MSR = Maximal Starting Repertoire Corrected in enclosed version. Mats -- --- Mats Dufberg mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se Technical Expert Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation) Mobile: +46 73 065 3899 https://internetstiftelsen.se/ From: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se> Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 21:33 To: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update Thank you, Bill! I have followed all your proposed updates (but MSR = Maximum Starting Repertoire). In slide 10 I removed "In some cases LatinGP has requested characters to be included in MSR" because that is already covered in slide 5. An updated version is enclosed. Mats -- --- Mats Dufberg mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se Technical Expert Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation) Mobile: +46 73 065 3899 https://internetstiftelsen.se/ From: Bill Jouris <bill.jouris@insidethestack.com> Reply to: Bill Jouris <bill.jouris@insidethestack.com> Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 20:18 To: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org>, Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se> Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update Hi Mats, Overall, I have to say that this is an awesome job. Thank you for taking it on. A few extremely minor tweaks: - on Slide 5, it would probably be useful to spell out Maximal Standard Repertoire the first time that MSR is used. - on Slide 5, the last bullet, I would change LatinGP to LatinGP's. That is, make it "possessive". - Slide 6, the last bullet, add initial quotation mark before "The language..." - Slide 7, first bullet: change "by the criteria" to "using those criteria" - Slide 8, bullet 5: change "In many cases there is a precomposed codepoint" to "In many cases, Unicode has a precomposed codepoint" - Slide 8, bullet 7: change to "The LatinGP's proposed repertoire lists 218 characters." - Slide 9, last bullet: Use a capital A for Appendix - Slide 10, bullet 2: Change "that" to "which" As I say, an extremely impressive job. Thanks again. Bill Jouris Inside Products bill.jouris@insidethestack.com 831-659-8360 925-855-9512 (direct) On Sunday, September 26, 2021, 10:49:41 AM PDT, Mats Dufberg via Latingp <latingp@icann.org> wrote: Thanks, Hazem. I have fixed those errors. I also added slide number. It makes it easier to navigate in the PDF version. An updated version is enclosed. Bill, you are the native speaker, I am not. Please comment any language that is too deviating from the norm. Mats -- --- Mats Dufberg mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se Technical Expert Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation) Mobile: +46 73 065 3899 https://internetstiftelsen.se/ From: Hazem Hezzah <hhezzah.las@gmail.com> Organisation: LAS Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 14:49 To: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se> Cc: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org> Subject: RE: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update Hello Mats, Now the part about “Appendix B” is duplicated at end of Slide 6 and start of Slide 7 . Another minor note in Slide 7: “….for each language found in the chapter 9.” Regards, Hazem Hezzah From: Latingp <latingp-bounces@icann.org<mailto:latingp-bounces@icann.org>> On Behalf Of Mats Dufberg via Latingp Sent: 25 September, 2021 16:12 To: ICANN Latin GP <Latingp@icann.org<mailto:Latingp@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update Slide 2 is updated with the end of comments date and a link to the proposal. Else no changes since last version. (Thanks Bill.) Mats -- --- Mats Dufberg mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se<mailto:mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se> Technical Expert Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation) Mobile: +46 73 065 3899 https://internetstiftelsen.se/ _______________________________________________ Latingp mailing list Latingp@icann.org<mailto:Latingp@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/latingp _______________________________________________ By submitting your personal data, you consent to the processing of your personal data for purposes of subscribing to this mailing list accordance with the ICANN Privacy Policy (https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy) and the website Terms of Service (https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos). You can visit the Mailman link above to change your membership status or configuration, including unsubscribing, setting digest-style delivery or disabling delivery altogether (e.g., for a vacation), and so on.