IRT Task 222 Review Drafting Error #2: Registrar Whois Server; OneDoc Sections 6.1, 7.1.2, 7,2,1, 8.4.3, 8.5.1 due 20220801
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Dear IRT, In our clean up review to prepare for the Public Comment, we discovered another “drafting error.” It impacts requirements for Registrar Whois Server data element: collection, transfer, and escrow. We’d greatly appreciate IRT’s prompt review that are redlined in Sections 6.1, 7.2, 7.4, 8.4, and 8.5. The explanation for the change was documented as Drafting Error #2. Rather than adding it at the end, the item was inserted following the order IRT had recommended. 222 Review Drafting Error #2: Registrar Whois Server; OneDoc Sections 6.1, 7.1.2, 7,2,1, 8.4.3, 8.5<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1q9I2ZBTkiq8hFOZeWwdYAaiUge3JLFx7/edit>.1 20220801 -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org> One World – One Internet
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Dennis Chang