Some edits, to address Adeil's concerns and to also phrase this more in terms of request than requirement... On 7/18/2014 6:56 AM, Adiel Akplogan wrote:

Thanks Paul, attached some quick additional suggestions.

- a.

On Jul 18, 2014, at 12:06 PM, Paul Wilson <pwilson@apnic.net> wrote:

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Here is the latest version after this morning's edit session (Thanks to Joe)

Paul.

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Paul, I looked over this and found a need for some serious copy editing and some missing questions about accountability. See my modifications attached. -----Original Message----- From: internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Paul Wilson Sent: Friday, July 18, 2014 12:10 PM To: Coordination Group Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Requirements for Community Proposals Dear all, As agreed, we should finalise this document in the next 2 weeks - so it can be ready for IGF, along with charter and scope. I'm happy to hold the edit token, and ask you for any comments by early next week (say by end of Tuesday wherever you are). I'll take the comments and get new version to you by the end of next week. thanks, Paul. ________________________________________________________________________ Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC <dg@apnic.net> http://www.apnic.net +61 7 3858 3100 See you at APNIC 38! http://conference.apnic.net/38