-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 My input: "The IANA parameters fall into three categories" - --> "The IANA functions are divided into three main categories" Rationale: As I mentioned in the meeting we should not appear to be limiting. For instance the IANA does provide service maintaining DNS "glue" information for individual root name server operators. This is related to domain names but not the same. - --- "(ii) Assess the outputs of the three communities of interest for workability, compatibility and consensus" strike "workability" as per consensus and to be compatible with the changes made later in the text. - --- "The ICG also recommends the interested parties to be involved as early as possible in the relevant community processes." - ---> "The ICG recommends that all interested parties get involved as early as possible in the development of these plans. No-one should wait until the following stage and bring their input only to the CG." Rationale: clarity and explicitness - --- (iii) Assembling and submitting a complete proposal Re-structure such that the main flow is the ideal one and exceptions are called out as exceptions. -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.7 (Darwin) iQIVAwUBU8iUmNDY5Emqa716AQJamhAAo1EFK9k00w+OlwF8DvyEYvnoPR+itRb3 E5Xx0y9uUKTeYV0BingBoJ+aXqK72F2ejnwJaZa1rkZT6pnGAIXcKNxyL8nXDGXI 6tEH0IvdBrkf4A8tJ9GzwFDbCmWFn4wX8gU5b5dqIe/0Y0VkDnWW8IuaW+sHhY1s ZlzA6JgkcHR+0ZvfMwjtV0KyPaHe4vQy+6xdVIb3O6ZfjBOiufT4tCv02yT6k1Ac ovMZlhrhkTDJoQvwEZa431GW9vqNNmT+NtVWwgvxT+X5+s0gTJS54/yL4JzFeS3L ejnuAzvuavsL5KQWodJOtyjkD6nimKBQW8+EwMqAfHhLIPLMJFHgv01fiJ8T2Iow Y3QTrHFZSi6z4om7E9T9hPOmNaCUbtyQdVubjuCBKQfQTJtagHJf1960CpotE2fe bH/U7F7GfvxQbvPsspn1MHrlc06KRWMVwzV9ktCoMHzAznzL9EoBshBfhCETqsQh qxz59PON1VlyRwZwsGbJfB9r+wkBoBc70oK5fGgnQEAFgdMZQgdg8tKdB3wnQDb+ ooacQDdHoFYINZAQH7Y5rXWv8BoFaIp+ONQb6sRt15cwVaePNmZf7aDMnT6Sgf/L xXeZKoXcL1mr/UZDec0H84lH8akWW11+sp3R+YZ47mPzjvQO/47yaWqnrehqz+ZZ gKweyuwPOIs= =Mv+4 -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----