Dear all, A reminder that the deadline to raise comments on the RT's draft report is fast approaching. Here for your convenience are the relevant links: Draft Report, as posted for review on 17 August https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/64084100/RDS%20-%20Draft%20... Section 1.2, Recommendations List, including 20 August plenary call edits http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/e00fe677/RD... Sections 9.4 & 5, ICANN Bylaws, updated issue/recommendation per plenary call http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/788eca6e/Ac... Please raise any substantive concerns you may have on recommendations, findings, and other content to the full RT mailing list ASAP to allow time for team review. The latest possible date to send comments is 26 August. Submitted comments are to be resolved on Monday's plenary call. Regards, Lisa ---------- Forwarded message --------- From: Lisa Phifer <lisa@corecom.com> Date: Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 1:38 PM Subject: Fwd: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] Consolidated Draft Report 17 August To: <lisaphifer@gmail.com> From: "Lisa Phifer" <lisa@corecom.com> To: "RDS WHOIS2-RT List" <rds-whois2-rt@icann.org> Date: Fri, 17 Aug 2018 10:46:28 -0600 Subject: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] Consolidated Draft Report 17 August List-Id: <rds-whois2-rt.icann.org> List-Unsubscribe: < https://mm.icann.org/mailman/options/rds-whois2-rt>, < mailto:rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=unsubscribe <rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=unsubscribe>> List-Archive: < http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/> List-Post: < mailto:rds-whois2-rt@icann.org <rds-whois2-rt@icann.org>> List-Help: < mailto:rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=help <rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=help>> List-Subscribe: < https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-rt>, < mailto:rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=subscribe <rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=subscribe>> Dear Review Team, Attached you will find a consolidated draft RDS-WHOIS2 review report for your consideration, in Word and PDF formats. As noted in email sent by Alice earlier today, please review this consolidated draft and raise any substantive concerns you may have on recommendations, findings, and other content to the full RT mailing list *ASAP and no later than 26 August COB. * You will note that this consolidated draft does not contain redlines. If you wish to see redlined edits made since 30 July, please refer to the associated subgroup report posted on that subgroup’s wiki page. This consolidated draft also includes copy-edits for consistency and grammar. If you feel that a copy-edit accidentally changed the intent of any text in your subgroup’s report, please flag that in comments on the consolidated draft. If you wish to make comments in redline form, please be sure to comment against the attached consolidated draft v1.8 17 August and not any prior version. Finally, thanks all for your timely delivery of the many subgroup inputs now incorporated into this draft. Thanks to your efforts, we’re now entering the final stretch of our roadmap to public comment. Best, Lisa _______________________________________________ RDS-WHOIS2-RT mailing list RDS-WHOIS2-RT@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-rt