>>>>>> many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they >>>>>>> argue, etc. I agree with Kathy that the ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> submissions should be analyzed in this paragraph. I also agree with >>>>>>> Holly¹s point though that in this paragraph we should note that the >>>>>>> ³Respect our Privacy² submissions took a more extreme position than >>>>>>> others (like Google¹s, for example), in that they argued that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, and >>>>>>> didn¹t accept that other legal or ICANN-recognized processes (such as a >>>>>>> UDRP for example) could suffice. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that our WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court >>>>>>> order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. My plan for this paragraph was to first have a general >>>>>>> summary of whose comments fell in this category. And I agree with Kathy >>>>>>> that the Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit here, in that >>>>>>> ³verifiable evidence of wrongdoing² is what II(A), (B), and (C) of Annex >>>>>>> E contemplate. Following that summary, my plan was then to list each >>>>>>> proposed change to the language of Annex E (perhaps in a bullet point >>>>>>> format), followed by who recommended it, and what their arguments were >>>>>>> for it. That said, I disagree with Kathy that each of those comments >>>>>>> and all of those suggested changes will necessarily be to a ³higher >>>>>>> standard.² From my initial review, I think the comments are going to >>>>>>> recommend changes in both directions, which we ought to reflect in the >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> we¹re not sure what to do with. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> That¹s how I see our task anyway. So far we have Sara and Holly writing >>>>>>> the first draft of the first two paragraphs, me and Kathy writing the >>>>>>> third, and Darcy writing the fourth (though of course we can all edit >>>>>>> the final before it goes to the entire WG). Let me know if anybody else >>>>>>> wants to join. And with that, my quick thoughts on some of the >>>>>>> bigger-picture points below: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Given that our summary will only be on what commenters said >>>>>>> about Annex E, and given that Annex E doesn¹t touch on LE requests, my >>>>>>> thought is that we should leave analysis of comments on LE to the other >>>>>>> sub-teams (I¹m pretty sure LE would fall in both sub-team 1 and sub-team >>>>>>> 4¹s work). Not that I¹m not interested in LE just that we have plenty >>>>>>> of work as it is, without duplicating work that is being handled by >>>>>>> other sub-teams. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · In response to Mary¹s email (attached): I agree that I¹m not >>>>>>> sure that I see the utility of adding the form-based submissions to the >>>>>>> compiled template/matrix Word doc. As I understand it, the attached >>>>>>> Word doc is just a tool to help us get to our final work product, which >>>>>>> is the summary presentation to the rest of the WG. If we make a point >>>>>>> to discuss the form-based submissions in our summary presentation to the >>>>>>> rest of the WG (which, as I noted above, we¹re certainly planning to >>>>>>> do), then I don¹t see why we¹d need to add columns to the attached Word >>>>>>> doc for each of those. I mean, if somebody wants to take the time to do >>>>>>> so, that¹s fine. I just don¹t see how that helps us get to our final >>>>>>> work product. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally, one quick point: I see our sub-team¹s role, and the >>>>>>> role of the summary that we are to present to the entire WG next week, >>>>>>> as purely descriptive. In other words: what did the comments say? To >>>>>>> the extent that there is going to be any normative or substantive >>>>>>> discussion that goes one step beyond that OK, this is what the >>>>>>> comments said, but now what do we do about that? I think that has to >>>>>>> be left to the entire WG to debate after we present our summary. I¹m >>>>>>> just throwing out that reminder b/c I think it will help keep our work >>>>>>> easier. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 5:49 AM >>>>>>> To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net >>>>>>> <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi All, >>>>>>> I support the division of comments into buckets as Todd has created and >>>>>>> Holly has revised. Do we have four buckets now? Below (and preceeded by >>>>>>> "==>") I show where the two large groups of missing comments might go. >>>>>>> Tx! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Everyone >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> First- sorry not to follow up sooner. And Todd - I agree with the >>>>>>> refined break up into three buckets- with an additional element or so. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The first category is clearly no, not ever, under any circumstances. >>>>>>> All that is needed from us is to count the comments and where they are >>>>>>> from. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> So bucket one, no disclosure ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second is one I¹d like to expand a bit - and see where that gets us. >>>>>>> As Todd and I suggest, it is a category that specifically states the >>>>>>> need for a legal process. (it is framed variously as court order court >>>>>>> process, Subpoena) My suggestion is that the overall heading is no >>>>>>> reveal unless there has been a legal process of some sort in the >>>>>>> relevant jurisdiction. The wrinkle here is that, under an ICANN dispute >>>>>>> resolution process (e.g., UDRP) where details of the customer would be >>>>>>> revealed. Given this is a recognised ICANN process in which details are >>>>>>> already revealed, my suggestion is to characterise th category in that >>>>>>> way. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Two, disclosure of data to private parties and law >>>>>>> enforcement only subject to court order. This is where the "Respect our >>>>>>> Privacy" thousands of individual submissions fits: "No one¹s personal >>>>>>> information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of >>>>>>> whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement >>>>>>> agency². (Mary, do we happen to have a final count of these individual >>>>>>> submission?) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My reading of both categories is to say that Annex E is not necessary >>>>>>> for either. (and Kathy - the comments you refer to below would fit into >>>>>>> the first or second basket) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The third category is the only one that goes beyond what is already >>>>>>> required to suggest there may be other circumstances where the contact >>>>>>> details of the customer would be revealed to a third party that is >>>>>>> either not part of an ICANN process or a court process. And the >>>>>>> challenge will be to work through what those situations are. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Three (formerly Two) is now the one that accepts the premise >>>>>>> of Annex E, as Holly and Todd have laid out, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework to the higher standards requested by >>>>>>> commenters. The question for me is what bucket the 11,000 Save Domain >>>>>>> Privacy petition signatories fit in: they wrote "Privacy providers >>>>>>> should not forced to reveal my private information without verifiable >>>>>>> evidence of wrongdoing." Can Annex E be revised to raise the standard >>>>>>> to require "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" w/o a court order? If so, >>>>>>> what changes must be made in Annex E to meet this higher standard? If >>>>>>> not, do these 11,000+ petition signatures really belong in [revised] >>>>>>> Bucket 2, court order? I look forward to our discussions ahead! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My next query is where we put Law Enforcement Agency requests. If they >>>>>>> have a warrant, I¹d suggest that we put them in the second category - in >>>>>>> most jurisdictions, warrants are not granted without some kind of >>>>>>> judicial oversight. Without a warrant (or some judicial oversight), >>>>>>> requests by Law Enforcement/Security requests would be under some kind >>>>>>> of Annex. >>>>>>> ==> Holly, do I understand right that this might be a new Bucket Four - >>>>>>> LE w/o CO -- Law Enforcement w/o Court Order. I think it makes sense >>>>>>> and I would like to see where the comments fall on this issue. Plus >>>>>>> Annex E is only for private individuals/private attorneys/private >>>>>>> companies. So now seems to be a good time to break out informal LE >>>>>>> requests into its own category. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I²ll be having a look at that third category >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My other way of looking at this issue is whether or not the relevant p/p >>>>>>> provider must make some sort of judgment call. For the first category - >>>>>>> the answer is a simple NO. For the second category, there is either >>>>>>> some sort of judicially approved document for that jurisdiction or an >>>>>>> approved ICANN process - or not. It is only in the third category that >>>>>>> the providers must make a judgment call on whether the requirements are >>>>>>> met, or not. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Quick note, we still need the miscellaneous bucket that Todd created >>>>>>> for "unclear" bucket, so [renamed] Bucket Five = unclear? Best, Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Happy to discuss >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Holly >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On 4 Aug 2015, at 8:44 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com> > wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Mary and All, >>>>>>> Glad to be with you on this subteam 3 and looking forward to our >>>>>>> discussion. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary, I was very glad to see that Turner Broadcasting comments had been >>>>>>> included in this comment summary. Let me ask about the 10,000+ comments >>>>>>> we received, the vast majority entitled: ICANN- Respect Our Privacy. All >>>>>>> of these comments contain a clear call: >>>>>>> - No one¹s personal information should be revealed without a court >>>>>>> order, >>>>>>> regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law >>>>>>> enforcement agency. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Sorry if I missed it, but is this call from so many thousands of >>>>>>> commenters for not disclosing p/p data to a private individual (which >>>>>>> would include a private lawyer) reflected in our comment summary tool? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and tx, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Dear all, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive >>>>>>> comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for >>>>>>> spotting this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for >>>>>>> the first question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for >>>>>>> the second question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) >>>>>>> on PAGE 39. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Apologies again for the inadvertent omission they have been added to >>>>>>> these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were >>>>>>> received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I¹ll update >>>>>>> the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>>>> <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 >>>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hello Todd and everyone, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I >>>>>>> apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of >>>>>>> comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting >>>>>>> the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am >>>>>>> very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes >>>>>>> WG members¹ questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits >>>>>>> don¹t replace WG members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. >>>>>>> At the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as >>>>>>> thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our >>>>>>> efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle eyes is the best arrangement. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address >>>>>>> specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the >>>>>>> online template responses that do the same. The Word document is >>>>>>> therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or >>>>>>> the full WG, as appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my >>>>>>> documents/collected comments and don¹t believe I have missed out any >>>>>>> others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word >>>>>>> documents I¹ve compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach >>>>>>> seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves >>>>>>> would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups >>>>>>> to tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, >>>>>>> and in doing so also note any comments that didn¹t address either so >>>>>>> that they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or >>>>>>> considered by the full WG (if appropriate). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked >>>>>>> through it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits >>>>>>> in the document you circulated . ? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance >>>>>>> from staff in any way! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 >>>>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >>>>>>> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was >>>>>>> helpful to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn >>>>>>> might help us decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, >>>>>>> I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two >>>>>>> basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I¹d recommend >>>>>>> that we do the same. Here are the two that I¹d propose: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >>>>>>> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a >>>>>>> court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >>>>>>> Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions >>>>>>> of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address >>>>>>> the arguments raised in these comments? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it >>>>>>> will help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before >>>>>>> us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how >>>>>>> we¹d otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A >>>>>>> comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose >>>>>>> and/or publish absent a court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex >>>>>>> E; it¹s arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the >>>>>>> comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated >>>>>>> (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to >>>>>>> make sure that they agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the >>>>>>> comments? Once we¹re comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the >>>>>>> next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some >>>>>>> members want to tackle the third ³unclear² category) to start reviewing >>>>>>> the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present >>>>>>> to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other >>>>>>> questions that anybody wants to suggest). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >>>>>>> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >>>>>>> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our >>>>>>> sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For >>>>>>> example, I know that Turner¹s comment (available >>>>>>> here:http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3 >>>>>>> VcnSR7.pdf >>>>>>> <http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnS >>>>>>> R7.pdf> ) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the >>>>>>> attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted >>>>>>> it. J So I want to make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex >>>>>>> E that we also ought to be reviewing. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd D. Williams >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Counsel >>>>>>> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >>>>>>> One CNN Center, 10 North >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >>>>>>> P: 404-827-2234 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> F: 404-827-1994 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach >>>>>>> of material service terms such as Internet abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Google >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Access Now >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service >>>>>>> terms such as net abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Greg McMullen >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Ralf Haring >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Liam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Sam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Dan M >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Not your business >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Simon Kissane >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) TS >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Cort Wee >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Alex Xu >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Kenneth Godwin >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Sebastian Broussier >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Andrew Merenbach >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 25) Finn Ellis >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 26) Aaron Holmes >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 27) Michael Ekstrand >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 28) Homer >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 29) Donuts >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 30) Michael Ho >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 31) Key Systems >>>>>>> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework. >>>>>>> 1) BC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) MPAA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) ISPCP >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) INTA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) IACC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) NCSG >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Cyberinvasion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Phil Crooker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Aaron Myers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Mike Fewings >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Name withheld >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Gary Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Byunghoon Choi >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Reid Baker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Nick O¹Dell >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Time Warner >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) RIAA & IFPI >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) IPC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Vanda Scartezini >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Tim Kramer >>>>>>> * Bucket Three: unclear. >>>>>>> 1) Sven Slootweg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Brendan Conniff >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) Marc Schauber >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Aaron Mason >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Kevin Szprychel >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Christopher >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) James Ford >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shantanu Gupta >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Christopher Smith >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Private >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Robert Lukitsh >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Adam Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Charles >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Aaron Dalton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Ian McNeil >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Adam Creighton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Anand S. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Lucas Stadler >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Alan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion
by Mary Wong Aug. 11, 2015

Aug. 11, 2015

Thanks much, Vicky and everyone I will accept all changes in this document and send it out to the WG. If it¹s all right with you, I¹ll see if I can add some brief descriptive sub-headings to the various sections. As noted previously, when sending it out I¹ll be sure to mention that this is still a draft document and certain aspects continue to be the subject of discussion amongst the Sub Team. Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler(a)riaa.com> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 20:39 To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net>, "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> Cc: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion > Please see attached. I¹ve tried to incorporate Todd¹s suggestions. I¹ve also > deleted stuff that seemed repetitive with other noted comments or comment > descriptions and/or provide a more neutral description of the criticisms where > applicable. Please note this is preliminary, and I may have further comments > down the line. - V > > > From: Holly Raiche [mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net] > Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 8:02 PM > To: Williams, Todd > Cc: Victoria Sheckler; Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org > Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions > about inclusion > > Folks > > > > I think I am repeating myself here, but we are getting into dangerous > territory if we put ourselves in the place of the signatories and/or drafters > to decide what they meant by verifiable evidence¹. Personally, I think it > means something one would be happy to place before a court, (but clearly PRIOR > to the outcome of a judicial process) but that is just me. Arguably, the > context of the term could agree with my interpretation - or something akin to > a legal judgment of some sort. > > > > So yes, we need to agree to disagree. > > > > And I think it is a sensible suggestion to have two or three of us explain > that we haven¹t reached agreement on the implications of the use of the term. > > > > Holly > > > > > > On 11 Aug 2015, at 8:38 am, Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> wrote: > > >> Thanks Vicky. >> >> >> >> For everybody: the more I¹ve thought about it, the more I¹ve come to the >> conclusion that we¹re probably not going to resolve our differences on how to >> interpret ³verifiable evidence² before 10:00 AM tomorrow. So in the interest >> of being able to circulate something to the WG before our call, I propose >> that the only reference to the SDP submissions in our document be something >> like: >> >> >> >> We also note that the Save Domain Privacy petition which had 10,042 >> signatories and also included [x] number of comments argued that ³privacy >> providers should not be forced to reveal my private information without >> verifiable evidence of wrongdoing.² We as a sub-team could not agree on how >> to interpret ³verifiable evidence,² and will leave that discussion to the >> larger WG. >> >> >> >> And then Kathy, Sara, and I can each just take a little bit of time on the >> call tomorrow to explain our respective suggested interpretations of >> ³verifiable evidence² to the larger WG and leave it to them. What does >> everybody think of that? >> >> TW. >> >> >> >> From: Victoria Sheckler [mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com >> <mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com> ] >> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 5:01 PM >> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org >> <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >> >> >> Please wait for my comments before distributing anything to the broader >> group. I will send them tonight. >> >> >> >> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:50 PM >> To: Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >> >> >> Thanks Mary. No, I¹m not putting my name on this. Nobody has responded to >> the questions that I raised earlier today (see attached). And we still don¹t >> have Vicky¹s comments. Just to reiterate my problems with the attached: >> >> >> >> · The attached says that our sub-team is debating whether ³verifiable >> evidence of wrongdoing² either means court order or ³a higher standard of >> evidence and proof in Annex E (which is not currently a ³verifiable evidence² >> standard) before disclosure.² But that is not an accurate representation of >> our internal debate, as I¹ve outlined in the attached emails. I¹m fine >> telling the WG that we can¹t decide how to interpret ³verifiable evidence² >> (though I still don¹t understand how to interpret ³verifiable evidence² to >> mean ³court order²). But if we do so, we at least have to accurately reflect >> what the competing arguments are. >> >> · I don¹t understand the statement that ³the sub-team noted but has >> not yet evaluated the 11,000 comments received from commenters arriving from >> the Respect Our Privacy website. These commenters, each individually, urged >> a rejection of Annex E in favor of due process as defined by judicial >> process² and that ³The sub-team is continuing to review and weigh these >> comments.² What does that mean? I thought from the attached email exchange >> that we were adding a bullet point to Category Two (after the bullet point >> about Key Systems) about those comments. Why are we now saying that we >> haven¹t evaluated them and that we¹ll continue to review and weigh them? >> What does that mean? >> >> · I don¹t understand the long inclusion of arguments from Jeff >> Wheelhouse, Simon Kissane, ICA, EasyDNS, Endurance, and Donuts. To be >> precise: I¹m fine if this sub-team wants to provide argumentation in the >> document. But if we¹re going to do that, then we need to do it fairly, to >> give the WG an accurate representation. So I¹ll go back through my section >> and include the argumentation from INTA, MPAA, RIAA, Turner, etc., which I >> intentionally left out of my draft, because I was trying to keep this >> document as neutral as possible (because that was how I viewed the objective >> of our sub-team: to fairly report back to the larger WG). Obviously, to the >> extent that the comments I analyzed presented arguments on two sides of a >> question (e.g., why the cost-recovery provision in Section I(B)(iii) should >> stay or go), then I tried to fairly and succinctly summarize those arguments >> on both sides, for the benefit of the WG. But I think the only other >> argumentation that I included was the one sentence from individual commenter >> Mike Fewings. >> >> >> >> Todd >> >> >> >> From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:00 PM >> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >> >> >> Thanks, Sara! If it¹s all right with everyone, I¹ll send this version around >> to the WG, noting that it is still a draft under discussion by the Sub Team >> and as such there may be further updates on the call tomorrow (bearing in >> mind that Vicky has indicated she may have some comments tonight). >> Additionally, I can also note that some of the language in the draft is also >> still under discussion by the Sub Team, and some of the issues the Sub Team >> is discussing will be highlighted during the update to the WG. >> >> >> >> Let me know if you would prefer another approach. Thanks! >> >> >> >> Cheers >> >> Mary >> >> >> >> Mary Wong >> >> Senior Policy Director >> >> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >> >> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >> >> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >> >> >> >> >> >> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 13:32 >> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >> >>> >>> Mary, >>> >>> >>> >>> Attached is the summary document that now includes my edits. Since it >>> appears that we are now addressing Save Domain Privacy and Respect Our >>> Privacy in separate paragraphs/sections of this document, I have removed >>> references to both petitions from other sections so that there is no >>> confusion. >>> >>> >>> >>> Thanks, >>> >>> >>> >>> Sara >>> >>> >>> >>> From: Mary Wong >>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM >>> To: Sara Bockey, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> >>> >>> Hi Sara sorry, I haven¹t yet combined your document with Kathy¹s; please >>> feel free to use whichever works best for you (e.g. dropping your document, >>> with edits, into Kathy¹s, or just editing yours and sending it back to me). >>> I attach both for your convenience. If I¹ve missed out a version that came >>> in after these, please, everyone, let me know! >>> >>> >>> >>> Thanks so much! >>> >>> >>> >>> Cheers >>> >>> Mary >>> >>> >>> >>> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 12:31 >>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com <mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com> > >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>> about inclusion >>> >>> >>>> >>>> I¹m having a hard time locating the latest document. Do we have all the >>>> ³bucket² comments in one document yet? If so, can someone circulate it? >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thanks! >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:02 AM >>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Hi Todd, yes, certainly thank you! Actually, my second suggestion was >>>> really meant to have us just include a description of the 4 categories >>>> (buckets) somewhere in the document, preferably early on. I agree that any >>>> conclusion about the petition comments shouldn¹t be included unless the Sub >>>> Team has agreed on it. As has been the case elsewhere, it may also be >>>> possible to ³square bracket² or otherwise highlight the options/differences >>>> under consideration, should that be a more appropriate alternative before >>>> tomorrow. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Cheers >>>> >>>> Mary >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Mary Wong >>>> >>>> Senior Policy Director >>>> >>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>> >>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>> >>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 11:54 >>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, >>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>> about inclusion >>>> >>>> >>>>> >>>>> Thanks Mary. To your last point: I think the question of whether the >>>>> 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition support or oppose >>>>> the basic premise of Annex E is what we¹re debating. So no, we shouldn¹t >>>>> use that sentence until we¹ve decided that point. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> I think we¹ve still got some good emails going on these open questions. >>>>> But we shouldn¹t hold up your sending out the agenda. Could you send out >>>>> the agenda noting that our sub-team will be presenting, but then circulate >>>>> our final document later once it¹s done (but before tomorrow morning >>>>> obviously)? >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >>>>> Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 11:38 AM >>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Dear all, >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> As I¹m preparing to send out the agenda for the WG call tomorrow, along >>>>> with associated documents, I¹m trying to consolidate Kathy¹s edited >>>>> document with Sara¹s review that wasn¹t in Kathy¹s version. I also thought >>>>> to offer the following suggested edit to the language around ³verifiable >>>>> evidence² for your consideration: >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> "The sub-team is working to better understand the meaning of ³verifiable >>>>> evidence of wrongdoing² and whether these commenters intended for this >>>>> wording to seek a different or more specific standard for >>>>> revealdisclosure, namelysuch as a court order in which the court >>>>> ³verifies² the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial >>>>> finding, or alternatively, whether the commenters seek a higher standard >>>>> of evidence and proof in Annex E (which isdoes not currently specify what >>>>> is a ³verifiable evidence² standard) before disclosure. In this regard the >>>>> sub-team notes that many signatories to the petition also added specific >>>>> comments that may refer to this standard. These comments are currently >>>>> under review." >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> The other suggestion I had was to reorganize the document slightly, to >>>>> make it clearer what the ³buckets² are. In this regard, I suggest moving >>>>> up the following summary from Sara to where Kathy¹s insertions began >>>>> (after the specific suggestions for Annex E and before Darcy¹s additions): >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> "Our sub-team also reviewed and analyzed 39 comments including one with >>>>> 10,000+ signatures from the Respect Our Privacy petition and one with >>>>> 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition that oppose the >>>>> basic premise of Annex E. The comments fell into 1 or 4 categories: >>>>> >>>>> Category 1 - No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>> >>>>> Category 2 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. >>>>> >>>>> Category 3 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP) >>>>> >>>>> Category 4 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or >>>>> other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases >>>>> of abuse." >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Please let me know if you have any comments or objections to the above. >>>>> Thank you! >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Cheers >>>>> >>>>> Mary >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Mary Wong >>>>> >>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>> >>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>> >>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>> >>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 10:13 >>>>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >, Kathy >>>>> Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, >>>>> "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>> about inclusion >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks Kathy. My thoughts on the attached: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> · My only point on the ³contested vs. uncontested² language was to >>>>>> distinguish those suggested changes to Annex E for which we received >>>>>> comments on both sides of a question vs. those suggested changes for >>>>>> which we did not. Mainly it was just to distinguish the final two >>>>>> paragraphs conceptually. But your changes serve that same purpose well. >>>>>> >>>>>> · I don¹t understand why we would include ³while seeking >>>>>> significantly higher standards for disclosure and options to disclosure² >>>>>> in the third paragraph. We get to what changes the various comments >>>>>> suggested (including which comments asked for higher disclosure >>>>>> standards, and which asked for lower) later in the document. That third >>>>>> paragraph is just noting which comments supported certain sections of >>>>>> Annex E. Plus I¹m not sure that all of the comments mentioned in that >>>>>> third paragraph did in fact seek ³significantly higher standards for >>>>>> disclosure.² >>>>>> >>>>>> · Isn¹t the analysis of the 11,000 comments from Respect our >>>>>> Privacy contained in Sara and Holly¹s section (see attached)? Why would >>>>>> we reference them twice? >>>>>> >>>>>> · Darcy¹s analysis of the ³miscellaneous² bucket looks great. Many >>>>>> thanks Darcy in many ways I think you took the most difficult part, >>>>>> because sometimes it¹s hard to make sense of how exactly those comments >>>>>> were relevant! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Finally: for the reasons I¹ve already outlined in the attached email, I >>>>>> don¹t understand why we would say that the process outlined in Annex E >>>>>> ³is not currently a verifiable evidence standard.² As I mentioned >>>>>> before, the "evidence" that Annex E requires, as outlined in Sections >>>>>> II(A), (B), and (C), is extensive. So I don¹t see any argument why Annex >>>>>> E wouldn¹t meet the ³evidence² part of ³verifiable evidence.² >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> So I think what we¹re really trying to interpret is ³verifiable.² And >>>>>> Kathy in the attached has offered the interpretation that ³verifiable² >>>>>> means ³a court order in which the court verifies¹ the abuse or >>>>>> infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding.² But if that was >>>>>> the correct interpretation, wouldn¹t the word be ³verified² instead of >>>>>> ³verifiable²? If a court has issued an order, then it has already done >>>>>> the verifying. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Rather, I think the basic plain meaning of ³verifiable² and hence the >>>>>> meaning that we should assume the 10,000+ supporters signed on to is >>>>>> simply ³able to be checked or proved.² So it seems much simpler to read >>>>>> ³verifiable² to support the portions of Sections III(A), (B), and (C) of >>>>>> Annex E that give P/P Providers the ability to verify the evidence >>>>>> submitted by a Requester by notifying the P/P Customer of the complaint, >>>>>> reviewing the P/P Customer¹s response, and then responding to the >>>>>> Requester with either disclosure or its reasons for refusing to disclose >>>>>> which reasons may come from either the Customer under Section >>>>>> III(C)(ii), or from the P/P Provider¹s own investigation under Section >>>>>> III(C)(iii). In other words, the most plausible reading of ³verifiable² >>>>>> is that it simply means that it is not enough for the Requester to >>>>>> provide any evidence and then disclosure automatically follows. Rather, >>>>>> the evidence must be capable of being verified. Which is what Section >>>>>> III provides. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>> ] >>>>>> Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 7:08 PM >>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >>>>>> >; Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks everyone, that is a lot of work and a document that will clearly >>>>>> help advance the WG¹s progress quite a bit! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Kathy can I confirm that the document you edited is Darcy¹s update to >>>>>> Todd¹s last version, and so does not include what was added/sent by Sara? >>>>>> I¹m trying to keep all the drafts clear and ordered, and that¹s what it >>>>>> looks like to me. If that¹s the case, I will add Sara¹s report to Kathy¹s >>>>>> document (unless there are further changes between now and the WG call on >>>>>> Tuesday). I¹ll then upload the consolidated draft document and have that >>>>>> ready for the WG at the Tuesday meeting. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> All it seems to me that the question as to where the comments relating >>>>>> to ³verifiable evidence² should fit is a question that you may wish to >>>>>> bring back to the WG on Tuesday, if there is still no agreement amongst >>>>>> yourselves by then. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Finally two minor suggested changes, both to do with numbers: first, >>>>>> I¹d suggest that instead of saying 10,042 comments came with the Save >>>>>> Domain Privacy petition we should say that the petition had 10,042 >>>>>> signatories. Secondly, I suggest adding the word ³approximately² to the >>>>>> 11,000 Respect Your Privacy comments. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I hope this helps, and thank you all again. Following the WG call on >>>>>> Tuesday, please let me know how you would like to proceed and if there is >>>>>> a need for the Sub Team to get together for a call to discuss its final >>>>>> recommendations to the WG (due in about 2-3 weeks from this Tuesday, >>>>>> according to the current WG Work Plan). >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>> >>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>> >>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>> >>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>> >>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> > >>>>>> Date: Sunday, August 9, 2015 at 18:40 >>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >>>>>> about inclusion >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Todd and All, >>>>>>> Nice job! I reviewed the entire document and attached is my crack at our >>>>>>> summary. I think it includes everyone additions and edits to date (but >>>>>>> please check!). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I've lost track of who drafted what sections, but I think we are moving >>>>>>> in the right direction. Some really good work has been done. I made one >>>>>>> small change and two bigger ones and few general edits. The small change >>>>>>> is removing the reference to contested and uncontested edits since I am >>>>>>> not sure what an uncontested edit and whether commenters would have >>>>>>> contested it if they knew what the proposed edit would be. >>>>>>> (Unfortunately, since our "Reply Comment" period was removed by ICANN, >>>>>>> we don't have this important reply time to review others edits and >>>>>>> support or contest them.). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I also added in two short paragraphs. The first one describes the Save >>>>>>> Domains Privacy comments, the petition language, and the discussion now >>>>>>> in place in our sub-team over the meaning of these comments. Perhaps >>>>>>> others in the WG can help us shed light on the questions being raised in >>>>>>> our sub-team. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second paragraph summarizes the 11,000 Respect Our Privacy comments. >>>>>>> They told us that "No one's personal information should be revealed >>>>>>> without a court order," and of course, we should reflect them in our >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On my machine, my redlines appear in red, and the prior editor's >>>>>>> redlines (for the paragraphs at the end starting "Finally, our sub-team >>>>>>> reviewed and analyzed 21 miscellaneous comments...") appear in grey. I >>>>>>> hope these redlines are clear for you too. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and enjoy the rest of the weekend, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Kathy: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Attached is my first crack at our portion of the summary (on the Bucket >>>>>>> Two comments). Let me know if you have any suggested edits, additions, >>>>>>> subtractions, etc. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Also, I¹ve copied the entire sub-team mailing list on this email, for >>>>>>> two reasons: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) So that there is a transparent public record of any >>>>>>> back-and-forth red-lining of the document that we may do; and >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) So that Sara and Holly for Bucket One, and Darcy for our >>>>>>> miscellaneous bucket, can see what I envision for our summary report to >>>>>>> the WG. If you all want to add your summaries to this one to make it >>>>>>> consistent in terms of formatting, etc., feel free. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I had one thought Sara and Holly for Bucket One (which came to me as I >>>>>>> was conceptually dividing our Bucket Two comments into general support, >>>>>>> specific support, suggested changes by addition, suggested edits >>>>>>> uncontested, suggested edits contested): it may be helpful for the WG if >>>>>>> we divide our Bucket One comments into categories along a spectrum. As >>>>>>> I envision it (in order along the spectrum): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) No disclosure/publication ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. I >>>>>>> would put the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² comments here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP). E.g., I think the Google comment would >>>>>>> go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other >>>>>>> legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of >>>>>>> abuse. E.g., I think the ICA and EasyDNS comments would go here. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> For the WG¹s sake, we may also want to distinguish between those Bucket >>>>>>> One comments that couched their discussion of disclosure/publication in >>>>>>> terms of what P/P Providers ought to be required to do (or not required >>>>>>> to do) in response to external third-party disclosure requests such as >>>>>>> from IP owners or LEA (e.g., the Google and Key Systems comments) vs. >>>>>>> those Bucket One comments that simply said ³no publication/disclosure >>>>>>> absent a court order² without distinguishing b/w whether the impetus for >>>>>>> the disclosure was an external third-party request or the P/P Provider¹s >>>>>>> own desire to disclose/publish (e.g., the 10,000+ ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> comments). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> TW. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:06 AM >>>>>>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> ; Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> ; >>>>>>> gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Whoops, I left out Jawala at the bottom, who should go in bucket two. >>>>>>> Sorry. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd >>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:01 AM >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Yes, thanks Mary. Of the highlighted additions in the attached, I¹ve >>>>>>> added the comments from Stefan Grunder, Reagan Lynch, Reid Baker, and >>>>>>> the Save Domain Privacy petitioners to the second bucket that Kathy and >>>>>>> I are reviewing/summarizing (accept premise of Annex E, but with >>>>>>> changes). I think the highlighted comments from Dan M, Simon Kissane, >>>>>>> Adam Creighton, Jason Weinberg, J Wilson, Dylan Henderson, M.B., and the >>>>>>> Respect our Privacy submissions should go in the first bucket that Holly >>>>>>> and Sara are reviewing/summarizing (reject premise of Annex E). Thanks. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 6:47 PM >>>>>>> To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Tx Mary! >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks again, Todd, Kathy, Holly and everyone this is just a note to >>>>>>> follow up on one portion of the discussion during the WG call earlier >>>>>>> today. I¹ll be going through the current WG Public Comment Review Tool >>>>>>> (Part 1, covering the WG¹s preliminary recommendations #1 through #9) to >>>>>>> pick out those additional comments that, though ³attached² to a >>>>>>> different recommendation or question, is actually more directly relevant >>>>>>> to the scope of this Sub Team. What this means, I¹m afraid, is that >>>>>>> there will most likely be an updated version of the Sub Team¹s Review >>>>>>> Tool (i.e. the Word document that you¹re working off of). I will try to >>>>>>> get that to you all as soon as I possibly can with the caveat that as >>>>>>> I complete preparation of the WG Tool Part 2 (covering the remainder of >>>>>>> the WG¹s preliminary recommendations except for those being covered by >>>>>>> the Sub Teams) there may yet be further updates. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I¹m happy to help update any existing summary documents you may already >>>>>>> have as a result, of course, and, Todd, to your point about adding an >>>>>>> extra row to the existing Tool to reflect the Save Domain Privacy >>>>>>> comment in their petition, I¹m happy to do that (per Kathy¹s suggestion >>>>>>> on the call today) while I¹m doing the current update anyway. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:55 >>>>>>> To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> >, Holly Raiche >>>>>>> <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks Kathy and Holly. Just to summarize where I think we are (and >>>>>>> again, I¹ve been working backward from what Sub-team 1.3.2 presented >>>>>>> last week, which I¹ve attached I assume that what our sub-team will >>>>>>> present next week will look something like that): >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · First there will be a paragraph (or bullet point or however we >>>>>>> want to style it) discussing those comments that argued that the WG¹s >>>>>>> proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can >>>>>>> never disclose and/or publish under any circumstances. This section >>>>>>> will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come >>>>>>> from, what did they argue. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that the WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process. Again, this section will discuss: how >>>>>>> many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they >>>>>>> argue, etc. I agree with Kathy that the ³Respect our Privacy² >>>>>>> submissions should be analyzed in this paragraph. I also agree with >>>>>>> Holly¹s point though that in this paragraph we should note that the >>>>>>> ³Respect our Privacy² submissions took a more extreme position than >>>>>>> others (like Google¹s, for example), in that they argued that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, and >>>>>>> didn¹t accept that other legal or ICANN-recognized processes (such as a >>>>>>> UDRP for example) could suffice. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> argued that our WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that >>>>>>> P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court >>>>>>> order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. My plan for this paragraph was to first have a general >>>>>>> summary of whose comments fell in this category. And I agree with Kathy >>>>>>> that the Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit here, in that >>>>>>> ³verifiable evidence of wrongdoing² is what II(A), (B), and (C) of Annex >>>>>>> E contemplate. Following that summary, my plan was then to list each >>>>>>> proposed change to the language of Annex E (perhaps in a bullet point >>>>>>> format), followed by who recommended it, and what their arguments were >>>>>>> for it. That said, I disagree with Kathy that each of those comments >>>>>>> and all of those suggested changes will necessarily be to a ³higher >>>>>>> standard.² From my initial review, I think the comments are going to >>>>>>> recommend changes in both directions, which we ought to reflect in the >>>>>>> summary. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >>>>>>> we¹re not sure what to do with. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> That¹s how I see our task anyway. So far we have Sara and Holly writing >>>>>>> the first draft of the first two paragraphs, me and Kathy writing the >>>>>>> third, and Darcy writing the fourth (though of course we can all edit >>>>>>> the final before it goes to the entire WG). Let me know if anybody else >>>>>>> wants to join. And with that, my quick thoughts on some of the >>>>>>> bigger-picture points below: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Given that our summary will only be on what commenters said >>>>>>> about Annex E, and given that Annex E doesn¹t touch on LE requests, my >>>>>>> thought is that we should leave analysis of comments on LE to the other >>>>>>> sub-teams (I¹m pretty sure LE would fall in both sub-team 1 and sub-team >>>>>>> 4¹s work). Not that I¹m not interested in LE just that we have plenty >>>>>>> of work as it is, without duplicating work that is being handled by >>>>>>> other sub-teams. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · In response to Mary¹s email (attached): I agree that I¹m not >>>>>>> sure that I see the utility of adding the form-based submissions to the >>>>>>> compiled template/matrix Word doc. As I understand it, the attached >>>>>>> Word doc is just a tool to help us get to our final work product, which >>>>>>> is the summary presentation to the rest of the WG. If we make a point >>>>>>> to discuss the form-based submissions in our summary presentation to the >>>>>>> rest of the WG (which, as I noted above, we¹re certainly planning to >>>>>>> do), then I don¹t see why we¹d need to add columns to the attached Word >>>>>>> doc for each of those. I mean, if somebody wants to take the time to do >>>>>>> so, that¹s fine. I just don¹t see how that helps us get to our final >>>>>>> work product. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Finally, one quick point: I see our sub-team¹s role, and the >>>>>>> role of the summary that we are to present to the entire WG next week, >>>>>>> as purely descriptive. In other words: what did the comments say? To >>>>>>> the extent that there is going to be any normative or substantive >>>>>>> discussion that goes one step beyond that OK, this is what the >>>>>>> comments said, but now what do we do about that? I think that has to >>>>>>> be left to the entire WG to debate after we present our summary. I¹m >>>>>>> just throwing out that reminder b/c I think it will help keep our work >>>>>>> easier. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks all! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> >>>>>>> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> ] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 5:49 AM >>>>>>> To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net >>>>>>> <mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net> > >>>>>>> Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - >>>>>>> questions about inclusion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi All, >>>>>>> I support the division of comments into buckets as Todd has created and >>>>>>> Holly has revised. Do we have four buckets now? Below (and preceeded by >>>>>>> "==>") I show where the two large groups of missing comments might go. >>>>>>> Tx! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Everyone >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> First- sorry not to follow up sooner. And Todd - I agree with the >>>>>>> refined break up into three buckets- with an additional element or so. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The first category is clearly no, not ever, under any circumstances. >>>>>>> All that is needed from us is to count the comments and where they are >>>>>>> from. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> So bucket one, no disclosure ever. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The second is one I¹d like to expand a bit - and see where that gets us. >>>>>>> As Todd and I suggest, it is a category that specifically states the >>>>>>> need for a legal process. (it is framed variously as court order court >>>>>>> process, Subpoena) My suggestion is that the overall heading is no >>>>>>> reveal unless there has been a legal process of some sort in the >>>>>>> relevant jurisdiction. The wrinkle here is that, under an ICANN dispute >>>>>>> resolution process (e.g., UDRP) where details of the customer would be >>>>>>> revealed. Given this is a recognised ICANN process in which details are >>>>>>> already revealed, my suggestion is to characterise th category in that >>>>>>> way. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Two, disclosure of data to private parties and law >>>>>>> enforcement only subject to court order. This is where the "Respect our >>>>>>> Privacy" thousands of individual submissions fits: "No one¹s personal >>>>>>> information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of >>>>>>> whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement >>>>>>> agency². (Mary, do we happen to have a final count of these individual >>>>>>> submission?) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My reading of both categories is to say that Annex E is not necessary >>>>>>> for either. (and Kathy - the comments you refer to below would fit into >>>>>>> the first or second basket) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The third category is the only one that goes beyond what is already >>>>>>> required to suggest there may be other circumstances where the contact >>>>>>> details of the customer would be revealed to a third party that is >>>>>>> either not part of an ICANN process or a court process. And the >>>>>>> challenge will be to work through what those situations are. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Bucket Three (formerly Two) is now the one that accepts the premise >>>>>>> of Annex E, as Holly and Todd have laid out, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework to the higher standards requested by >>>>>>> commenters. The question for me is what bucket the 11,000 Save Domain >>>>>>> Privacy petition signatories fit in: they wrote "Privacy providers >>>>>>> should not forced to reveal my private information without verifiable >>>>>>> evidence of wrongdoing." Can Annex E be revised to raise the standard >>>>>>> to require "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" w/o a court order? If so, >>>>>>> what changes must be made in Annex E to meet this higher standard? If >>>>>>> not, do these 11,000+ petition signatures really belong in [revised] >>>>>>> Bucket 2, court order? I look forward to our discussions ahead! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My next query is where we put Law Enforcement Agency requests. If they >>>>>>> have a warrant, I¹d suggest that we put them in the second category - in >>>>>>> most jurisdictions, warrants are not granted without some kind of >>>>>>> judicial oversight. Without a warrant (or some judicial oversight), >>>>>>> requests by Law Enforcement/Security requests would be under some kind >>>>>>> of Annex. >>>>>>> ==> Holly, do I understand right that this might be a new Bucket Four - >>>>>>> LE w/o CO -- Law Enforcement w/o Court Order. I think it makes sense >>>>>>> and I would like to see where the comments fall on this issue. Plus >>>>>>> Annex E is only for private individuals/private attorneys/private >>>>>>> companies. So now seems to be a good time to break out informal LE >>>>>>> requests into its own category. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I²ll be having a look at that third category >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> My other way of looking at this issue is whether or not the relevant p/p >>>>>>> provider must make some sort of judgment call. For the first category - >>>>>>> the answer is a simple NO. For the second category, there is either >>>>>>> some sort of judicially approved document for that jurisdiction or an >>>>>>> approved ICANN process - or not. It is only in the third category that >>>>>>> the providers must make a judgment call on whether the requirements are >>>>>>> met, or not. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ==> Quick note, we still need the miscellaneous bucket that Todd created >>>>>>> for "unclear" bucket, so [renamed] Bucket Five = unclear? Best, Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Happy to discuss >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Holly >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On 4 Aug 2015, at 8:44 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com> > wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Mary and All, >>>>>>> Glad to be with you on this subteam 3 and looking forward to our >>>>>>> discussion. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary, I was very glad to see that Turner Broadcasting comments had been >>>>>>> included in this comment summary. Let me ask about the 10,000+ comments >>>>>>> we received, the vast majority entitled: ICANN- Respect Our Privacy. All >>>>>>> of these comments contain a clear call: >>>>>>> - No one¹s personal information should be revealed without a court >>>>>>> order, >>>>>>> regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law >>>>>>> enforcement agency. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Sorry if I missed it, but is this call from so many thousands of >>>>>>> commenters for not disclosing p/p data to a private individual (which >>>>>>> would include a private lawyer) reflected in our comment summary tool? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best and tx, >>>>>>> Kathy >>>>>>> >>>>>>> : >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Dear all, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive >>>>>>> comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for >>>>>>> spotting this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for >>>>>>> the first question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for >>>>>>> the second question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) >>>>>>> on PAGE 39. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Apologies again for the inadvertent omission they have been added to >>>>>>> these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were >>>>>>> received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I¹ll update >>>>>>> the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>>>> <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 >>>>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hello Todd and everyone, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I >>>>>>> apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of >>>>>>> comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting >>>>>>> the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am >>>>>>> very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes >>>>>>> WG members¹ questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits >>>>>>> don¹t replace WG members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. >>>>>>> At the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as >>>>>>> thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our >>>>>>> efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle eyes is the best arrangement. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address >>>>>>> specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the >>>>>>> online template responses that do the same. The Word document is >>>>>>> therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or >>>>>>> the full WG, as appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my >>>>>>> documents/collected comments and don¹t believe I have missed out any >>>>>>> others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word >>>>>>> documents I¹ve compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach >>>>>>> seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves >>>>>>> would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups >>>>>>> to tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, >>>>>>> and in doing so also note any comments that didn¹t address either so >>>>>>> that they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or >>>>>>> considered by the full WG (if appropriate). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked >>>>>>> through it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits >>>>>>> in the document you circulated . ? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance >>>>>>> from staff in any way! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 >>>>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >>>>>>> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was >>>>>>> helpful to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn >>>>>>> might help us decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, >>>>>>> I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two >>>>>>> basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I¹d recommend >>>>>>> that we do the same. Here are the two that I¹d propose: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >>>>>>> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a >>>>>>> court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >>>>>>> Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions >>>>>>> of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address >>>>>>> the arguments raised in these comments? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it >>>>>>> will help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before >>>>>>> us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how >>>>>>> we¹d otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A >>>>>>> comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose >>>>>>> and/or publish absent a court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex >>>>>>> E; it¹s arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the >>>>>>> comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated >>>>>>> (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to >>>>>>> make sure that they agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the >>>>>>> comments? Once we¹re comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the >>>>>>> next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some >>>>>>> members want to tackle the third ³unclear² category) to start reviewing >>>>>>> the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present >>>>>>> to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other >>>>>>> questions that anybody wants to suggest). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >>>>>>> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >>>>>>> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our >>>>>>> sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For >>>>>>> example, I know that Turner¹s comment (available >>>>>>> here:http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3 >>>>>>> VcnSR7.pdf >>>>>>> <http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnS >>>>>>> R7.pdf> ) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the >>>>>>> attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted >>>>>>> it. J So I want to make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex >>>>>>> E that we also ought to be reviewing. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd D. Williams >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Counsel >>>>>>> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >>>>>>> One CNN Center, 10 North >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >>>>>>> P: 404-827-2234 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> F: 404-827-1994 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach >>>>>>> of material service terms such as Internet abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Google >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Access Now >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service >>>>>>> terms such as net abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Greg McMullen >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Ralf Haring >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Liam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Sam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Dan M >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Not your business >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Simon Kissane >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) TS >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Cort Wee >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Alex Xu >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Kenneth Godwin >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Sebastian Broussier >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Andrew Merenbach >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 25) Finn Ellis >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 26) Aaron Holmes >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 27) Michael Ekstrand >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 28) Homer >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 29) Donuts >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 30) Michael Ho >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 31) Key Systems >>>>>>> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework. >>>>>>> 1) BC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) MPAA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) ISPCP >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) INTA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) IACC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) NCSG >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Cyberinvasion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Phil Crooker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Aaron Myers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Mike Fewings >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Name withheld >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Gary Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Byunghoon Choi >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Reid Baker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Nick O¹Dell >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Time Warner >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) RIAA & IFPI >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) IPC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Vanda Scartezini >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Tim Kramer >>>>>>> * Bucket Three: unclear. >>>>>>> 1) Sven Slootweg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Brendan Conniff >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) Marc Schauber >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Aaron Mason >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Kevin Szprychel >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Christopher >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) James Ford >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shantanu Gupta >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Christopher Smith >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Private >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Robert Lukitsh >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Adam Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Charles >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Aaron Dalton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Ian McNeil >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Adam Creighton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Anand S. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Lucas Stadler >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Alan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion
by Williams, Todd Aug. 11, 2015

Aug. 11, 2015

Yeah, I don't understand that interpretation either. To me all that shows is that the drafters of the petition certainly knew about court orders and subpoenas, and could have chosen to include that language in the petition if they had wanted to, but chose not to for whatever reason. But it's fine: we can all present our different interpretations and arguments to the WG and we'll go from there. Sent from my iPhone On Aug 10, 2015, at 8:15 PM, Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler(a)riaa.com<mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com>> wrote: Completely disagree. From: Sara Bockey [mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com] Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 7:51 PM To: Williams, Todd; Victoria Sheckler; Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Cc: Sara Bockey Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion In reviewing the SaveDomainPrivacy.org<http://SaveDomainPrivacy.org> website, it states: "Providers could be required to give your private contact details to anyone complaining that your website violates their trademark or copyright. None of these scenarios would require a court order, search warrant, or due process of any kind.” https://www.savedomainprivacy.org/whats-changing/ Based on these two sentences, it is safe to infer that when the drafters of the petition used the terms “verifiable evidence” they meant a court order, search warrant, or due process. Thank you, Sara From: "Williams, Todd" Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 3:44 PM To: Sara Bockey, Victoria Sheckler, Mary Wong, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Well unless we’re going to ask all 10,042 people who signed it what they understood it to mean I don’t think that works. From: Sara Bockey [mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com] Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 6:42 PM To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>; Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler(a)riaa.com<mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com>>; Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Regarding “verifiable evidence” - I would suggest asking the drafters of the language what their intent was and go from there. Sara From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 3:38 PM To: Victoria Sheckler, Mary Wong, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Vicky. For everybody: the more I’ve thought about it, the more I’ve come to the conclusion that we’re probably not going to resolve our differences on how to interpret “verifiable evidence” before 10:00 AM tomorrow. So in the interest of being able to circulate something to the WG before our call, I propose that the only reference to the SDP submissions in our document be something like: We also note that the Save Domain Privacy petition – which had 10,042 signatories and also included [x] number of comments – argued that “privacy providers should not be forced to reveal my private information without verifiable evidence of wrongdoing.” We as a sub-team could not agree on how to interpret “verifiable evidence,” and will leave that discussion to the larger WG. And then Kathy, Sara, and I can each just take a little bit of time on the call tomorrow to explain our respective suggested interpretations of “verifiable evidence” to the larger WG and leave it to them. What does everybody think of that? TW. From: Victoria Sheckler [mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com] Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 5:01 PM To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>; Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Please wait for my comments before distributing anything to the broader group. I will send them tonight. From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:50 PM To: Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Mary. No, I’m not putting my name on this. Nobody has responded to the questions that I raised earlier today (see attached). And we still don’t have Vicky’s comments. Just to reiterate my problems with the attached: · The attached says that our sub-team is debating whether “verifiable evidence of wrongdoing” either means court order or “a higher standard of evidence and proof in Annex E (which is not currently a “verifiable evidence” standard) before disclosure.” But that is not an accurate representation of our internal debate, as I’ve outlined in the attached emails. I’m fine telling the WG that we can’t decide how to interpret “verifiable evidence” (though I still don’t understand how to interpret “verifiable evidence” to mean “court order”). But if we do so, we at least have to accurately reflect what the competing arguments are. · I don’t understand the statement that “the sub-team noted but has not yet evaluated the 11,000 comments received from commenters arriving from the Respect Our Privacy website. These commenters, each individually, urged a rejection of Annex E in favor of due process as defined by judicial process” and that “The sub-team is continuing to review and weigh these comments.” What does that mean? I thought from the attached email exchange that we were adding a bullet point to Category Two (after the bullet point about Key Systems) about those comments. Why are we now saying that we haven’t evaluated them and that we’ll continue to review and weigh them? What does that mean? · I don’t understand the long inclusion of arguments from Jeff Wheelhouse, Simon Kissane, ICA, EasyDNS, Endurance, and Donuts. To be precise: I’m fine if this sub-team wants to provide argumentation in the document. But if we’re going to do that, then we need to do it fairly, to give the WG an accurate representation. So I’ll go back through my section and include the argumentation from INTA, MPAA, RIAA, Turner, etc., which I intentionally left out of my draft, because I was trying to keep this document as neutral as possible (because that was how I viewed the objective of our sub-team: to fairly report back to the larger WG). Obviously, to the extent that the comments I analyzed presented arguments on two sides of a question (e.g., why the cost-recovery provision in Section I(B)(iii) should stay or go), then I tried to fairly and succinctly summarize those arguments on both sides, for the benefit of the WG. But I think the only other argumentation that I included was the one sentence from individual commenter Mike Fewings. Todd From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:00 PM To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks, Sara! If it’s all right with everyone, I’ll send this version around to the WG, noting that it is still a draft under discussion by the Sub Team and as such there may be further updates on the call tomorrow (bearing in mind that Vicky has indicated she may have some comments tonight). Additionally, I can also note that some of the language in the draft is also still under discussion by the Sub Team, and some of the issues the Sub Team is discussing will be highlighted during the update to the WG. Let me know if you would prefer another approach. Thanks! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 13:32 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Mary, Attached is the summary document that now includes my edits. Since it appears that we are now addressing Save Domain Privacy and Respect Our Privacy in separate paragraphs/sections of this document, I have removed references to both petitions from other sections so that there is no confusion. Thanks, Sara From: Mary Wong Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM To: Sara Bockey, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi Sara – sorry, I haven’t yet combined your document with Kathy’s; please feel free to use whichever works best for you (e.g. dropping your document, with edits, into Kathy’s, or just editing yours and sending it back to me). I attach both for your convenience. If I’ve missed out a version that came in after these, please, everyone, let me know! Thanks so much! Cheers Mary From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 12:31 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion I’m having a hard time locating the latest document. Do we have all the “bucket” comments in one document yet? If so, can someone circulate it? Thanks! From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Mary Wong Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:02 AM To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi Todd, yes, certainly – thank you! Actually, my second suggestion was really meant to have us just include a description of the 4 categories (buckets) somewhere in the document, preferably early on. I agree that any conclusion about the petition comments shouldn’t be included unless the Sub Team has agreed on it. As has been the case elsewhere, it may also be possible to “square bracket” or otherwise highlight the options/differences under consideration, should that be a more appropriate alternative before tomorrow. Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 11:54 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Mary. To your last point: I think the question of whether the 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition support or oppose the basic premise of Annex E is what we’re debating. So no, we shouldn’t use that sentence until we’ve decided that point. I think we’ve still got some good emails going on these open questions. But we shouldn’t hold up your sending out the agenda. Could you send out the agenda noting that our sub-team will be presenting, but then circulate our final document later once it’s done (but before tomorrow morning obviously)? From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 11:38 AM To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Dear all, As I’m preparing to send out the agenda for the WG call tomorrow, along with associated documents, I’m trying to consolidate Kathy’s edited document with Sara’s review that wasn’t in Kathy’s version. I also thought to offer the following suggested edit to the language around “verifiable evidence” for your consideration: "The sub-team is working to better understand the meaning of “verifiable evidence of wrongdoing” and whether these commenters intended for this wording to seek a different or more specific standard for revealdisclosure, namelysuch as a court order in which the court “verifies” the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding, or alternatively, whether the commenters seek a higher standard of evidence and proof in Annex E (which isdoes not currently specify what is a “verifiable evidence” standard) before disclosure. In this regard the sub-team notes that many signatories to the petition also added specific comments that may refer to this standard. These comments are currently under review." The other suggestion I had was to reorganize the document slightly, to make it clearer what the “buckets” are. In this regard, I suggest moving up the following summary from Sara to where Kathy’s insertions began (after the specific suggestions for Annex E and before Darcy’s additions): "Our sub-team also reviewed and analyzed 39 comments – including one with 10,000+ signatures from the Respect Our Privacy petition and one with 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition – that oppose the basic premise of Annex E. The comments fell into 1 or 4 categories: Category 1 - No disclosure/publication ever. Category 2 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. Category 3 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP) Category 4 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of abuse." Please let me know if you have any comments or objections to the above. Thank you! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 10:13 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Kathy. My thoughts on the attached: · My only point on the “contested vs. uncontested” language was to distinguish those suggested changes to Annex E for which we received comments on both sides of a question vs. those suggested changes for which we did not. Mainly it was just to distinguish the final two paragraphs conceptually. But your changes serve that same purpose well. · I don’t understand why we would include “while seeking significantly higher standards for disclosure and options to disclosure” in the third paragraph. We get to what changes the various comments suggested (including which comments asked for higher disclosure standards, and which asked for lower) later in the document. That third paragraph is just noting which comments supported certain sections of Annex E. Plus I’m not sure that all of the comments mentioned in that third paragraph did in fact seek “significantly higher standards for disclosure.” · Isn’t the analysis of the 11,000 comments from Respect our Privacy contained in Sara and Holly’s section (see attached)? Why would we reference them twice? · Darcy’s analysis of the “miscellaneous” bucket looks great. Many thanks Darcy – in many ways I think you took the most difficult part, because sometimes it’s hard to make sense of how exactly those comments were relevant! Finally: for the reasons I’ve already outlined in the attached email, I don’t understand why we would say that the process outlined in Annex E “is not currently a verifiable evidence standard.” As I mentioned before, the "evidence" that Annex E requires, as outlined in Sections II(A), (B), and (C), is extensive. So I don’t see any argument why Annex E wouldn’t meet the “evidence” part of “verifiable evidence.” So I think what we’re really trying to interpret is “verifiable.” And Kathy in the attached has offered the interpretation that “verifiable” means “a court order in which the court ‘verifies’ the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding.” But if that was the correct interpretation, wouldn’t the word be “verified” instead of “verifiable”? If a court has issued an order, then it has already done the verifying. Rather, I think the basic plain meaning of “verifiable” – and hence the meaning that we should assume the 10,000+ supporters signed on to – is simply “able to be checked or proved.” So it seems much simpler to read “verifiable” to support the portions of Sections III(A), (B), and (C) of Annex E that give P/P Providers the ability to verify the evidence submitted by a Requester by notifying the P/P Customer of the complaint, reviewing the P/P Customer’s response, and then responding to the Requester with either disclosure or its reasons for refusing to disclose – which reasons may come from either the Customer under Section III(C)(ii), or from the P/P Provider’s own investigation under Section III(C)(iii). In other words, the most plausible reading of “verifiable” is that it simply means that it is not enough for the Requester to provide any evidence and then disclosure automatically follows. Rather, the evidence must be capable of being verified. Which is what Section III provides. From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org] Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 7:08 PM To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>; Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks everyone, that is a lot of work and a document that will clearly help advance the WG’s progress quite a bit! Kathy – can I confirm that the document you edited is Darcy’s update to Todd’s last version, and so does not include what was added/sent by Sara? I’m trying to keep all the drafts clear and ordered, and that’s what it looks like to me. If that’s the case, I will add Sara’s report to Kathy’s document (unless there are further changes between now and the WG call on Tuesday). I’ll then upload the consolidated draft document and have that ready for the WG at the Tuesday meeting. All – it seems to me that the question as to where the comments relating to “verifiable evidence” should fit is a question that you may wish to bring back to the WG on Tuesday, if there is still no agreement amongst yourselves by then. Finally – two minor suggested changes, both to do with numbers: first, I’d suggest that instead of saying 10,042 comments came with the Save Domain Privacy petition we should say that the petition had 10,042 signatories. Secondly, I suggest adding the word “approximately” to the 11,000 Respect Your Privacy comments. I hope this helps, and thank you all again. Following the WG call on Tuesday, please let me know how you would like to proceed and if there is a need for the Sub Team to get together for a call to discuss its final recommendations to the WG (due in about 2-3 weeks from this Tuesday, according to the current WG Work Plan). Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>> Date: Sunday, August 9, 2015 at 18:40 To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi Todd and All, Nice job! I reviewed the entire document and attached is my crack at our summary. I think it includes everyone additions and edits to date (but please check!). I've lost track of who drafted what sections, but I think we are moving in the right direction. Some really good work has been done. I made one small change and two bigger ones and few general edits. The small change is removing the reference to contested and uncontested edits since I am not sure what an uncontested edit and whether commenters would have contested it if they knew what the proposed edit would be. (Unfortunately, since our "Reply Comment" period was removed by ICANN, we don't have this important reply time to review others edits and support or contest them.). I also added in two short paragraphs. The first one describes the Save Domains Privacy comments, the petition language, and the discussion now in place in our sub-team over the meaning of these comments. Perhaps others in the WG can help us shed light on the questions being raised in our sub-team. The second paragraph summarizes the 11,000 Respect Our Privacy comments. They told us that "No one's personal information should be revealed without a court order," and of course, we should reflect them in our summary. On my machine, my redlines appear in red, and the prior editor's redlines (for the paragraphs at the end starting "Finally, our sub-team reviewed and analyzed 21 miscellaneous comments...") appear in grey. I hope these redlines are clear for you too. Best and enjoy the rest of the weekend, Kathy : Kathy: Attached is my first crack at our portion of the summary (on the Bucket Two comments). Let me know if you have any suggested edits, additions, subtractions, etc. Also, I’ve copied the entire sub-team mailing list on this email, for two reasons: 1) So that there is a transparent public record of any back-and-forth red-lining of the document that we may do; and 2) So that Sara and Holly for Bucket One, and Darcy for our miscellaneous bucket, can see what I envision for our summary report to the WG. If you all want to add your summaries to this one to make it consistent in terms of formatting, etc., feel free. I had one thought Sara and Holly for Bucket One (which came to me as I was conceptually dividing our Bucket Two comments into general support, specific support, suggested changes by addition, suggested edits uncontested, suggested edits contested): it may be helpful for the WG if we divide our Bucket One comments into categories along a spectrum. As I envision it (in order along the spectrum): 1) No disclosure/publication ever. 2) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. I would put the 10,000+ “Respect our Privacy” comments here. 3) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP). E.g., I think the Google comment would go here. 4) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of abuse. E.g., I think the ICA and EasyDNS comments would go here. For the WG’s sake, we may also want to distinguish between those Bucket One comments that couched their discussion of disclosure/publication in terms of what P/P Providers ought to be required to do (or not required to do) in response to external third-party disclosure requests such as from IP owners or LEA (e.g., the Google and Key Systems comments) vs. those Bucket One comments that simply said “no publication/disclosure absent a court order” without distinguishing b/w whether the impetus for the disclosure was an external third-party request or the P/P Provider’s own desire to disclose/publish (e.g., the 10,000+ “Respect our Privacy” comments). Thanks all! TW. From: Williams, Todd Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:06 AM To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com><mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>; Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com><mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Whoops, I left out Jawala at the bottom, who should go in bucket two. Sorry. From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:01 AM To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Yes, thanks Mary. Of the highlighted additions in the attached, I’ve added the comments from Stefan Grunder, Reagan Lynch, Reid Baker, and the Save Domain Privacy petitioners to the second bucket that Kathy and I are reviewing/summarizing (accept premise of Annex E, but with changes). I think the highlighted comments from Dan M, Simon Kissane, Adam Creighton, Jason Weinberg, J Wilson, Dylan Henderson, M.B., and the Respect our Privacy submissions should go in the first bucket that Holly and Sara are reviewing/summarizing (reject premise of Annex E). Thanks. From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 6:47 PM To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Tx Mary! Kathy : Thanks again, Todd, Kathy, Holly and everyone – this is just a note to follow up on one portion of the discussion during the WG call earlier today. I’ll be going through the current WG Public Comment Review Tool (Part 1, covering the WG’s preliminary recommendations #1 through #9) to pick out those additional comments that, though “attached” to a different recommendation or question, is actually more directly relevant to the scope of this Sub Team. What this means, I’m afraid, is that there will most likely be an updated version of the Sub Team’s Review Tool (i.e. the Word document that you’re working off of). I will try to get that to you all as soon as I possibly can – with the caveat that as I complete preparation of the WG Tool Part 2 (covering the remainder of the WG’s preliminary recommendations except for those being covered by the Sub Teams) there may yet be further updates. I’m happy to help update any existing summary documents you may already have as a result, of course, and, Todd, to your point about adding an extra row to the existing Tool to reflect the Save Domain Privacy comment in their petition, I’m happy to do that (per Kathy’s suggestion on the call today) while I’m doing the current update anyway. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:55 To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>, Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net<mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net>> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Kathy and Holly. Just to summarize where I think we are (and again, I’ve been working backward from what Sub-team 1.3.2 presented last week, which I’ve attached – I assume that what our sub-team will present next week will look something like that): · First there will be a paragraph (or bullet point or however we want to style it) discussing those comments that argued that the WG’s proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish under any circumstances. This section will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they argue. · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that argued that the WG’s proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, subpoena, or other legal process. Again, this section will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they argue, etc. I agree with Kathy that the “Respect our Privacy” submissions should be analyzed in this paragraph. I also agree with Holly’s point though that in this paragraph we should note that the “Respect our Privacy” submissions took a more extreme position than others (like Google’s, for example), in that they argued that P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, and didn’t accept that other legal or ICANN-recognized processes (such as a UDRP for example) could suffice. · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that argued that our WG’s proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. My plan for this paragraph was to first have a general summary of whose comments fell in this category. And I agree with Kathy that the Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit here, in that “verifiable evidence of wrongdoing” is what II(A), (B), and (C) of Annex E contemplate. Following that summary, my plan was then to list each proposed change to the language of Annex E (perhaps in a bullet point format), followed by who recommended it, and what their arguments were for it. That said, I disagree with Kathy that each of those comments and all of those suggested changes will necessarily be to a “higher standard.” From my initial review, I think the comments are going to recommend changes in both directions, which we ought to reflect in the summary. · Finally there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that we’re not sure what to do with. That’s how I see our task anyway. So far we have Sara and Holly writing the first draft of the first two paragraphs, me and Kathy writing the third, and Darcy writing the fourth (though of course we can all edit the final before it goes to the entire WG). Let me know if anybody else wants to join. And with that, my quick thoughts on some of the bigger-picture points below: · Given that our summary will only be on what commenters said about Annex E, and given that Annex E doesn’t touch on LE requests, my thought is that we should leave analysis of comments on LE to the other sub-teams (I’m pretty sure LE would fall in both sub-team 1 and sub-team 4’s work). Not that I’m not interested in LE – just that we have plenty of work as it is, without duplicating work that is being handled by other sub-teams. · In response to Mary’s email (attached): I agree that I’m not sure that I see the utility of adding the form-based submissions to the compiled template/matrix Word doc. As I understand it, the attached Word doc is just a tool to help us get to our final work product, which is the summary presentation to the rest of the WG. If we make a point to discuss the form-based submissions in our summary presentation to the rest of the WG (which, as I noted above, we’re certainly planning to do), then I don’t see why we’d need to add columns to the attached Word doc for each of those. I mean, if somebody wants to take the time to do so, that’s fine. I just don’t see how that helps us get to our final work product. · Finally, one quick point: I see our sub-team’s role, and the role of the summary that we are to present to the entire WG next week, as purely descriptive. In other words: what did the comments say? To the extent that there is going to be any normative or substantive discussion that goes one step beyond that – OK, this is what the comments said, but now what do we do about that? – I think that has to be left to the entire WG to debate after we present our summary. I’m just throwing out that reminder b/c I think it will help keep our work easier. Thanks all! From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 5:49 AM To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net<mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net>> Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi All, I support the division of comments into buckets as Todd has created and Holly has revised. Do we have four buckets now? Below (and preceeded by "==>") I show where the two large groups of missing comments might go. Tx! Hi Everyone First- sorry not to follow up sooner. And Todd - I agree with the refined break up into three buckets- with an additional element or so. The first category is clearly no, not ever, under any circumstances. All that is needed from us is to count the comments and where they are from. ==> So bucket one, no disclosure ever. The second is one I’d like to expand a bit - and see where that gets us. As Todd and I suggest, it is a category that specifically states the need for a legal process. (it is framed variously as court order court process, Subpoena) My suggestion is that the overall heading is no reveal unless there has been a legal process of some sort in the relevant jurisdiction. The wrinkle here is that, under an ICANN dispute resolution process (e.g., UDRP) where details of the customer would be revealed. Given this is a recognised ICANN process in which details are already revealed, my suggestion is to characterise th category in that way. ==> Bucket Two, disclosure of data to private parties and law enforcement only subject to court order. This is where the "Respect our Privacy" thousands of individual submissions fits: "No one’s personal information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement agency”. (Mary, do we happen to have a final count of these individual submission?) My reading of both categories is to say that Annex E is not necessary for either. (and Kathy - the comments you refer to below would fit into the first or second basket) The third category is the only one that goes beyond what is already required to suggest there may be other circumstances where the contact details of the customer would be revealed to a third party that is either not part of an ICANN process or a court process. And the challenge will be to work through what those situations are. ==> Bucket Three (formerly Two) is now the one that accepts the premise of Annex E, as Holly and Todd have laid out, but offers thoughts on how to change the Disclosure Framework to the higher standards requested by commenters. The question for me is what bucket the 11,000 Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit in: they wrote "Privacy providers should not forced to reveal my private information without verifiable evidence of wrongdoing." Can Annex E be revised to raise the standard to require "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" w/o a court order? If so, what changes must be made in Annex E to meet this higher standard? If not, do these 11,000+ petition signatures really belong in [revised] Bucket 2, court order? I look forward to our discussions ahead! My next query is where we put Law Enforcement Agency requests. If they have a warrant, I’d suggest that we put them in the second category - in most jurisdictions, warrants are not granted without some kind of judicial oversight. Without a warrant (or some judicial oversight), requests by Law Enforcement/Security requests would be under some kind of Annex. ==> Holly, do I understand right that this might be a new Bucket Four - LE w/o CO -- Law Enforcement w/o Court Order. I think it makes sense and I would like to see where the comments fall on this issue. Plus Annex E is only for private individuals/private attorneys/private companies. So now seems to be a good time to break out informal LE requests into its own category. I”ll be having a look at that third category My other way of looking at this issue is whether or not the relevant p/p provider must make some sort of judgment call. For the first category - the answer is a simple NO. For the second category, there is either some sort of judicially approved document for that jurisdiction or an approved ICANN process - or not. It is only in the third category that the providers must make a judgment call on whether the requirements are met, or not. ==> Quick note, we still need the miscellaneous bucket that Todd created for "unclear" bucket, so [renamed] Bucket Five = unclear? Best, Kathy Happy to discuss Holly On 4 Aug 2015, at 8:44 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com>> wrote: Hi Mary and All, Glad to be with you on this subteam 3 and looking forward to our discussion. Mary, I was very glad to see that Turner Broadcasting comments had been included in this comment summary. Let me ask about the 10,000+ comments we received, the vast majority entitled: ICANN- Respect Our Privacy. All of these comments contain a clear call: - No one’s personal information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement agency. Sorry if I missed it, but is this call from so many thousands of commenters for not disclosing p/p data to a private individual (which would include a private lawyer) reflected in our comment summary tool? Best and tx, Kathy : Dear all, Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for spotting this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for the first question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for the second question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) on PAGE 39. Apologies again for the inadvertent omission – they have been added to these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I’ll update the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan Hello Todd and everyone, Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes WG members’ questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits don’t replace WG members’ reading the comments themselves if possible. At the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our efforts and a WG’s/Sub Team’s eagle eyes is the best arrangement. Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the online template responses that do the same. The Word document is therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or the full WG, as appropriate). I’ve taken a quick look through my documents/collected comments and don’t believe I have missed out any others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word documents I’ve compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd’s suggested approach seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups to tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd’s initial sweep, and in doing so also note any comments that didn’t address either – so that they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or considered by the full WG (if appropriate). BTW, Todd, maybe it’s my machine or more likely that I haven’t looked through it in detail, but I’m not seeing your comments/additions/edits in the document you circulated …. ? Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance from staff in any way! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan Am I the first to try this out? Cool. As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was helpful to illustrate where we’ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn might help us decide what we’ll need to do to get there. Specifically, I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I’d recommend that we do the same. Here are the two that I’d propose: 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. Presumably this group would present on: · How many of these comments were there? · Who did they come from? · What arguments did they make? · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. Presumably this group would present on: · How many of these comments were there? · Who did they come from? · What arguments did they make? · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address the arguments raised in these comments? I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it will help our sub-team “divide and conquer” the work that we have before us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I’m not really sure how we’d otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose and/or publish absent a court order isn’t arguing for changes to Annex E; it’s arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. With those two buckets in mind, I’ve taken a first pass through the comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to make sure that they agree with how I’ve tentatively divided the comments? Once we’re comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some members want to tackle the third “unclear” category) to start reviewing the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other questions that anybody wants to suggest). Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was compiled? I’m just curious because I want to make sure that our sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For example, I know that Turner’s comment (available here:http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3Vcn…) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn’t included in the attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted it. :) So I want to make sure that there aren’t other comments on Annex E that we also ought to be reviewing. Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. Todd. Todd D. Williams Counsel Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. One CNN Center, 10 North Atlanta, Georgia 30303 P: 404-827-2234 F: 404-827-1994 todd.williams(a)turner.com<mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach of material service terms such as Internet abuse) 2) Google 3) 1&1 Internet SE 4) Access Now 5) Endurance Int’l Group 6) Jeff Wheelhouse 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service terms such as net abuse) 8) Greg McMullen 9) Evelyn Aya Snow 10) Ralf Haring 11) Liam 12) Dr M Klinefelter 13) Sam 14) Dan M 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas 16) Not your business 17) Simon Kissane 18) TS 19) Cort Wee 20) Alex Xu 21) Kenneth Godwin 22) Shahed Ahmmed 23) Sebastian Broussier 24) Andrew Merenbach 25) Finn Ellis 26) Aaron Holmes 27) Michael Ekstrand 28) Homer 29) Donuts 30) Michael Ho 31) Key Systems * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how to change the Disclosure Framework. 1) BC 2) MPAA 3) ISPCP 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge 5) INTA 6) IACC 7) NCSG 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas 9) Cyberinvasion 10) Phil Crooker 11) Aaron Myers 12) Cui (ADNDRC) 13) Mike Fewings 14) Name withheld 15) Gary Miller 16) Byunghoon Choi 17) Reid Baker 18) Nick O’Dell 19) Time Warner 20) RIAA & IFPI 21) IPC 22) Thomas Smoonlock 23) Vanda Scartezini 24) Tim Kramer * Bucket Three: unclear. 1) Sven Slootweg 2) Brendan Conniff 3) Marc Schauber 4) Aaron Mason 5) Kevin Szprychel 6) Christopher 7) James Ford 8) Shantanu Gupta 9) Christopher Smith 10) Private 11) Robert Lukitsh 12) Adam Miller 13) Charles 14) Aaron Dalton 15) Stephen Black Wolf 16) Ian McNeil 17) Adam Creighton 18) Arthur Zonnenberg 19) Anand S. 20) Lucas Stadler 21) Alan _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion
by Williams, Todd Aug. 11, 2015

Aug. 11, 2015

Thanks Vicky. For everybody: the more I've thought about it, the more I've come to the conclusion that we're probably not going to resolve our differences on how to interpret "verifiable evidence" before 10:00 AM tomorrow. So in the interest of being able to circulate something to the WG before our call, I propose that the only reference to the SDP submissions in our document be something like: We also note that the Save Domain Privacy petition - which had 10,042 signatories and also included [x] number of comments - argued that "privacy providers should not be forced to reveal my private information without verifiable evidence of wrongdoing." We as a sub-team could not agree on how to interpret "verifiable evidence," and will leave that discussion to the larger WG. And then Kathy, Sara, and I can each just take a little bit of time on the call tomorrow to explain our respective suggested interpretations of "verifiable evidence" to the larger WG and leave it to them. What does everybody think of that? TW. From: Victoria Sheckler [mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com] Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 5:01 PM To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com>; Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Please wait for my comments before distributing anything to the broader group. I will send them tonight. From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:50 PM To: Mary Wong; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Mary. No, I'm not putting my name on this. Nobody has responded to the questions that I raised earlier today (see attached). And we still don't have Vicky's comments. Just to reiterate my problems with the attached: * The attached says that our sub-team is debating whether "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" either means court order or "a higher standard of evidence and proof in Annex E (which is not currently a "verifiable evidence" standard) before disclosure." But that is not an accurate representation of our internal debate, as I've outlined in the attached emails. I'm fine telling the WG that we can't decide how to interpret "verifiable evidence" (though I still don't understand how to interpret "verifiable evidence" to mean "court order"). But if we do so, we at least have to accurately reflect what the competing arguments are. * I don't understand the statement that "the sub-team noted but has not yet evaluated the 11,000 comments received from commenters arriving from the Respect Our Privacy website. These commenters, each individually, urged a rejection of Annex E in favor of due process as defined by judicial process" and that "The sub-team is continuing to review and weigh these comments." What does that mean? I thought from the attached email exchange that we were adding a bullet point to Category Two (after the bullet point about Key Systems) about those comments. Why are we now saying that we haven't evaluated them and that we'll continue to review and weigh them? What does that mean? * I don't understand the long inclusion of arguments from Jeff Wheelhouse, Simon Kissane, ICA, EasyDNS, Endurance, and Donuts. To be precise: I'm fine if this sub-team wants to provide argumentation in the document. But if we're going to do that, then we need to do it fairly, to give the WG an accurate representation. So I'll go back through my section and include the argumentation from INTA, MPAA, RIAA, Turner, etc., which I intentionally left out of my draft, because I was trying to keep this document as neutral as possible (because that was how I viewed the objective of our sub-team: to fairly report back to the larger WG). Obviously, to the extent that the comments I analyzed presented arguments on two sides of a question (e.g., why the cost-recovery provision in Section I(B)(iii) should stay or go), then I tried to fairly and succinctly summarize those arguments on both sides, for the benefit of the WG. But I think the only other argumentation that I included was the one sentence from individual commenter Mike Fewings. Todd From: gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 4:00 PM To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks, Sara! If it's all right with everyone, I'll send this version around to the WG, noting that it is still a draft under discussion by the Sub Team and as such there may be further updates on the call tomorrow (bearing in mind that Vicky has indicated she may have some comments tonight). Additionally, I can also note that some of the language in the draft is also still under discussion by the Sub Team, and some of the issues the Sub Team is discussing will be highlighted during the update to the WG. Let me know if you would prefer another approach. Thanks! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 13:32 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Mary, Attached is the summary document that now includes my edits. Since it appears that we are now addressing Save Domain Privacy and Respect Our Privacy in separate paragraphs/sections of this document, I have removed references to both petitions from other sections so that there is no confusion. Thanks, Sara From: Mary Wong Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM To: Sara Bockey, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi Sara - sorry, I haven't yet combined your document with Kathy's; please feel free to use whichever works best for you (e.g. dropping your document, with edits, into Kathy's, or just editing yours and sending it back to me). I attach both for your convenience. If I've missed out a version that came in after these, please, everyone, let me know! Thanks so much! Cheers Mary From: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 12:31 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Cc: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com<mailto:sbockey@godaddy.com>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion I'm having a hard time locating the latest document. Do we have all the "bucket" comments in one document yet? If so, can someone circulate it? Thanks! From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Mary Wong Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 9:02 AM To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi Todd, yes, certainly - thank you! Actually, my second suggestion was really meant to have us just include a description of the 4 categories (buckets) somewhere in the document, preferably early on. I agree that any conclusion about the petition comments shouldn't be included unless the Sub Team has agreed on it. As has been the case elsewhere, it may also be possible to "square bracket" or otherwise highlight the options/differences under consideration, should that be a more appropriate alternative before tomorrow. Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 11:54 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Mary. To your last point: I think the question of whether the 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition support or oppose the basic premise of Annex E is what we're debating. So no, we shouldn't use that sentence until we've decided that point. I think we've still got some good emails going on these open questions. But we shouldn't hold up your sending out the agenda. Could you send out the agenda noting that our sub-team will be presenting, but then circulate our final document later once it's done (but before tomorrow morning obviously)? From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong Sent: Monday, August 10, 2015 11:38 AM To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Dear all, As I'm preparing to send out the agenda for the WG call tomorrow, along with associated documents, I'm trying to consolidate Kathy's edited document with Sara's review that wasn't in Kathy's version. I also thought to offer the following suggested edit to the language around "verifiable evidence" for your consideration: "The sub-team is working to better understand the meaning of "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" and whether these commenters intended for this wording to seek a different or more specific standard for revealdisclosure, namelysuch as a court order in which the court "verifies" the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding, or alternatively, whether the commenters seek a higher standard of evidence and proof in Annex E (which isdoes not currently specify what is a "verifiable evidence" standard) before disclosure. In this regard the sub-team notes that many signatories to the petition also added specific comments that may refer to this standard. These comments are currently under review." The other suggestion I had was to reorganize the document slightly, to make it clearer what the "buckets" are. In this regard, I suggest moving up the following summary from Sara to where Kathy's insertions began (after the specific suggestions for Annex E and before Darcy's additions): "Our sub-team also reviewed and analyzed 39 comments - including one with 10,000+ signatures from the Respect Our Privacy petition and one with 10,042 signatures from the Save Domain Privacy petition - that oppose the basic premise of Annex E. The comments fell into 1 or 4 categories: Category 1 - No disclosure/publication ever. Category 2 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. Category 3 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP) Category 4 - No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of abuse." Please let me know if you have any comments or objections to the above. Thank you! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Monday, August 10, 2015 at 10:13 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Kathy. My thoughts on the attached: * My only point on the "contested vs. uncontested" language was to distinguish those suggested changes to Annex E for which we received comments on both sides of a question vs. those suggested changes for which we did not. Mainly it was just to distinguish the final two paragraphs conceptually. But your changes serve that same purpose well. * I don't understand why we would include "while seeking significantly higher standards for disclosure and options to disclosure" in the third paragraph. We get to what changes the various comments suggested (including which comments asked for higher disclosure standards, and which asked for lower) later in the document. That third paragraph is just noting which comments supported certain sections of Annex E. Plus I'm not sure that all of the comments mentioned in that third paragraph did in fact seek "significantly higher standards for disclosure." * Isn't the analysis of the 11,000 comments from Respect our Privacy contained in Sara and Holly's section (see attached)? Why would we reference them twice? * Darcy's analysis of the "miscellaneous" bucket looks great. Many thanks Darcy - in many ways I think you took the most difficult part, because sometimes it's hard to make sense of how exactly those comments were relevant! Finally: for the reasons I've already outlined in the attached email, I don't understand why we would say that the process outlined in Annex E "is not currently a verifiable evidence standard." As I mentioned before, the "evidence" that Annex E requires, as outlined in Sections II(A), (B), and (C), is extensive. So I don't see any argument why Annex E wouldn't meet the "evidence" part of "verifiable evidence." So I think what we're really trying to interpret is "verifiable." And Kathy in the attached has offered the interpretation that "verifiable" means "a court order in which the court 'verifies' the abuse or infringement alleged with a specific judicial finding." But if that was the correct interpretation, wouldn't the word be "verified" instead of "verifiable"? If a court has issued an order, then it has already done the verifying. Rather, I think the basic plain meaning of "verifiable" - and hence the meaning that we should assume the 10,000+ supporters signed on to - is simply "able to be checked or proved." So it seems much simpler to read "verifiable" to support the portions of Sections III(A), (B), and (C) of Annex E that give P/P Providers the ability to verify the evidence submitted by a Requester by notifying the P/P Customer of the complaint, reviewing the P/P Customer's response, and then responding to the Requester with either disclosure or its reasons for refusing to disclose - which reasons may come from either the Customer under Section III(C)(ii), or from the P/P Provider's own investigation under Section III(C)(iii). In other words, the most plausible reading of "verifiable" is that it simply means that it is not enough for the Requester to provide any evidence and then disclosure automatically follows. Rather, the evidence must be capable of being verified. Which is what Section III provides. From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org] Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 7:08 PM To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>; Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks everyone, that is a lot of work and a document that will clearly help advance the WG's progress quite a bit! Kathy - can I confirm that the document you edited is Darcy's update to Todd's last version, and so does not include what was added/sent by Sara? I'm trying to keep all the drafts clear and ordered, and that's what it looks like to me. If that's the case, I will add Sara's report to Kathy's document (unless there are further changes between now and the WG call on Tuesday). I'll then upload the consolidated draft document and have that ready for the WG at the Tuesday meeting. All - it seems to me that the question as to where the comments relating to "verifiable evidence" should fit is a question that you may wish to bring back to the WG on Tuesday, if there is still no agreement amongst yourselves by then. Finally - two minor suggested changes, both to do with numbers: first, I'd suggest that instead of saying 10,042 comments came with the Save Domain Privacy petition we should say that the petition had 10,042 signatories. Secondly, I suggest adding the word "approximately" to the 11,000 Respect Your Privacy comments. I hope this helps, and thank you all again. Following the WG call on Tuesday, please let me know how you would like to proceed and if there is a need for the Sub Team to get together for a call to discuss its final recommendations to the WG (due in about 2-3 weeks from this Tuesday, according to the current WG Work Plan). Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>> Date: Sunday, August 9, 2015 at 18:40 To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi Todd and All, Nice job! I reviewed the entire document and attached is my crack at our summary. I think it includes everyone additions and edits to date (but please check!). I've lost track of who drafted what sections, but I think we are moving in the right direction. Some really good work has been done. I made one small change and two bigger ones and few general edits. The small change is removing the reference to contested and uncontested edits since I am not sure what an uncontested edit and whether commenters would have contested it if they knew what the proposed edit would be. (Unfortunately, since our "Reply Comment" period was removed by ICANN, we don't have this important reply time to review others edits and support or contest them.). I also added in two short paragraphs. The first one describes the Save Domains Privacy comments, the petition language, and the discussion now in place in our sub-team over the meaning of these comments. Perhaps others in the WG can help us shed light on the questions being raised in our sub-team. The second paragraph summarizes the 11,000 Respect Our Privacy comments. They told us that "No one's personal information should be revealed without a court order," and of course, we should reflect them in our summary. On my machine, my redlines appear in red, and the prior editor's redlines (for the paragraphs at the end starting "Finally, our sub-team reviewed and analyzed 21 miscellaneous comments...") appear in grey. I hope these redlines are clear for you too. Best and enjoy the rest of the weekend, Kathy : Kathy: Attached is my first crack at our portion of the summary (on the Bucket Two comments). Let me know if you have any suggested edits, additions, subtractions, etc. Also, I've copied the entire sub-team mailing list on this email, for two reasons: 1) So that there is a transparent public record of any back-and-forth red-lining of the document that we may do; and 2) So that Sara and Holly for Bucket One, and Darcy for our miscellaneous bucket, can see what I envision for our summary report to the WG. If you all want to add your summaries to this one to make it consistent in terms of formatting, etc., feel free. I had one thought Sara and Holly for Bucket One (which came to me as I was conceptually dividing our Bucket Two comments into general support, specific support, suggested changes by addition, suggested edits uncontested, suggested edits contested): it may be helpful for the WG if we divide our Bucket One comments into categories along a spectrum. As I envision it (in order along the spectrum): 1) No disclosure/publication ever. 2) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order. I would put the 10,000+ "Respect our Privacy" comments here. 3) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP). E.g., I think the Google comment would go here. 4) No disclosure/publication unless following a court order or other legal process (such as a UDRP), but with some exceptions for cases of abuse. E.g., I think the ICA and EasyDNS comments would go here. For the WG's sake, we may also want to distinguish between those Bucket One comments that couched their discussion of disclosure/publication in terms of what P/P Providers ought to be required to do (or not required to do) in response to external third-party disclosure requests such as from IP owners or LEA (e.g., the Google and Key Systems comments) vs. those Bucket One comments that simply said "no publication/disclosure absent a court order" without distinguishing b/w whether the impetus for the disclosure was an external third-party request or the P/P Provider's own desire to disclose/publish (e.g., the 10,000+ "Respect our Privacy" comments). Thanks all! TW. From: Williams, Todd Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:06 AM To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com><mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>; Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com><mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Whoops, I left out Jawala at the bottom, who should go in bucket two. Sorry. From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Williams, Todd Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 10:01 AM To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Yes, thanks Mary. Of the highlighted additions in the attached, I've added the comments from Stefan Grunder, Reagan Lynch, Reid Baker, and the Save Domain Privacy petitioners to the second bucket that Kathy and I are reviewing/summarizing (accept premise of Annex E, but with changes). I think the highlighted comments from Dan M, Simon Kissane, Adam Creighton, Jason Weinberg, J Wilson, Dylan Henderson, M.B., and the Respect our Privacy submissions should go in the first bucket that Holly and Sara are reviewing/summarizing (reject premise of Annex E). Thanks. From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 6:47 PM To: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Tx Mary! Kathy : Thanks again, Todd, Kathy, Holly and everyone - this is just a note to follow up on one portion of the discussion during the WG call earlier today. I'll be going through the current WG Public Comment Review Tool (Part 1, covering the WG's preliminary recommendations #1 through #9) to pick out those additional comments that, though "attached" to a different recommendation or question, is actually more directly relevant to the scope of this Sub Team. What this means, I'm afraid, is that there will most likely be an updated version of the Sub Team's Review Tool (i.e. the Word document that you're working off of). I will try to get that to you all as soon as I possibly can - with the caveat that as I complete preparation of the WG Tool Part 2 (covering the remainder of the WG's preliminary recommendations except for those being covered by the Sub Teams) there may yet be further updates. I'm happy to help update any existing summary documents you may already have as a result, of course, and, Todd, to your point about adding an extra row to the existing Tool to reflect the Save Domain Privacy comment in their petition, I'm happy to do that (per Kathy's suggestion on the call today) while I'm doing the current update anyway. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:55 To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>, Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net<mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net>> Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Thanks Kathy and Holly. Just to summarize where I think we are (and again, I've been working backward from what Sub-team 1.3.2 presented last week, which I've attached - I assume that what our sub-team will present next week will look something like that): * First there will be a paragraph (or bullet point or however we want to style it) discussing those comments that argued that the WG's proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish under any circumstances. This section will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they argue. * Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that argued that the WG's proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, subpoena, or other legal process. Again, this section will discuss: how many of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they argue, etc. I agree with Kathy that the "Respect our Privacy" submissions should be analyzed in this paragraph. I also agree with Holly's point though that in this paragraph we should note that the "Respect our Privacy" submissions took a more extreme position than others (like Google's, for example), in that they argued that P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, and didn't accept that other legal or ICANN-recognized processes (such as a UDRP for example) could suffice. * Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that argued that our WG's proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. My plan for this paragraph was to first have a general summary of whose comments fell in this category. And I agree with Kathy that the Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit here, in that "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" is what II(A), (B), and (C) of Annex E contemplate. Following that summary, my plan was then to list each proposed change to the language of Annex E (perhaps in a bullet point format), followed by who recommended it, and what their arguments were for it. That said, I disagree with Kathy that each of those comments and all of those suggested changes will necessarily be to a "higher standard." From my initial review, I think the comments are going to recommend changes in both directions, which we ought to reflect in the summary. * Finally there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that we're not sure what to do with. That's how I see our task anyway. So far we have Sara and Holly writing the first draft of the first two paragraphs, me and Kathy writing the third, and Darcy writing the fourth (though of course we can all edit the final before it goes to the entire WG). Let me know if anybody else wants to join. And with that, my quick thoughts on some of the bigger-picture points below: * Given that our summary will only be on what commenters said about Annex E, and given that Annex E doesn't touch on LE requests, my thought is that we should leave analysis of comments on LE to the other sub-teams (I'm pretty sure LE would fall in both sub-team 1 and sub-team 4's work). Not that I'm not interested in LE - just that we have plenty of work as it is, without duplicating work that is being handled by other sub-teams. * In response to Mary's email (attached): I agree that I'm not sure that I see the utility of adding the form-based submissions to the compiled template/matrix Word doc. As I understand it, the attached Word doc is just a tool to help us get to our final work product, which is the summary presentation to the rest of the WG. If we make a point to discuss the form-based submissions in our summary presentation to the rest of the WG (which, as I noted above, we're certainly planning to do), then I don't see why we'd need to add columns to the attached Word doc for each of those. I mean, if somebody wants to take the time to do so, that's fine. I just don't see how that helps us get to our final work product. * Finally, one quick point: I see our sub-team's role, and the role of the summary that we are to present to the entire WG next week, as purely descriptive. In other words: what did the comments say? To the extent that there is going to be any normative or substantive discussion that goes one step beyond that - OK, this is what the comments said, but now what do we do about that? - I think that has to be left to the entire WG to debate after we present our summary. I'm just throwing out that reminder b/c I think it will help keep our work easier. Thanks all! From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 5:49 AM To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net<mailto:h.raiche@internode.on.net>> Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion Hi All, I support the division of comments into buckets as Todd has created and Holly has revised. Do we have four buckets now? Below (and preceeded by "==>") I show where the two large groups of missing comments might go. Tx! Hi Everyone First- sorry not to follow up sooner. And Todd - I agree with the refined break up into three buckets- with an additional element or so. The first category is clearly no, not ever, under any circumstances. All that is needed from us is to count the comments and where they are from. ==> So bucket one, no disclosure ever. The second is one I'd like to expand a bit - and see where that gets us. As Todd and I suggest, it is a category that specifically states the need for a legal process. (it is framed variously as court order court process, Subpoena) My suggestion is that the overall heading is no reveal unless there has been a legal process of some sort in the relevant jurisdiction. The wrinkle here is that, under an ICANN dispute resolution process (e.g., UDRP) where details of the customer would be revealed. Given this is a recognised ICANN process in which details are already revealed, my suggestion is to characterise th category in that way. ==> Bucket Two, disclosure of data to private parties and law enforcement only subject to court order. This is where the "Respect our Privacy" thousands of individual submissions fits: "No one's personal information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement agency". (Mary, do we happen to have a final count of these individual submission?) My reading of both categories is to say that Annex E is not necessary for either. (and Kathy - the comments you refer to below would fit into the first or second basket) The third category is the only one that goes beyond what is already required to suggest there may be other circumstances where the contact details of the customer would be revealed to a third party that is either not part of an ICANN process or a court process. And the challenge will be to work through what those situations are. ==> Bucket Three (formerly Two) is now the one that accepts the premise of Annex E, as Holly and Todd have laid out, but offers thoughts on how to change the Disclosure Framework to the higher standards requested by commenters. The question for me is what bucket the 11,000 Save Domain Privacy petition signatories fit in: they wrote "Privacy providers should not forced to reveal my private information without verifiable evidence of wrongdoing." Can Annex E be revised to raise the standard to require "verifiable evidence of wrongdoing" w/o a court order? If so, what changes must be made in Annex E to meet this higher standard? If not, do these 11,000+ petition signatures really belong in [revised] Bucket 2, court order? I look forward to our discussions ahead! My next query is where we put Law Enforcement Agency requests. If they have a warrant, I'd suggest that we put them in the second category - in most jurisdictions, warrants are not granted without some kind of judicial oversight. Without a warrant (or some judicial oversight), requests by Law Enforcement/Security requests would be under some kind of Annex. ==> Holly, do I understand right that this might be a new Bucket Four - LE w/o CO -- Law Enforcement w/o Court Order. I think it makes sense and I would like to see where the comments fall on this issue. Plus Annex E is only for private individuals/private attorneys/private companies. So now seems to be a good time to break out informal LE requests into its own category. I"ll be having a look at that third category My other way of looking at this issue is whether or not the relevant p/p provider must make some sort of judgment call. For the first category - the answer is a simple NO. For the second category, there is either some sort of judicially approved document for that jurisdiction or an approved ICANN process - or not. It is only in the third category that the providers must make a judgment call on whether the requirements are met, or not. ==> Quick note, we still need the miscellaneous bucket that Todd created for "unclear" bucket, so [renamed] Bucket Five = unclear? Best, Kathy Happy to discuss Holly On 4 Aug 2015, at 8:44 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com<mailto:Kathy@kathykleiman.com>> wrote: Hi Mary and All, Glad to be with you on this subteam 3 and looking forward to our discussion. Mary, I was very glad to see that Turner Broadcasting comments had been included in this comment summary. Let me ask about the 10,000+ comments we received, the vast majority entitled: ICANN- Respect Our Privacy. All of these comments contain a clear call: - No one's personal information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement agency. Sorry if I missed it, but is this call from so many thousands of commenters for not disclosing p/p data to a private individual (which would include a private lawyer) reflected in our comment summary tool? Best and tx, Kathy : Dear all, Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for spotting this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for the first question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for the second question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) on PAGE 39. Apologies again for the inadvertent omission - they have been added to these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I'll update the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan Hello Todd and everyone, Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes WG members' questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits don't replace WG members' reading the comments themselves if possible. At the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our efforts and a WG's/Sub Team's eagle eyes is the best arrangement. Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the online template responses that do the same. The Word document is therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or the full WG, as appropriate). I've taken a quick look through my documents/collected comments and don't believe I have missed out any others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word documents I've compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd's suggested approach seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups to tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd's initial sweep, and in doing so also note any comments that didn't address either - so that they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or considered by the full WG (if appropriate). BTW, Todd, maybe it's my machine or more likely that I haven't looked through it in detail, but I'm not seeing your comments/additions/edits in the document you circulated .... ? Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance from staff in any way! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com<mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan Am I the first to try this out? Cool. As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was helpful to illustrate where we'll need to be by 8-11, which in turn might help us decide what we'll need to do to get there. Specifically, I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I'd recommend that we do the same. Here are the two that I'd propose: 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. Presumably this group would present on: * How many of these comments were there? * Who did they come from? * What arguments did they make? * What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. Presumably this group would present on: * How many of these comments were there? * Who did they come from? * What arguments did they make? * What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address the arguments raised in these comments? I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it will help our sub-team "divide and conquer" the work that we have before us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I'm not really sure how we'd otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose and/or publish absent a court order isn't arguing for changes to Annex E; it's arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. With those two buckets in mind, I've taken a first pass through the comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to make sure that they agree with how I've tentatively divided the comments? Once we're comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some members want to tackle the third "unclear" category) to start reviewing the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other questions that anybody wants to suggest). Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was compiled? I'm just curious because I want to make sure that our sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For example, I know that Turner's comment (available here:http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3Vcn…) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn't included in the attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted it. :) So I want to make sure that there aren't other comments on Annex E that we also ought to be reviewing. Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. Todd. Todd D. Williams Counsel Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. One CNN Center, 10 North Atlanta, Georgia 30303 P: 404-827-2234 F: 404-827-1994 todd.williams(a)turner.com<mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> * Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach of material service terms such as Internet abuse) 2) Google 3) 1&1 Internet SE 4) Access Now 5) Endurance Int'l Group 6) Jeff Wheelhouse 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service terms such as net abuse) 8) Greg McMullen 9) Evelyn Aya Snow 10) Ralf Haring 11) Liam 12) Dr M Klinefelter 13) Sam 14) Dan M 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas 16) Not your business 17) Simon Kissane 18) TS 19) Cort Wee 20) Alex Xu 21) Kenneth Godwin 22) Shahed Ahmmed 23) Sebastian Broussier 24) Andrew Merenbach 25) Finn Ellis 26) Aaron Holmes 27) Michael Ekstrand 28) Homer 29) Donuts 30) Michael Ho 31) Key Systems * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how to change the Disclosure Framework. 1) BC 2) MPAA 3) ISPCP 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge 5) INTA 6) IACC 7) NCSG 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas 9) Cyberinvasion 10) Phil Crooker 11) Aaron Myers 12) Cui (ADNDRC) 13) Mike Fewings 14) Name withheld 15) Gary Miller 16) Byunghoon Choi 17) Reid Baker 18) Nick O'Dell 19) Time Warner 20) RIAA & IFPI 21) IPC 22) Thomas Smoonlock 23) Vanda Scartezini 24) Tim Kramer * Bucket Three: unclear. 1) Sven Slootweg 2) Brendan Conniff 3) Marc Schauber 4) Aaron Mason 5) Kevin Szprychel 6) Christopher 7) James Ford 8) Shantanu Gupta 9) Christopher Smith 10) Private 11) Robert Lukitsh 12) Adam Miller 13) Charles 14) Aaron Dalton 15) Stephen Black Wolf 16) Ian McNeil 17) Adam Creighton 18) Arthur Zonnenberg 19) Anand S. 20) Lucas Stadler 21) Alan _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org<mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3

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UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool
by Mary Wong Aug. 10, 2015

Aug. 10, 2015

Dear all, Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for spotting this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for the first question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for the second question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) on PAGE 39. Apologies again for the inadvertent omission they have been added to these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I¹ll update the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan > Hello Todd and everyone, > > Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! > > Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I > apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of comments > and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting the table for > the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am very sorry, and > thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes WG members¹ > questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits don¹t replace WG > members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. At the same time, I do > hope you all know that we try our best to do as thorough and comprehensive a > job as possible, so a combination of our efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle > eyes is the best arrangement. > > Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address specific > recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the online > template responses that do the same. The Word document is therefore the > compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or the full WG, as > appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my documents/collected comments > and don¹t believe I have missed out any others; however, I will do a more > thorough check shortly on all the Word documents I¹ve compiled to date for all > the Sub Teams, just to be sure. > > On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach seems > to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves would > probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups to tackle the > two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, and in doing so also > note any comments that didn¹t address either so that they can either be > referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or considered by the full WG (if > appropriate). > > BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked through > it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits in the document > you circulated . ? > > Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance from > staff in any way! > > Cheers > Mary > > Mary Wong > Senior Policy Director > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) > Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 > Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org > > > > From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" > <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> > Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 > To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> > Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan > >> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >> >> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was helpful >> to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn might help us >> decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, I thought it helped >> that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two basic questions, and then >> presented separately on each. I¹d recommend that we do the same. Here are >> the two that I¹d propose: >> >> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a court >> order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >> Presumably this group would present on: >> >> · How many of these comments were there? >> >> · Who did they come from? >> >> · What arguments did they make? >> >> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions of >> the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >> >> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P Providers >> can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or >> other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the >> Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. Presumably >> this group would present on: >> >> · How many of these comments were there? >> >> · Who did they come from? >> >> · What arguments did they make? >> >> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address the >> arguments raised in these comments? >> >> >> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it will >> help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before us (much >> like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how we¹d otherwise >> substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A comment that argues >> that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose and/or publish absent a >> court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex E; it¹s arguing to scrap Annex >> E altogether. >> >> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the comments >> in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated (attached). My >> thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to make sure that they >> agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the comments? Once we¹re comfortable >> with that allocation, then perhaps the next step would be to divide our >> sub-team into two (or three, if some members want to tackle the third >> ³unclear² category) to start reviewing the comments in each bucket and then >> drafting two documents to present to the WG answering the questions outlined >> above (and any other questions that anybody wants to suggest). >> >> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our sub-team is >> comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For example, I know >> that Turner¹s comment (available here: >> http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnSR7.p… >> ) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the attached. And >> I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted it. J So I want to >> make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex E that we also ought to >> be reviewing. >> >> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >> >> Todd. >> >> Todd D. Williams >> Counsel >> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >> One CNN Center, 10 North >> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >> P: 404-827-2234 >> F: 404-827-1994 >> todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> >> >> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >> >> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach of >> material service terms such as Internet abuse) >> 2) Google >> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >> 4) Access Now >> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service terms >> such as net abuse) >> 8) Greg McMullen >> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >> 10) Ralf Haring >> 11) Liam >> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >> 13) Sam >> 14) Dan M >> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >> 16) Not your business >> 17) Simon Kissane >> 18) TS >> 19) Cort Wee >> 20) Alex Xu >> 21) Kenneth Godwin >> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >> 23) Sebastian Broussier >> 24) Andrew Merenbach >> 25) Finn Ellis >> 26) Aaron Holmes >> 27) Michael Ekstrand >> 28) Homer >> 29) Donuts >> 30) Michael Ho >> 31) Key Systems >> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how to >> change the Disclosure Framework. >> 1) BC >> 2) MPAA >> 3) ISPCP >> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >> 5) INTA >> 6) IACC >> 7) NCSG >> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >> 9) Cyberinvasion >> 10) Phil Crooker >> 11) Aaron Myers >> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >> 13) Mike Fewings >> 14) Name withheld >> 15) Gary Miller >> 16) Byunghoon Choi >> 17) Reid Baker >> 18) Nick O¹Dell >> 19) Time Warner >> 20) RIAA & IFPI >> 21) IPC >> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >> 23) Vanda Scartezini >> 24) Tim Kramer >> * Bucket Three: unclear. >> 1) Sven Slootweg >> 2) Brendan Conniff >> 3) Marc Schauber >> 4) Aaron Mason >> 5) Kevin Szprychel >> 6) Christopher >> 7) James Ford >> 8) Shantanu Gupta >> 9) Christopher Smith >> 10) Private >> 11) Robert Lukitsh >> 12) Adam Miller >> 13) Charles >> 14) Aaron Dalton >> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >> 16) Ian McNeil >> 17) Adam Creighton >> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >> 19) Anand S. >> 20) Lucas Stadler >> 21) Alan

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Further UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool
by Mary Wong Aug. 4, 2015

Aug. 4, 2015

Hello again everyone please find attached the latest version of this Sub Team¹s Public Comment Review Tool, dated 4 August (today). As noted previously, this version incorporates: (1) all the additional comments made in response to the WG¹s preliminary recommendations #1-9 but that directly addressed Annex E issues (which have therefore been moved to this Sub Team¹s Tool from the overall WG Tool); and (2) a row each for the Respect Our Privacy emails and another for the Save Domain Privacy petition. I¹ve highlighted all the additions in yellow for ease of comparison to/reference with the previous version of the Tool from last week (in case you have already begun working off that document). You can easily remove the yellow highlights. Note also that instead of giving a specific count for the Respect Our Privacy emails, I¹ve used a ballpark figure. This is because, even with the various Excel spreadsheets and tabular sorting that we are working with (courtesy of ICANN IT and Tucows/Graeme), I¹m concerned that we may have missed a few here and there, or counted some as ³false positives² of a sort. I¹m therefore using a rounded-off figure that I think we can all comfortably stand by. I hope this is helpful. Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 14:26 Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions about inclusion > Thanks again, Todd, Kathy, Holly and everyone this is just a note to follow > up on one portion of the discussion during the WG call earlier today. I¹ll be > going through the current WG Public Comment Review Tool (Part 1, covering the > WG¹s preliminary recommendations #1 through #9) to pick out those additional > comments that, though ³attached² to a different recommendation or question, is > actually more directly relevant to the scope of this Sub Team. What this > means, I¹m afraid, is that there will most likely be an updated version of the > Sub Team¹s Review Tool (i.e. the Word document that you¹re working off of). I > will try to get that to you all as soon as I possibly can with the caveat > that as I complete preparation of the WG Tool Part 2 (covering the remainder > of the WG¹s preliminary recommendations except for those being covered by the > Sub Teams) there may yet be further updates. > > I¹m happy to help update any existing summary documents you may already have > as a result, of course, and, Todd, to your point about adding an extra row to > the existing Tool to reflect the Save Domain Privacy comment in their > petition, I¹m happy to do that (per Kathy¹s suggestion on the call today) > while I¹m doing the current update anyway. > > Thanks and cheers > Mary > > Mary Wong > Senior Policy Director > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) > Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 > Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org > > > From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" > <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> > Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:55 > To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy(a)kathykleiman.com>, Holly Raiche > <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net> > Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> > Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions > about inclusion > >> Thanks Kathy and Holly. Just to summarize where I think we are (and again, >> I¹ve been working backward from what Sub-team 1.3.2 presented last week, >> which I¹ve attached I assume that what our sub-team will present next week >> will look something like that): >> >> · First there will be a paragraph (or bullet point or however we want >> to style it) discussing those comments that argued that the WG¹s proposed >> accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers can never disclose >> and/or publish under any circumstances. This section will discuss: how many >> of those comments were there, who did they come from, what did they argue. >> >> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that argued >> that the WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers >> can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, subpoena, or other >> legal process. Again, this section will discuss: how many of those comments >> were there, who did they come from, what did they argue, etc. I agree with >> Kathy that the ³Respect our Privacy² submissions should be analyzed in this >> paragraph. I also agree with Holly¹s point though that in this paragraph we >> should note that the ³Respect our Privacy² submissions took a more extreme >> position than others (like Google¹s, for example), in that they argued that >> P/P Providers can only disclose and/or publish following a court order, and >> didn¹t accept that other legal or ICANN-recognized processes (such as a UDRP >> for example) could suffice. >> >> · Next there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that argued >> that our WG¹s proposed accreditation standards should hold that P/P Providers >> can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or >> other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the >> Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. My plan for >> this paragraph was to first have a general summary of whose comments fell in >> this category. And I agree with Kathy that the Save Domain Privacy petition >> signatories fit here, in that ³verifiable evidence of wrongdoing² is what >> II(A), (B), and (C) of Annex E contemplate. Following that summary, my plan >> was then to list each proposed change to the language of Annex E (perhaps in >> a bullet point format), followed by who recommended it, and what their >> arguments were for it. That said, I disagree with Kathy that each of those >> comments and all of those suggested changes will necessarily be to a ³higher >> standard.² From my initial review, I think the comments are going to >> recommend changes in both directions, which we ought to reflect in the >> summary. >> >> · Finally there will be a paragraph discussing those comments that >> we¹re not sure what to do with. >> >> >> That¹s how I see our task anyway. So far we have Sara and Holly writing the >> first draft of the first two paragraphs, me and Kathy writing the third, and >> Darcy writing the fourth (though of course we can all edit the final before >> it goes to the entire WG). Let me know if anybody else wants to join. And >> with that, my quick thoughts on some of the bigger-picture points below: >> >> · Given that our summary will only be on what commenters said about >> Annex E, and given that Annex E doesn¹t touch on LE requests, my thought is >> that we should leave analysis of comments on LE to the other sub-teams (I¹m >> pretty sure LE would fall in both sub-team 1 and sub-team 4¹s work). Not >> that I¹m not interested in LE just that we have plenty of work as it is, >> without duplicating work that is being handled by other sub-teams. >> >> · In response to Mary¹s email (attached): I agree that I¹m not sure >> that I see the utility of adding the form-based submissions to the compiled >> template/matrix Word doc. As I understand it, the attached Word doc is just >> a tool to help us get to our final work product, which is the summary >> presentation to the rest of the WG. If we make a point to discuss the >> form-based submissions in our summary presentation to the rest of the WG >> (which, as I noted above, we¹re certainly planning to do), then I don¹t see >> why we¹d need to add columns to the attached Word doc for each of those. I >> mean, if somebody wants to take the time to do so, that¹s fine. I just don¹t >> see how that helps us get to our final work product. >> >> · Finally, one quick point: I see our sub-team¹s role, and the role of >> the summary that we are to present to the entire WG next week, as purely >> descriptive. In other words: what did the comments say? To the extent that >> there is going to be any normative or substantive discussion that goes one >> step beyond that OK, this is what the comments said, but now what do we do >> about that? I think that has to be left to the entire WG to debate after we >> present our summary. I¹m just throwing out that reminder b/c I think it will >> help keep our work easier. >> >> >> Thanks all! >> >> >> From:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org] On >> Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman >> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 5:49 AM >> To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net> >> Cc: gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] UPDATED Public Comment Review Tool - questions >> about inclusion >> >> >> Hi All, >> I support the division of comments into buckets as Todd has created and Holly >> has revised. Do we have four buckets now? Below (and preceeded by "==>") I >> show where the two large groups of missing comments might go. Tx! >>> Hi Everyone >>> >>> >>> >>> First- sorry not to follow up sooner. And Todd - I agree with the refined >>> break up into three buckets- with an additional element or so. >>> >>> >>> >>> The first category is clearly no, not ever, under any circumstances. All >>> that is needed from us is to count the comments and where they are from. >>> >>> >> ==> So bucket one, no disclosure ever. >> >>> The second is one I¹d like to expand a bit - and see where that gets us. As >>> Todd and I suggest, it is a category that specifically states the need for >>> a legal process. (it is framed variously as court order court process, >>> Subpoena) My suggestion is that the overall heading is no reveal unless >>> there has been a legal process of some sort in the relevant jurisdiction. >>> The wrinkle here is that, under an ICANN dispute resolution process (e.g., >>> UDRP) where details of the customer would be revealed. Given this is a >>> recognised ICANN process in which details are already revealed, my >>> suggestion is to characterise th category in that way. >> ==> Bucket Two, disclosure of data to private parties and law enforcement >> only subject to court order. This is where the "Respect our Privacy" >> thousands of individual submissions fits: "No one¹s personal information >> should be revealed without a court order, regardless of whether the request >> comes from a private individual or law enforcement agency². (Mary, do we >> happen to have a final count of these individual submission?) >>> >>> >>> >>> My reading of both categories is to say that Annex E is not necessary for >>> either. (and Kathy - the comments you refer to below would fit into the >>> first or second basket) >>> >>> >> >> The third category is the only one that goes beyond what is already required >> to suggest there may be other circumstances where the contact details of the >> customer would be revealed to a third party that is either not part of an >> ICANN process or a court process. And the challenge will be to work through >> what those situations are. >> >> ==> Bucket Three (formerly Two) is now the one that accepts the premise of >> Annex E, as Holly and Todd have laid out, but offers thoughts on how to >> change the Disclosure Framework to the higher standards requested by >> commenters. The question for me is what bucket the 11,000 Save Domain Privacy >> petition signatories fit in: they wrote "Privacy providers should not forced >> to reveal my private information without verifiable evidence of wrongdoing." >> Can Annex E be revised to raise the standard to require "verifiable evidence >> of wrongdoing" w/o a court order? If so, what changes must be made in Annex E >> to meet this higher standard? If not, do these 11,000+ petition signatures >> really belong in [revised] Bucket 2, court order? I look forward to our >> discussions ahead! >> >> >>> >>> >>> My next query is where we put Law Enforcement Agency requests. If they have >>> a warrant, I¹d suggest that we put them in the second category - in most >>> jurisdictions, warrants are not granted without some kind of judicial >>> oversight. Without a warrant (or some judicial oversight), requests by >>> Law Enforcement/Security requests would be under some kind of Annex. >> ==> Holly, do I understand right that this might be a new Bucket Four - LE >> w/o CO -- Law Enforcement w/o Court Order. I think it makes sense and I >> would like to see where the comments fall on this issue. Plus Annex E is only >> for private individuals/private attorneys/private companies. So now seems to >> be a good time to break out informal LE requests into its own category. >> >>> I²ll be having a look at that third category >>> >>> >>> >>> My other way of looking at this issue is whether or not the relevant p/p >>> provider must make some sort of judgment call. For the first category - the >>> answer is a simple NO. For the second category, there is either some sort >>> of judicially approved document for that jurisdiction or an approved ICANN >>> process - or not. It is only in the third category that the providers must >>> make a judgment call on whether the requirements are met, or not. >>> >>> >> ==> Quick note, we still need the miscellaneous bucket that Todd created for >> "unclear" bucket, so [renamed] Bucket Five = unclear? Best, Kathy >> >>> Happy to discuss >>> >>> >>> >>> Holly >>> >>> >>> >>> On 4 Aug 2015, at 8:44 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy(a)kathykleiman.com> wrote: >>> >>> >>>> Hi Mary and All, >>>> Glad to be with you on this subteam 3 and looking forward to our >>>> discussion. >>>> >>>> Mary, I was very glad to see that Turner Broadcasting comments had been >>>> included in this comment summary. Let me ask about the 10,000+ comments we >>>> received, the vast majority entitled: ICANN- Respect Our Privacy. All of >>>> these comments contain a clear call: >>>> - No one¹s personal information should be revealed without a court order, >>>> regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law >>>> enforcement agency. >>>> >>>> Sorry if I missed it, but is this call from so many thousands of commenters >>>> for not disclosing p/p data to a private individual (which would include a >>>> private lawyer) reflected in our comment summary tool? >>>> >>>> Best and tx, >>>> Kathy >>>> >>>> : >>>>> >>>>> Dear all, >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Please find an updated Word document that now INCLUDES the extensive >>>>> comments from Turner Broadcasting System (once again, thanks for spotting >>>>> this omission, Todd!). They have been inserted into ROW 19 for the first >>>>> question/topic (General Comments) on PAGE 16, and ROW 7 for the second >>>>> question/topic (Specific Comments on the Framework Language) on PAGE 39. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Apologies again for the inadvertent omission they have been added to >>>>> these rows and pages simply to retain the chronology of when they were >>>>> received, to maintain consistency across all the templates. I¹ll update >>>>> the Sub Team wiki page accordingly. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Thanks and cheers >>>>> >>>>> Mary >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Mary Wong >>>>> >>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>> >>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>> >>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>> >>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Mary Wong >>>>> <mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> > >>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 18:06 >>>>> To: "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com >>>>> <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> >, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Hello Todd and everyone, >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I >>>>>> apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of >>>>>> comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting >>>>>> the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am >>>>>> very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes >>>>>> WG members¹ questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits >>>>>> don¹t replace WG members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. At >>>>>> the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as >>>>>> thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our >>>>>> efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle eyes is the best arrangement. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address >>>>>> specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the >>>>>> online template responses that do the same. The Word document is >>>>>> therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or >>>>>> the full WG, as appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my >>>>>> documents/collected comments and don¹t believe I have missed out any >>>>>> others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word >>>>>> documents I¹ve compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach >>>>>> seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves >>>>>> would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups to >>>>>> tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, and >>>>>> in doing so also note any comments that didn¹t address either so that >>>>>> they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or >>>>>> considered by the full WG (if appropriate). >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked >>>>>> through it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits in >>>>>> the document you circulated . ? >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance >>>>>> from staff in any way! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Cheers >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Mary Wong >>>>>> >>>>>> Senior Policy Director >>>>>> >>>>>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>>>>> >>>>>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>>>>> >>>>>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org <mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org >>>>>> <mailto:gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>>>>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com <mailto:Todd.Williams@turner.com> > >>>>>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 >>>>>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> " >>>>>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> > >>>>>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >>>>>>> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was >>>>>>> helpful to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn >>>>>>> might help us decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, >>>>>>> I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two >>>>>>> basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I¹d recommend >>>>>>> that we do the same. Here are the two that I¹d propose: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >>>>>>> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a >>>>>>> court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >>>>>>> Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions >>>>>>> of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P >>>>>>> Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, >>>>>>> subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to >>>>>>> whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be >>>>>>> modified. Presumably this group would present on: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Who did they come from? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address >>>>>>> the arguments raised in these comments? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it >>>>>>> will help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before >>>>>>> us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how >>>>>>> we¹d otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A >>>>>>> comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose >>>>>>> and/or publish absent a court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex >>>>>>> E; it¹s arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the >>>>>>> comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated >>>>>>> (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to >>>>>>> make sure that they agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the >>>>>>> comments? Once we¹re comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the >>>>>>> next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some >>>>>>> members want to tackle the third ³unclear² category) to start reviewing >>>>>>> the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present >>>>>>> to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other >>>>>>> questions that anybody wants to suggest). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >>>>>>> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >>>>>>> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our >>>>>>> sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For >>>>>>> example, I know that Turner¹s comment (available >>>>>>> here:http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3 >>>>>>> VcnSR7.pdf >>>>>>> <http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnS >>>>>>> R7.pdf> ) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the >>>>>>> attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted >>>>>>> it. J So I want to make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex >>>>>>> E that we also ought to be reviewing. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Todd D. Williams >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Counsel >>>>>>> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >>>>>>> One CNN Center, 10 North >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >>>>>>> P: 404-827-2234 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> F: 404-827-1994 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> todd.williams(a)turner.com >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach >>>>>>> of material service terms such as Internet abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Google >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Access Now >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service >>>>>>> terms such as net abuse) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Greg McMullen >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Ralf Haring >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Liam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Sam >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Dan M >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Not your business >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Simon Kissane >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) TS >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Cort Wee >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Alex Xu >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Kenneth Godwin >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Sebastian Broussier >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Andrew Merenbach >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 25) Finn Ellis >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 26) Aaron Holmes >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 27) Michael Ekstrand >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 28) Homer >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 29) Donuts >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 30) Michael Ho >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 31) Key Systems >>>>>>> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how >>>>>>> to change the Disclosure Framework. >>>>>>> 1) BC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) MPAA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) ISPCP >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) INTA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) IACC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) NCSG >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Cyberinvasion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Phil Crooker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Aaron Myers >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Mike Fewings >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Name withheld >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Gary Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Byunghoon Choi >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Reid Baker >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Nick O¹Dell >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Time Warner >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) RIAA & IFPI >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) IPC >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 23) Vanda Scartezini >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 24) Tim Kramer >>>>>>> * Bucket Three: unclear. >>>>>>> 1) Sven Slootweg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) Brendan Conniff >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) Marc Schauber >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) Aaron Mason >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) Kevin Szprychel >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) Christopher >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) James Ford >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) Shantanu Gupta >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) Christopher Smith >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) Private >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 11) Robert Lukitsh >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 12) Adam Miller >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 13) Charles >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 14) Aaron Dalton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 16) Ian McNeil >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 17) Adam Creighton >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 19) Anand S. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 20) Lucas Stadler >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 21) Alan >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org <mailto:Gnso-ppsai3@icann.org> >>>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>>> <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3> >>> >>

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P.S. (Re: Submissions/compilation)
by Mary Wong Aug. 4, 2015

Aug. 4, 2015

I forgot to add Holly, the bulk of the ALAC¹s submission was included in the template for Sub Team 1 (dealing with Section 1.3.2) as there were specific responses to the questions being dealt with by that Sub Team. If I¹ve missed something about the ALAC¹s submission that should also be included in this Sub Team¹s review, I apologize; please let me know if that¹s the case. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 09:12 Cc: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Submissions/compilation > Hi everyone, > > The compiled template/matrix only contains those comments that directly > responded to one or more of the WG¹s preliminary recommendations and/or open > questions. It does not (at the moment) contain any content from any of the > form-based submissions (e.g. the template emails generated by online web > campaigns that were sent in the thousands). That¹s because the WG has yet to > discuss whether and how to treat these emails although I¹ve suggested to the > Sub Teams that to the extent some of these submissions contain direct and > specific comments relevant to the topic, the team may wish to consider > recommending whether (or not) to include at least a reference to them in the > team¹s report. > > This may be something to discuss more fully with the WG as well; I¹ll flag it > to the chairs. Thanks, Holly! > > Cheers > Mary > > Mary Wong > Senior Policy Director > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) > Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 > Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org > > > From: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net> > Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 01:57 > To: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com> > Cc: Darcy Southwell <darcy.southwell(a)endurance.com>, "Williams, Todd" > <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com>, Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, > "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> > Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan > >> Folks >> >> I¹m sure I have missed something, but it isn¹t clear to me where the list of >> submitters on Todd¹s list comes from. >> >> The individual submissions on the website (not including survey responses) >> run to 35 pages, with between 40-50 submissions per page - which is a lot >> more than the 76 submissions listed on Todd¹s list (and ALAC isn¹t included >> in any of the three baskets) >> >> The vast majority of individual submissions would fall into either the no, >> never, or the only under court order/subpoena/legal requirement, and so >> implicitly would reject Annex E. >> >> So Mary (of Todd or whomever) If you have a list of those submissions that do >> not either reject outright any revealing of information at all, or only do so >> under some kind of legal order/process, I would be very grateful. >> >> Thanks >> >> HOlly >> >> >> On 4 Aug 2015, at 7:41 am, Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com> wrote: >> >>> I can tackle the 31 in Bucket 1. >>> >>> Sara >>> >>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Darcy Southwell >>> Date: Monday, August 3, 2015 at 12:00 PM >>> To: "Williams, Todd", Mary Wong, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>> >>> Sorry for my silence on these latest emails and missing last week¹s meeting; >>> I¹m just returning from vacation with my family and getting caught up on >>> email. >>> >>> Todd¹s proposal for dividing the issues into two questions seems to make >>> sense. To Holly¹s point, maybe we can be sure to have two distinct >>> categories for ³What arguments did they make?²: (1) the no, never under any >>> circumstances, and (2) the ones that said only with a legal process (court >>> order. subpoena) and include the stats to give some more color. >>> >>> I¹ve only skimmed the latest document against Todd¹s categorizations, but >>> they look fairly accurate at this point. >>> >>> I can take the 21 in Bucket 3. >>> >>> Thanks, >>> Darcy >>> >>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>> Date: Monday, August 3, 2015 at 11:17 AM >>> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" >>> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>> >>> Thanks Mary. No, I hadn¹t made any edits to the document. Just used it to >>> review as I grouped the comments into the three buckets. >>> >>> Does anybody on the sub-team have any objection to dividing the work this >>> way? Or, if not, to my initial tentative placement of each of the comments >>> into those three buckets? I¹m certainly open to any suggestions that a >>> comment that I had read/understood as going in Bucket One should instead be >>> grouped in Bucket Two, etc. If not, shall we divide up to start reviewing >>> these in more detail so that we can be ready to present by next Tuesday? >>> I¹ll go first and am happy to take the 24 comments in Bucket Two (plus >>> Turner¹s, which would make 25). Anybody want to join me? Anybody want to >>> volunteer for the 31 comments in Bucket One or the 21 in Bucket 3? Thanks >>> all! >>> >>> From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org] >>> Sent: Thursday, July 30, 2015 6:06 PM >>> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>> >>> Hello Todd and everyone, >>> >>> Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! >>> >>> Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I >>> apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of comments >>> and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting the table for >>> the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am very sorry, and >>> thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes WG members¹ >>> questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits don¹t replace WG >>> members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. At the same time, I do >>> hope you all know that we try our best to do as thorough and comprehensive a >>> job as possible, so a combination of our efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle >>> eyes is the best arrangement. >>> >>> Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address >>> specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the >>> online template responses that do the same. The Word document is therefore >>> the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or the full WG, >>> as appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my documents/collected >>> comments and don¹t believe I have missed out any others; however, I will do >>> a more thorough check shortly on all the Word documents I¹ve compiled to >>> date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. >>> >>> On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach >>> seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves >>> would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups to >>> tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, and in >>> doing so also note any comments that didn¹t address either so that they >>> can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or considered by >>> the full WG (if appropriate). >>> >>> BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked >>> through it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits in >>> the document you circulated . ? >>> >>> Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance >>> from staff in any way! >>> >>> Cheers >>> Mary >>> >>> Mary Wong >>> Senior Policy Director >>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >>> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >>> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org >>> >>> >>> >>> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >>> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 >>> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> >>> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >>> >>>> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >>>> >>>> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >>>> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was >>>> helpful to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn might >>>> help us decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, I thought >>>> it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two basic >>>> questions, and then presented separately on each. I¹d recommend that we do >>>> the same. Here are the two that I¹d propose: >>>> >>>> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >>>> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a court >>>> order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >>>> Presumably this group would present on: >>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>> · Who did they come from? >>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions of >>>> the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >>>> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P >>>> Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, >>>> subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether >>>> and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. >>>> Presumably this group would present on: >>>> · How many of these comments were there? >>>> · Who did they come from? >>>> · What arguments did they make? >>>> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address the >>>> arguments raised in these comments? >>>> >>>> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it will >>>> help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before us >>>> (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how we¹d >>>> otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A comment >>>> that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose and/or >>>> publish absent a court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex E; it¹s >>>> arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. >>>> >>>> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the >>>> comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated (attached). >>>> My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to make sure that >>>> they agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the comments? Once we¹re >>>> comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the next step would be to >>>> divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some members want to tackle the >>>> third ³unclear² category) to start reviewing the comments in each bucket >>>> and then drafting two documents to present to the WG answering the >>>> questions outlined above (and any other questions that anybody wants to >>>> suggest). >>>> >>>> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >>>> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >>>> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our sub-team >>>> is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For example, I >>>> know that Turner¹s comment (available here: >>>> http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnSR7.p >>>> df) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the attached. >>>> And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted it. J So I >>>> want to make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex E that we also >>>> ought to be reviewing. >>>> >>>> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >>>> >>>> Todd. >>>> >>>> Todd D. Williams >>>> Counsel >>>> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >>>> One CNN Center, 10 North >>>> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >>>> P: 404-827-2234 >>>> F: 404-827-1994 >>>> todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> >>>> >>>> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >>>> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach of >>>> material service terms such as Internet abuse) >>>> 2) Google >>>> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >>>> 4) Access Now >>>> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >>>> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >>>> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service >>>> terms such as net abuse) >>>> 8) Greg McMullen >>>> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >>>> 10) Ralf Haring >>>> 11) Liam >>>> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >>>> 13) Sam >>>> 14) Dan M >>>> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >>>> 16) Not your business >>>> 17) Simon Kissane >>>> 18) TS >>>> 19) Cort Wee >>>> 20) Alex Xu >>>> 21) Kenneth Godwin >>>> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >>>> 23) Sebastian Broussier >>>> 24) Andrew Merenbach >>>> 25) Finn Ellis >>>> 26) Aaron Holmes >>>> 27) Michael Ekstrand >>>> 28) Homer >>>> 29) Donuts >>>> 30) Michael Ho >>>> 31) Key Systems >>>> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how to >>>> change the Disclosure Framework. >>>> 1) BC >>>> 2) MPAA >>>> 3) ISPCP >>>> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >>>> 5) INTA >>>> 6) IACC >>>> 7) NCSG >>>> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >>>> 9) Cyberinvasion >>>> 10) Phil Crooker >>>> 11) Aaron Myers >>>> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >>>> 13) Mike Fewings >>>> 14) Name withheld >>>> 15) Gary Miller >>>> 16) Byunghoon Choi >>>> 17) Reid Baker >>>> 18) Nick O¹Dell >>>> 19) Time Warner >>>> 20) RIAA & IFPI >>>> 21) IPC >>>> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >>>> 23) Vanda Scartezini >>>> 24) Tim Kramer >>>> * Bucket Three: unclear. >>>> 1) Sven Slootweg >>>> 2) Brendan Conniff >>>> 3) Marc Schauber >>>> 4) Aaron Mason >>>> 5) Kevin Szprychel >>>> 6) Christopher >>>> 7) James Ford >>>> 8) Shantanu Gupta >>>> 9) Christopher Smith >>>> 10) Private >>>> 11) Robert Lukitsh >>>> 12) Adam Miller >>>> 13) Charles >>>> 14) Aaron Dalton >>>> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >>>> 16) Ian McNeil >>>> 17) Adam Creighton >>>> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >>>> 19) Anand S. >>>> 20) Lucas Stadler >>>> 21) Alan >>> _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>> Gnso-ppsai3@icann.orghttps://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >>> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >>

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Submissions/compilation
by Mary Wong Aug. 4, 2015

Aug. 4, 2015

Hi everyone, The compiled template/matrix only contains those comments that directly responded to one or more of the WG¹s preliminary recommendations and/or open questions. It does not (at the moment) contain any content from any of the form-based submissions (e.g. the template emails generated by online web campaigns that were sent in the thousands). That¹s because the WG has yet to discuss whether and how to treat these emails although I¹ve suggested to the Sub Teams that to the extent some of these submissions contain direct and specific comments relevant to the topic, the team may wish to consider recommending whether (or not) to include at least a reference to them in the team¹s report. This may be something to discuss more fully with the WG as well; I¹ll flag it to the chairs. Thanks, Holly! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: Holly Raiche <h.raiche(a)internode.on.net> Date: Tuesday, August 4, 2015 at 01:57 To: Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com> Cc: Darcy Southwell <darcy.southwell(a)endurance.com>, "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com>, Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan > Folks > > I¹m sure I have missed something, but it isn¹t clear to me where the list of > submitters on Todd¹s list comes from. > > The individual submissions on the website (not including survey responses) run > to 35 pages, with between 40-50 submissions per page - which is a lot more > than the 76 submissions listed on Todd¹s list (and ALAC isn¹t included in any > of the three baskets) > > The vast majority of individual submissions would fall into either the no, > never, or the only under court order/subpoena/legal requirement, and so > implicitly would reject Annex E. > > So Mary (of Todd or whomever) If you have a list of those submissions that do > not either reject outright any revealing of information at all, or only do so > under some kind of legal order/process, I would be very grateful. > > Thanks > > HOlly > > > On 4 Aug 2015, at 7:41 am, Sara Bockey <sbockey(a)godaddy.com> wrote: > >> I can tackle the 31 in Bucket 1. >> >> Sara >> >> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Darcy Southwell >> Date: Monday, August 3, 2015 at 12:00 PM >> To: "Williams, Todd", Mary Wong, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >> >> Sorry for my silence on these latest emails and missing last week¹s meeting; >> I¹m just returning from vacation with my family and getting caught up on >> email. >> >> Todd¹s proposal for dividing the issues into two questions seems to make >> sense. To Holly¹s point, maybe we can be sure to have two distinct >> categories for ³What arguments did they make?²: (1) the no, never under any >> circumstances, and (2) the ones that said only with a legal process (court >> order. subpoena) and include the stats to give some more color. >> >> I¹ve only skimmed the latest document against Todd¹s categorizations, but >> they look fairly accurate at this point. >> >> I can take the 21 in Bucket 3. >> >> Thanks, >> Darcy >> >> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >> Date: Monday, August 3, 2015 at 11:17 AM >> To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" >> <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >> >> Thanks Mary. No, I hadn¹t made any edits to the document. Just used it to >> review as I grouped the comments into the three buckets. >> >> Does anybody on the sub-team have any objection to dividing the work this >> way? Or, if not, to my initial tentative placement of each of the comments >> into those three buckets? I¹m certainly open to any suggestions that a >> comment that I had read/understood as going in Bucket One should instead be >> grouped in Bucket Two, etc. If not, shall we divide up to start reviewing >> these in more detail so that we can be ready to present by next Tuesday? >> I¹ll go first and am happy to take the 24 comments in Bucket Two (plus >> Turner¹s, which would make 25). Anybody want to join me? Anybody want to >> volunteer for the 31 comments in Bucket One or the 21 in Bucket 3? Thanks >> all! >> >> From: Mary Wong [mailto:mary.wong@icann.org] >> Sent: Thursday, July 30, 2015 6:06 PM >> To: Williams, Todd <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com>; gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >> >> Hello Todd and everyone, >> >> Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! >> >> Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I >> apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of comments >> and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting the table for >> the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am very sorry, and >> thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes WG members¹ >> questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits don¹t replace WG >> members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. At the same time, I do >> hope you all know that we try our best to do as thorough and comprehensive a >> job as possible, so a combination of our efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle >> eyes is the best arrangement. >> >> Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address specific >> recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the online >> template responses that do the same. The Word document is therefore the >> compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or the full WG, as >> appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my documents/collected comments >> and don¹t believe I have missed out any others; however, I will do a more >> thorough check shortly on all the Word documents I¹ve compiled to date for >> all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. >> >> On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach seems >> to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves would >> probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups to tackle >> the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, and in doing so >> also note any comments that didn¹t address either so that they can either >> be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or considered by the full WG >> (if appropriate). >> >> BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked through >> it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits in the >> document you circulated . ? >> >> Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance from >> staff in any way! >> >> Cheers >> Mary >> >> Mary Wong >> Senior Policy Director >> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >> Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org >> >> >> >> From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" >> <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> >> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 >> To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> >> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan >> >>> Am I the first to try this out? Cool. >>> >>> As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the >>> presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was >>> helpful to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn might >>> help us decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, I thought >>> it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two basic >>> questions, and then presented separately on each. I¹d recommend that we do >>> the same. Here are the two that I¹d propose: >>> >>> 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead >>> argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a court >>> order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. >>> Presumably this group would present on: >>> · How many of these comments were there? >>> · Who did they come from? >>> · What arguments did they make? >>> · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions of >>> the Initial Report beyond Annex E? >>> 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P >>> Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, >>> subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether >>> and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. >>> Presumably this group would present on: >>> · How many of these comments were there? >>> · Who did they come from? >>> · What arguments did they make? >>> · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address the >>> arguments raised in these comments? >>> >>> I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it will >>> help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before us (much >>> like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how we¹d >>> otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A comment >>> that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose and/or >>> publish absent a court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex E; it¹s >>> arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. >>> >>> With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the comments >>> in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated (attached). My >>> thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to make sure that they >>> agree with how I¹ve tentatively divided the comments? Once we¹re >>> comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the next step would be to >>> divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some members want to tackle the >>> third ³unclear² category) to start reviewing the comments in each bucket and >>> then drafting two documents to present to the WG answering the questions >>> outlined above (and any other questions that anybody wants to suggest). >>> >>> Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of >>> information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was >>> compiled? I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our sub-team is >>> comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For example, I know >>> that Turner¹s comment (available here: >>> http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnSR7.pd >>> f) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the attached. >>> And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted it. J So I want >>> to make sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex E that we also ought >>> to be reviewing. >>> >>> Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. >>> >>> Todd. >>> >>> Todd D. Williams >>> Counsel >>> Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. >>> One CNN Center, 10 North >>> Atlanta, Georgia 30303 >>> P: 404-827-2234 >>> F: 404-827-1994 >>> todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> >>> >>> · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. >>> 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach of >>> material service terms such as Internet abuse) >>> 2) Google >>> 3) 1&1 Internet SE >>> 4) Access Now >>> 5) Endurance Int¹l Group >>> 6) Jeff Wheelhouse >>> 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service >>> terms such as net abuse) >>> 8) Greg McMullen >>> 9) Evelyn Aya Snow >>> 10) Ralf Haring >>> 11) Liam >>> 12) Dr M Klinefelter >>> 13) Sam >>> 14) Dan M >>> 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas >>> 16) Not your business >>> 17) Simon Kissane >>> 18) TS >>> 19) Cort Wee >>> 20) Alex Xu >>> 21) Kenneth Godwin >>> 22) Shahed Ahmmed >>> 23) Sebastian Broussier >>> 24) Andrew Merenbach >>> 25) Finn Ellis >>> 26) Aaron Holmes >>> 27) Michael Ekstrand >>> 28) Homer >>> 29) Donuts >>> 30) Michael Ho >>> 31) Key Systems >>> * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how to >>> change the Disclosure Framework. >>> 1) BC >>> 2) MPAA >>> 3) ISPCP >>> 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge >>> 5) INTA >>> 6) IACC >>> 7) NCSG >>> 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas >>> 9) Cyberinvasion >>> 10) Phil Crooker >>> 11) Aaron Myers >>> 12) Cui (ADNDRC) >>> 13) Mike Fewings >>> 14) Name withheld >>> 15) Gary Miller >>> 16) Byunghoon Choi >>> 17) Reid Baker >>> 18) Nick O¹Dell >>> 19) Time Warner >>> 20) RIAA & IFPI >>> 21) IPC >>> 22) Thomas Smoonlock >>> 23) Vanda Scartezini >>> 24) Tim Kramer >>> * Bucket Three: unclear. >>> 1) Sven Slootweg >>> 2) Brendan Conniff >>> 3) Marc Schauber >>> 4) Aaron Mason >>> 5) Kevin Szprychel >>> 6) Christopher >>> 7) James Ford >>> 8) Shantanu Gupta >>> 9) Christopher Smith >>> 10) Private >>> 11) Robert Lukitsh >>> 12) Adam Miller >>> 13) Charles >>> 14) Aaron Dalton >>> 15) Stephen Black Wolf >>> 16) Ian McNeil >>> 17) Adam Creighton >>> 18) Arthur Zonnenberg >>> 19) Anand S. >>> 20) Lucas Stadler >>> 21) Alan >> _______________________________________________ Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >> Gnso-ppsai3@icann.orghttps://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >> _______________________________________________ >> Gnso-ppsai3 mailing list >> Gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org >> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-ppsai3 >

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Re: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan
by Mary Wong Aug. 4, 2015

Aug. 4, 2015

Hello Todd and everyone, Welcome to the Sub Team 3 (Annex E) mailing list! Todd - I think you just found an omission from staff (me), for which I apologize. I definitely had the Turner comment in my compilation of comments and documents, but I think what happened is that in formatting the table for the Word document I somehow managed to edit that out. I am very sorry, and thanks for noting it! This is exactly why staff welcomes WG members¹ questions, and why we emphasize that our compilation/edits don¹t replace WG members¹ reading the comments themselves if possible. At the same time, I do hope you all know that we try our best to do as thorough and comprehensive a job as possible, so a combination of our efforts and a WG¹s/Sub Team¹s eagle eyes is the best arrangement. Basically, we read through all the comments that appeared to address specific recommendations and/or open questions, and we also read all the online template responses that do the same. The Word document is therefore the compilation of all of these, tailored to each Sub Team (or the full WG, as appropriate). I¹ve taken a quick look through my documents/collected comments and don¹t believe I have missed out any others; however, I will do a more thorough check shortly on all the Word documents I¹ve compiled to date for all the Sub Teams, just to be sure. On the approach - from the staff perspective, Todd¹s suggested approach seems to make sense, and would align pretty well with what we ourselves would probably have suggested. You could start with two smaller groups to tackle the two categories suggested, based on Todd¹s initial sweep, and in doing so also note any comments that didn¹t address either so that they can either be referred to the appropriate Sub Team (if any) or considered by the full WG (if appropriate). BTW, Todd, maybe it¹s my machine or more likely that I haven¹t looked through it in detail, but I¹m not seeing your comments/additions/edits in the document you circulated . ? Thanks for kicking things off, and do let me know if you need assistance from staff in any way! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Williams, Todd" <Todd.Williams(a)turner.com> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 16:52 To: "gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai3(a)icann.org> Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Thoughts on a work plan > Am I the first to try this out? Cool. > > As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the > presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was helpful > to illustrate where we¹ll need to be by 8-11, which in turn might help us > decide what we¹ll need to do to get there. Specifically, I thought it helped > that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two basic questions, and then > presented separately on each. I¹d recommend that we do the same. Here are > the two that I¹d propose: > > 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead argued > that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a court order, > subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. Presumably this > group would present on: > > · How many of these comments were there? > > · Who did they come from? > > · What arguments did they make? > > · What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions of the > Initial Report beyond Annex E? > > 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P Providers > can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other > legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the Disclosure > Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. Presumably this group > would present on: > > · How many of these comments were there? > > · Who did they come from? > > · What arguments did they make? > > · What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address the > arguments raised in these comments? > > > I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it will > help our sub-team ³divide and conquer² the work that we have before us (much > like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I¹m not really sure how we¹d otherwise > substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A comment that argues > that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose and/or publish absent a > court order isn¹t arguing for changes to Annex E; it¹s arguing to scrap Annex > E altogether. > > With those two buckets in mind, I¹ve taken a first pass through the comments > in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated (attached). My thoughts > below. First, can everybody double-check to make sure that they agree with > how I¹ve tentatively divided the comments? Once we¹re comfortable with that > allocation, then perhaps the next step would be to divide our sub-team into > two (or three, if some members want to tackle the third ³unclear² category) to > start reviewing the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to > present to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other > questions that anybody wants to suggest). > > Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of > information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was compiled? > I¹m just curious because I want to make sure that our sub-team is comfortable > that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For example, I know that Turner¹s > comment (available here: > http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnSR7.p…) > had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn¹t included in the attached. And I > only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted it. J So I want to make > sure that there aren¹t other comments on Annex E that we also ought to be > reviewing. > > Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. > > Todd. > > Todd D. Williams > Counsel > Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. > One CNN Center, 10 North > Atlanta, Georgia 30303 > P: 404-827-2234 > F: 404-827-1994 > todd.williams(a)turner.com <mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> > > · Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. > > 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach of > material service terms such as Internet abuse) > 2) Google > 3) 1&1 Internet SE > 4) Access Now > 5) Endurance Int¹l Group > 6) Jeff Wheelhouse > 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service terms > such as net abuse) > 8) Greg McMullen > 9) Evelyn Aya Snow > 10) Ralf Haring > 11) Liam > 12) Dr M Klinefelter > 13) Sam > 14) Dan M > 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas > 16) Not your business > 17) Simon Kissane > 18) TS > 19) Cort Wee > 20) Alex Xu > 21) Kenneth Godwin > 22) Shahed Ahmmed > 23) Sebastian Broussier > 24) Andrew Merenbach > 25) Finn Ellis > 26) Aaron Holmes > 27) Michael Ekstrand > 28) Homer > 29) Donuts > 30) Michael Ho > 31) Key Systems > * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how to > change the Disclosure Framework. > 1) BC > 2) MPAA > 3) ISPCP > 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge > 5) INTA > 6) IACC > 7) NCSG > 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas > 9) Cyberinvasion > 10) Phil Crooker > 11) Aaron Myers > 12) Cui (ADNDRC) > 13) Mike Fewings > 14) Name withheld > 15) Gary Miller > 16) Byunghoon Choi > 17) Reid Baker > 18) Nick O¹Dell > 19) Time Warner > 20) RIAA & IFPI > 21) IPC > 22) Thomas Smoonlock > 23) Vanda Scartezini > 24) Tim Kramer > * Bucket Three: unclear. > 1) Sven Slootweg > 2) Brendan Conniff > 3) Marc Schauber > 4) Aaron Mason > 5) Kevin Szprychel > 6) Christopher > 7) James Ford > 8) Shantanu Gupta > 9) Christopher Smith > 10) Private > 11) Robert Lukitsh > 12) Adam Miller > 13) Charles > 14) Aaron Dalton > 15) Stephen Black Wolf > 16) Ian McNeil > 17) Adam Creighton > 18) Arthur Zonnenberg > 19) Anand S. > 20) Lucas Stadler > 21) Alan

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Additional inclusions (a possibility)
by Mary Wong Aug. 3, 2015

Aug. 3, 2015

Dear Sub Team 3 members, An email from Kathy in another Sub Team thread reminded me that I should note this for each Sub Team – viz,. the multiple form-based template submissions that have not been factored into the existing Public Comment Review Tool might yield certain specific comments relevant to a Sub Team’s topic, which though part of a form email sent in by many contributors, would still be for each Sub Team to determine whether or not to include in its analysis and report. For example, this Sub Team may wish to consider including a reference to the following comments, found in many form-based template submissions; it is of course up to your team to determine how you would like to deal with these comments as part of your review process: - from the Respect our Privacy petition: "No one’s personal information should be revealed without a court order, regardless of whether the request comes from a private individual or law enforcement agency”. - from the Save Domain Privacy petition: "[P]rivacy providers should not be forced to reveal my private information without verifiable evidenceof wrongdoing.” Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org

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Thoughts on a work plan
by Williams, Todd Aug. 3, 2015

Aug. 3, 2015

Am I the first to try this out? Cool. As I mentioned in my email on Tuesday (attached), I thought that the presentation that we had on our last call from the 1.3.2 sub-team was helpful to illustrate where we'll need to be by 8-11, which in turn might help us decide what we'll need to do to get there. Specifically, I thought it helped that the 1.3.2 sub-team divided their work into two basic questions, and then presented separately on each. I'd recommend that we do the same. Here are the two that I'd propose: 1) Those comments that rejected the premise of Annex E, and instead argued that P/P Providers can never disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process authorizing them to do so. Presumably this group would present on: * How many of these comments were there? * Who did they come from? * What arguments did they make? * What ramifications would these arguments have on other portions of the Initial Report beyond Annex E? 2) Those comments that accepted the premise of Annex E that P/P Providers can sometimes disclose and/or publish absent a court order, subpoena, or other legal process, but then offered thoughts as to whether and how the Disclosure Framework outlined in Annex E ought to be modified. Presumably this group would present on: * How many of these comments were there? * Who did they come from? * What arguments did they make? * What potential changes to Annex E could the WG make to address the arguments raised in these comments? I offer those two buckets for a couple of reasons. First, I think it will help our sub-team "divide and conquer" the work that we have before us (much like the 1.3.2 sub-team did). Second, I'm not really sure how we'd otherwise substantively reconcile those two buckets of comments. A comment that argues that P/P Providers should not be allowed to disclose and/or publish absent a court order isn't arguing for changes to Annex E; it's arguing to scrap Annex E altogether. With those two buckets in mind, I've taken a first pass through the comments in the Review Tool Word Document that Mary circulated (attached). My thoughts below. First, can everybody double-check to make sure that they agree with how I've tentatively divided the comments? Once we're comfortable with that allocation, then perhaps the next step would be to divide our sub-team into two (or three, if some members want to tackle the third "unclear" category) to start reviewing the comments in each bucket and then drafting two documents to present to the WG answering the questions outlined above (and any other questions that anybody wants to suggest). Finally, one last question for Staff: can you give us a little bit of information on the methodology of how the attached Word document was compiled? I'm just curious because I want to make sure that our sub-team is comfortable that what we are reviewing is exhaustive. For example, I know that Turner's comment (available here: http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ppsai-initial-05may15/pdfrXQ3VcnSR7.p…) had some thoughts on Annex E. Yet it wasn't included in the attached. And I only know that it mentions Annex E because I drafted it. :) So I want to make sure that there aren't other comments on Annex E that we also ought to be reviewing. Thanks. Look forward to working with everybody. Todd. Todd D. Williams Counsel Turner Broadcasting System, Inc. One CNN Center, 10 North Atlanta, Georgia 30303 P: 404-827-2234 F: 404-827-1994 todd.williams(a)turner.com<mailto:todd.williams@turner.com> * Bucket One: rejects the premise of Annex E. 1) Internet Commerce Association (though with carve-out for breach of material service terms such as Internet abuse) 2) Google 3) 1&1 Internet SE 4) Access Now 5) Endurance Int'l Group 6) Jeff Wheelhouse 7) EasyDNS (though with same carve-out as ICA for breach of service terms such as net abuse) 8) Greg McMullen 9) Evelyn Aya Snow 10) Ralf Haring 11) Liam 12) Dr M Klinefelter 13) Sam 14) Dan M 15) Adrian Valeriu Ispas 16) Not your business 17) Simon Kissane 18) TS 19) Cort Wee 20) Alex Xu 21) Kenneth Godwin 22) Shahed Ahmmed 23) Sebastian Broussier 24) Andrew Merenbach 25) Finn Ellis 26) Aaron Holmes 27) Michael Ekstrand 28) Homer 29) Donuts 30) Michael Ho 31) Key Systems * Bucket Two: accepts the premise of Annex E, but offers thoughts on how to change the Disclosure Framework. 1) BC 2) MPAA 3) ISPCP 4) CDT, Open Technology Institute & Public Knowledge 5) INTA 6) IACC 7) NCSG 8) Shardul Amarchand Mangaldas 9) Cyberinvasion 10) Phil Crooker 11) Aaron Myers 12) Cui (ADNDRC) 13) Mike Fewings 14) Name withheld 15) Gary Miller 16) Byunghoon Choi 17) Reid Baker 18) Nick O'Dell 19) Time Warner 20) RIAA & IFPI 21) IPC 22) Thomas Smoonlock 23) Vanda Scartezini 24) Tim Kramer * Bucket Three: unclear. 1) Sven Slootweg 2) Brendan Conniff 3) Marc Schauber 4) Aaron Mason 5) Kevin Szprychel 6) Christopher 7) James Ford 8) Shantanu Gupta 9) Christopher Smith 10) Private 11) Robert Lukitsh 12) Adam Miller 13) Charles 14) Aaron Dalton 15) Stephen Black Wolf 16) Ian McNeil 17) Adam Creighton 18) Arthur Zonnenberg 19) Anand S. 20) Lucas Stadler 21) Alan

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