Nov. 11, 2017
1:23 a.m.
As such, I believe it would be unfair to other team members to make substantive changes to the team's output without an opportunity for team review and discussion. However, some of Rob's suggested edits appeared to be simple clarifications and likely uncontroversial.
I'm more than happy with that version. Rob --- This email has been checked for viruses by Avast antivirus software. https://www.avast.com/antivirus