June 15, 2007
5:58 p.m.
People Who will sign whatever is agreed on. (We usually need about 14 months notice to schedule travel.) Three copy-edit comments: 4. 8 'should' - this is a responsibility of ICANN - I think a better verb would to be 'will' or 'must' 5. 3 change 'encourage' to 'encouraging' 6.3 ... when signed by all parties writing. ... Either party - if there are only two parties then I suggest changing 'all' to 'both' If there are more than two parties, the word 'either' usually refers to only two Sylvia Sylvia Caras People Who