Proposed edits, comments and clarifications from me attached and on the dropbox. Ultimately they ended up being both simple semantic and substantive in nature. I recommend that for ease of viewing one uses the 'Track changes' --> 'view final' option as this is far less cluttered. After reading, switch back to see the comments and rationale behind some of the changes. I also realised that there is one question I keep getting from people: "Has the NTIA ever invoked its stewardship powers?" and while I have an answer, I'm not convinced it is completely correct. I've included that one for general dissection. Best regards Narelle -- Narelle Clark Director of Operations - Deputy CEO Australian Communications Consumer Action Network Suite 4.02 Level 4 55 Mountain St Ultimo NSW 2007 Australia Follow us on twitter @ACCAN_AU Sign up for our weekly WebNews Visit our website --------------------------------------------- The information contained in or attached to this message is intended only for the people it is addressed to. If you are not the intended recipient, any use, disclosure or copying of this information is unauthorised and prohibited. This information may be confidential or subject to legal privilege. If you receive this e-mail in error, please notify the sender immediately and delete the e-mail and any attachments. The Australian Communications Consumer Action Network does not warrant that the information in this e-mail or any attachments are free from any viruses, defects, errors, interception or interference.