Dear all, As a reminder, your input on the following is due Wednesday 30 November: * redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 3-9. * strawman draft of the new Recommendation 2 and response to Charter Question A7. Please see details below. Kind regards, Emily From: Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org> Date: Wednesday, 16 November 2022 at 18:18 To: "gnso-tpr@icann.org" <gnso-tpr@icann.org> Subject: Input Due 30 November: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 2-9 Dear working group members, As discussed on yesterday’s call, staff had an action item to provide a redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 3-9 (see pages 18-24), as well as a strawman draft of the new Recommendation 2 and response to Charter Question A7. The redline is attached. The Recommendation 2 strawman is available here<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e8iG6FmRD0M5VlMUrmIedPw3burqfxLXQrkubxDJ...>. Please carefully review these documents in coordination with the groups you represent. If you feel that there are items that need to be revised, please enter them here<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d7KwQH6poIxrafFYc5_1e1jQiiCA4WHqdNuRrx2I...>. For each item, please include: * Report version (the date listed in the header of the document) and applicable line numbers ( these are listed along the left margin of the document). * Name and group you represent: If multiple WG members represent a group, input should be in coordination with these other members. * Rationale: please provide a clear explanation for why you are proposing the revision. * Specific proposed revision: Provide the language you would like to see added/removed/edited. The deadline for submitting input is 30 November 2022. After the deadline, the working group will discuss the items submitted in the input document. Following review of those items, the text will be considered stable. Please do not hesitate to reach out with any questions about the review process. Kind regards, Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily Emily Barabas Policy Development Support Senior Manager Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Phone: +31 (0)6 84507976 www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org/>