On Aug 26, 2014, at 17:16 PM, Milton L Mueller <mueller@syr.edu> wrote:
Original sentence:
The IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group (ICG) seeks complete formal responses to this RFP from the “operational communities” of IANA (i.e., those with direct operational or service relationships with IANA, in connection with names, numbers, or protocol parameters).
Proposed modification:
The IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group (ICG) requests “operational communities” of IANA (i.e., those with direct operational or service relationships with IANA, in connection with names, numbers, or protocol parameters) to convene processes to develop complete formal responses to this RFP.
I will also support Milton’s language above combined with the one submitted by Jean-Jaques from the ALAC community. Thanks. - a.