REMINDER FOR REVIEW: Revised Questions to URS Practitioners - Please Comment by Tuesday, 24 April
Dear all, Further to the message below, this is a reminder to send in any comments or suggested edits not later than today, Tuesday, 24 April. Any further suggestions will be considered along with those received thus far from Brian Beckham and George Kirikos. Best Regards, Mary, Julie, Berry, and Ariel From: gnso-rpm-wg <gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@icann.org> Date: Wednesday, April 18, 2018 at 7:27 PM To: "gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org" <gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org> Subject: [gnso-rpm-wg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Questions to URS Practitioners - Please Comment by Tuesday, 24 April Dear All, Please see the attached revised document “URS Practitioner Background Experience and Perspective” based on the comments and suggestions received during the RPM PDP WG meeting today, 18 April. Please review the document per the following action item highlighted below. The suggested edits are indicated by redline and strikethrough in the attached document. Questions for URS Practitioners: Staff will provide to the WG a redlined document with suggested revisions by 18 April (DONE-Attached) WG members are encouraged to provide any further comments/suggestions by COB Friday, 20 April, but not later than Tuesday, 24 April; Staff will provide to the WG a final redlined document before the meeting on Wednesday, 25 April. Please note: When the proposed questions are finalized, staff will proofread and correct typos, formatting errors, etc. before the questions are converted into a survey; WG members are encouraged to focus your comments/suggestions on the substance. Only the PDF version is provided to ensure the WG is commenting/suggesting edits to the content in one master document, so as to avoid any potential version confusion caused by Word file(s). Thank you for your time and review! Best Regards, Mary, Julie, Berry, and Ariel
Julie: I am reluctant to dive back in with any more changes, but several items I believe are worth mentioning on the redline I received today. 1. The centered “title” of the document is really a heading intended for the first set of questions (which has no heading) and should be moved down to the left margin as an initial heading above the first question at a left justified location similar to the un numbered headings which follow (perhaps an A, B, C, outline format would be useful, but its in PDF so can’t insert.) 2. There are footnote texts at the bottom of pages 5 and 6 but I could not find the superscript notes to which they relate. 3. Does the document have a title or do these questions just appear after the introductory remarks and caveat we created previously? Perhaps we should see the entire document in final. Best regards, Scott Please click below to use my booking calendar to schedule: a 15-minute call<calendly.com/saustin-2/15min> a 30-minute call<calendly.com/saustin-2/30min> a 60-minute call<calendly.com/saustin-2/60min> [cid:image001.png@01D3DBD1.AF971BC0][IntellectualPropertyLaw 100] [microbadge[1]] <http://www.avvo.com/attorneys/33308-fl-scott-austin-1261914.html> Scott R. Austin | Board Certified Intellectual Property Attorney | VLP Law Group LLP 101 NE Third Avenue, Suite 1500, Fort Lauderdale, FL 33301 Phone: (954) 204-3744 | Fax: (954) 320-0233 | SAustin@VLPLawGroup.com<mailto:SAustin@VLPLawGroup.com> From: gnso-rpm-wg <gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Julie Hedlund Sent: Tuesday, April 24, 2018 12:15 PM To: gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org Subject: [gnso-rpm-wg] REMINDER FOR REVIEW: Revised Questions to URS Practitioners - Please Comment by Tuesday, 24 April Dear all, Further to the message below, this is a reminder to send in any comments or suggested edits not later than today, Tuesday, 24 April. Any further suggestions will be considered along with those received thus far from Brian Beckham and George Kirikos. Best Regards, Mary, Julie, Berry, and Ariel From: gnso-rpm-wg <gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org>> Date: Wednesday, April 18, 2018 at 7:27 PM To: "gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org>" <gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org>> Subject: [gnso-rpm-wg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Questions to URS Practitioners - Please Comment by Tuesday, 24 April Dear All, Please see the attached revised document “URS Practitioner Background Experience and Perspective” based on the comments and suggestions received during the RPM PDP WG meeting today, 18 April. Please review the document per the following action item highlighted below. The suggested edits are indicated by redline and strikethrough in the attached document. 1. Questions for URS Practitioners: * Staff will provide to the WG a redlined document with suggested revisions by 18 April (DONE-Attached) * WG members are encouraged to provide any further comments/suggestions by COB Friday, 20 April, but not later than Tuesday, 24 April; * Staff will provide to the WG a final redlined document before the meeting on Wednesday, 25 April. Please note: * When the proposed questions are finalized, staff will proofread and correct typos, formatting errors, etc. before the questions are converted into a survey; WG members are encouraged to focus your comments/suggestions on the substance. * Only the PDF version is provided to ensure the WG is commenting/suggesting edits to the content in one master document, so as to avoid any potential version confusion caused by Word file(s). Thank you for your time and review! Best Regards, Mary, Julie, Berry, and Ariel This message contains information which may be confidential and legally privileged. Unless you are the addressee, you may not use, copy or disclose to anyone this message or any information contained in the message. If you have received this message in error, please send me an email and delete this message. Any tax advice provided by VLP is for your use only and cannot be used to avoid tax penalties or for promotional or marketing purposes.
Hi Julie, I was not part of the practitioners subteam and so if this comment has already been discussed then so be it. It is not a major issue. #3 under Substantive Issues asks this: Do you believe that the URS is being used for the types of cases for which it was intended, namely, clear cases of abuse? Someone could answer ‘agree’ and nonetheless believe it is also being used inappropriately. Wouldn’t it help to phrase it ‘generally being used’ or ‘primarily being used’ or some such phrase? Best regards, David David McAuley Sr International Policy & Business Development Manager Verisign Inc. 703-948-4154 From: gnso-rpm-wg [mailto:gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Julie Hedlund Sent: Tuesday, April 24, 2018 12:15 PM To: gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] [gnso-rpm-wg] REMINDER FOR REVIEW: Revised Questions to URS Practitioners - Please Comment by Tuesday, 24 April Dear all, Further to the message below, this is a reminder to send in any comments or suggested edits not later than today, Tuesday, 24 April. Any further suggestions will be considered along with those received thus far from Brian Beckham and George Kirikos. Best Regards, Mary, Julie, Berry, and Ariel From: gnso-rpm-wg <gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org>> Date: Wednesday, April 18, 2018 at 7:27 PM To: "gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org>" <gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org>> Subject: [gnso-rpm-wg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Questions to URS Practitioners - Please Comment by Tuesday, 24 April Dear All, Please see the attached revised document “URS Practitioner Background Experience and Perspective” based on the comments and suggestions received during the RPM PDP WG meeting today, 18 April. Please review the document per the following action item highlighted below. The suggested edits are indicated by redline and strikethrough in the attached document. 1. Questions for URS Practitioners: a. Staff will provide to the WG a redlined document with suggested revisions by 18 April (DONE-Attached) b. WG members are encouraged to provide any further comments/suggestions by COB Friday, 20 April, but not later than Tuesday, 24 April; c. Staff will provide to the WG a final redlined document before the meeting on Wednesday, 25 April. Please note: * When the proposed questions are finalized, staff will proofread and correct typos, formatting errors, etc. before the questions are converted into a survey; WG members are encouraged to focus your comments/suggestions on the substance. * Only the PDF version is provided to ensure the WG is commenting/suggesting edits to the content in one master document, so as to avoid any potential version confusion caused by Word file(s). Thank you for your time and review! Best Regards, Mary, Julie, Berry, and Ariel
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Julie Hedlund -
McAuley, David -
Scott Austin