Thanks Vicki. Are there any more edits you would like the team to consider? If so, accept the edits that Griffin made to create a clean version and then make your new edits in redline for the team to review. Chuck From: Victoria Sheckler [mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com] Sent: Tuesday, October 31, 2017 3:19 PM To: Griffin Barnett <Griffin@Winterfeldt.law>; 'jumaropi@yahoo.com' <jumaropi@yahoo.com>; consult@cgomes.com Cc: gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org Subject: RE: [Gnso-rds-pdp-6] Monday Meeting While I think it’s better to have some common examples in the purpose statement, I am fine with the streamlined formulation. Re Farzaneh’s comment re Annex A, I apologize if it wasn’t in the prior draft. I certainly meant to include it in Annex A. Re: combining purposes that may overlap, we just need to make sure that common uses don’t fall through the crack or end up so vague that it isn’t clear what is being referred to. Please accept my apologies again for not being able to join you in this week’s sessions. - Vicky From: gnso-rds-pdp-6-bounces@icann.org <mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-6-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-6-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Griffin Barnett Sent: Monday, October 30, 2017 4:25 AM To: 'jumaropi@yahoo.com' <jumaropi@yahoo.com <mailto:jumaropi@yahoo.com> >; consult@cgomes.com <mailto:consult@cgomes.com> Cc: gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org <mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-6] Monday Meeting Hi all, as we discussed this morning in our informal meeting (those who were able to attend), I have prepared an updated DT 6 document for further consideration. The doc is in redline form so you can all see the changes made. Specifically, these changes include: 1. Amending and streamlining the purpose definition (it is now in a single sentence format, and removes references to specific illustrative examples); 2. Adding in Farzaneh’s specific use scenario (re suppressing/prosecuting speech/political or civil activity/blasphemous activity) into Annex A. Best regards, Griffin From: jumaropi@yahoo.com <mailto:jumaropi@yahoo.com> [mailto:jumaropi@yahoo.com] Sent: Sunday, October 29, 2017 11:53 PM To: Griffin Barnett <Griffin@Winterfeldt.law <mailto:Griffin@Winterfeldt.law> >; consult@cgomes.com <mailto:consult@cgomes.com> Cc: gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org <mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-6] Monday Meeting I am on my way too. Enviado desde mi Huawei -------- Original Message -------- Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-6] Monday Meeting From: Griffin Barnett To: consult@cgomes.com <mailto:consult@cgomes.com> CC: gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org <mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org> FYI I am on my way. Sent from my iPhone On Oct 29, 2017, at 10:19 PM, "consult@cgomes.com <mailto:consult@cgomes.com> " <consult@cgomes.com <mailto:consult@cgomes.com> > wrote: For those in Abu Dhabi and who are available, let’s go ahead and meet Monday morning at 8 am GST at the Hiatt restaurant on the 18th floor. We will not be able to have remote participation but that was the time when most were available and we will not make any decisions without involved those who cannot attend. Chuck _______________________________________________ Gnso-rds-pdp-6 mailing list Gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org <mailto:Gnso-rds-pdp-6@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-rds-pdp-6