Hi Kathy Great job. First - I did suggest some changes to the first paragraph - I gather you aren’t happy with them? Next - you refer to the ‘last call’. Is that the full PPSAI or one just for Subteam 3 Thanks Holly On 27 Aug 2015, at 7:16 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy@kathykleiman.com> wrote:
Hi All, Tx to Darcy for the Overview work. I've taken her draft and added to it my work on Section III as promised on the last call. I added more quotes from commenters seeking court orders and the use of existing legal due process mechanisms prior to disclosure of proxied data. There was a wide array of comments on this issue, including from ISPs, individuals, organizations, and companies.
I used Darcy's version as the base. Both her edits (Overview) and my edits (Section III) are shown in "track changes."
Best, Kathy
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Hi, all! In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the beginning. I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what I’ve done. I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate overview.
I also made some minor revisions to Section V (“Comments that did not fit neatly into any of the above categories”) that I realized after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit more sense. Again, I’ve redlined the changes so you can easily see what changed.
Please let me know if there are any questions.
Thanks, Darcy
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