Hi Elaine Some minor changes suggested in the attached version, with tracked changes. The only substantive one is to add more explanation to the travel funding element. kind regards Jay
On 30/05/2018, at 3:31 AM, Elaine Pruis <elainepruis@gmail.com> wrote:
Hello, Please find attached the suggested comments on the Charter Review Team report and Charter revisions. We'll submit these comments to ICANN on Thursday. Please send any edits or additions using Track Changes, within the next 48 hours. Thanks Elaine <Proposed CSC Comments on RT Report.docx>_______________________________________________ ICANN-CSC mailing list ICANN-CSC@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/icann-csc
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