Hi Vicky and Mary, Unfortunately, Vicky's comments and edits did not make it to the general Subteam 4 list. It means both Paul and I, who allocated time this AM to work on the report, do not have access to it. As soon as possible, could you both resend a copy of this draft report to the full Subteam? Mary, please note that this Report is not clear for distribution until it has been reviewed by the full Subteam and its co-convenors. Tx, Kathy :
Thanks much, Vicky! As noted previously, the WG chairs would like us to send something out earlier rather than later, even if it's not a final agreed version, as that would be helpful for WG reviewing purposes. As such, unless there are any more edits, I'll most likely send this out first thing Monday morning - with the usual caveats, of course. As always, sub team members should be able to speak to any points they wish to raise during the WG call as well.
Cheers Mary
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On Oct 2, 2015, at 20:34, Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler@riaa.com <mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com>> wrote:
Please see attached. I tried to shorten the draft, make it more neutral, and raised concerns with some of the recommendations. I still think it is quite duplicative, with the same comment/concerns raised in more than 1 category, but I didn’t remove those since I assume its based on how we categorized the comments in the template.
*From:*gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Mary Wong *Sent:* Friday, October 2, 2015 7:59 PM *To:* gnso-ppsai4@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-ppsai4] Fwd: Subteam 4 draft report - final call for comments
Thanks, Kathy and everyone. I realize it’s late for all now, but the WG co-chairs have asked me to request that, if at all possible, can the Sub Team send around its report by tomorrow? My sense is that they are asking on the understanding that the summary report is likely to run to quite a few pages long, and hasn’t yet been seen by the WG despite the intention to have presented it earlier this week.
If it will help, the Sub Team can agree to send a version of the document that is subject to the caveat that it hasn’t yet been fully reviewed by all, and may not represent the consensus views of the whole Sub Team (as has been done for other Sub Teams).
Thanks and cheers
Mary
Mary Wong
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*From: *<gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>> *Date: *Friday, October 2, 2015 at 14:19 *To: *"gnso-ppsai4@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai4@icann.org <mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>>, "Paul D. McGrady" <PMcGrady@winston.com <mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com>> *Subject: *Re: [Gnso-ppsai4] Fwd: Subteam 4 draft report - final call for comments
Hi Mary, As you can see, we are still gathering edits and comments.
All, Could you get the edits in to me and Paul by COB today?
Best, Kathy
:
Thanks, Kathy, Paul and everyone - just let me know if/how staff can
assist in getting the report (even if it is to be “subject to further Sub
Team 4 review”, for instance) to the WG. If it is at all possible, it will
be great if we can send it to the WG by today, so that they will have the
chance to review what’s a pretty long document more fully before Tuesday!
Stephanie, we hope you feel better soon!
Cheers
Mary
Mary Wong
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Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
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Date: Thursday, October 1, 2015 at 15:39
To: Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> <mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca>
Cc: "gnso-ppsai4@icann.org" <mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org> <gnso-ppsai4@icann.org> <mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai4] Fwd: Subteam 4 draft report - final call for
comments
I'm in the air finally heading back to Chicago. I will look this over
tomorrow and get you any comments I may have in your comments in my
comments! 😀
Sent from my iPhone
On Oct 1, 2015, at 12:16 PM, Stephanie Perrin
<stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca <mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca><mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.c<mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca>
a> <mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote:
I am afraid I am very ill, and not focusing on work. Trying to get rid
of a very very bad cold prior to Dublin....
SP
On 2015-10-01 15:08, Kathy Kleiman wrote:
Hi All,
Just a re-check to see if anyone has any changes before our Subteam 4
report goes out to the full WG for first (and perhaps last) presentation
of analysis and action items?
Best,
Kathy
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Date: Tue, 29 Sep 2015 16:04:16 -0400
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Hi All,
Tx to Paul for his work! Yesterday, Paul shared with me the edited
draft report. He edited the findings and drafted the text for our
"recommendation boxes." I really appreciate all he has done - this is
hard work!
I have now reviewed and added my thoughts and edits to the proposed
recommendations. Both Paul and I used "track changes" so all is there to
see and review. Please let us know what you think, and in particular,
and in in light of the desire to close this process soon: What is it
there in these remaining comments that impels us to consider an issue
further and ask the WG to review and work on?
Quick question: after your review, do you see pressing issues we need to
discuss? If so, can we do it online or do we need a call later this
week? Please let us know your thoughts!
Best,
Kathy
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