Dear all, Richard Hill has submitted comments on the draft charter (attached). Given that he does not have posting rights to this mailing list, we are forwarding his original note to ensure delivery. Best, Ergys Begin forwarded message: From: Richard Hill <rhill@hill-a.ch<mailto:rhill@hill-a.ch>> Date: July 23, 2014 at 12:30:01 PM GMT+2 To: "Ianaxfer@Elists. Isoc. Org" <ianaxfer@elists.isoc.org<mailto:ianaxfer@elists.isoc.org>>, "Ianatransition@Icann. Org" <ianatransition@icann.org<mailto:ianatransition@icann.org>>, ICANN Internal <internal-cg@icann.org<mailto:internal-cg@icann.org>> Cc: "Rhill@Alum. Mit. Edu" <rhill@alum.mit.edu<mailto:rhill@alum.mit.edu>> Subject: [Internal-cg] Comments on Draft charter for the IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group Reply-To: <rhill@hill-a.ch<mailto:rhill@hill-a.ch>> Please find attached my comments on the Draft charter for the IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group and some proposed revisions. Best, Richard Hill