Thank you. I accepted your suggestions. I also changed "LatinGP" to "Latin GP". I think that is consistent with how it is written elsewhere and easier to read. New version enclosed. Yours, Mats -- --- Mats Dufberg mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se Technical Expert Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation) Mobile: +46 73 065 3899 https://internetstiftelsen.se/ -----Original Message----- From: Latingp <latingp-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org> Reply to: Michael Bauland <Michael.Bauland@knipp.de> Date: Wednesday, 29 September 2021 at 09:01 To: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Latingp] Presentation for ICANN 72 in ICANN template Hi Mats, On 29.09.2021 00:34, Mats Dufberg via Latingp wrote:
Mirjana,
Thank you for reviewing. We will agree on one of us presenting the slides. I hope you will be able to join us at the presentation at ICANN 72.
I have no problem with doing the presentation if you don't want to do it. But we can discuss the details in tomorrow's call. In the meantime, some very minor adjustments (if you agree): p.6: remove the second "review" in the sentence: "Anyone is encouraged to review the proposal and provide --review-- comments and suggestions." p.7: With "LGR document" you mean the "LGR XML file", right? Then I'd change it to "The LGR XML file is the normative document." p.9: Put "Chapter 4" in the beginning of the first sentence, and maybe add a "the" in front of "LatingGP"? => "Chapter 4 describes the work process of the LatinGP." Cheers, Michael -- ____________________________________________________________________ | | | knipp | Knipp Medien und Kommunikation GmbH ------- Technologiepark Martin-Schmeisser-Weg 9 44227 Dortmund Germany Dipl.-Informatiker Fon: +49 231 9703-0 Fax: +49 231 9703-200 Dr. Michael Bauland SIP: Michael.Bauland@knipp.de Software Development E-mail: Michael.Bauland@knipp.de Register Court: Amtsgericht Dortmund, HRB 13728 Chief Executive Officers: Dietmar Knipp, Elmar Knipp _______________________________________________ Latingp mailing list Latingp@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/latingp _______________________________________________ By submitting your personal data, you consent to the processing of your personal data for purposes of subscribing to this mailing list accordance with the ICANN Privacy Policy (https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy) and the website Terms of Service (https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos). You can visit the Mailman link above to change your membership status or configuration, including unsubscribing, setting digest-style delivery or disabling delivery altogether (e.g., for a vacation), and so on.