I've reviewed the slides and in addition the input that Jean-Baptiste listed below, I have the following recommendations: Slide 7: Promotes consumer trust - delete "in gTLD domain names". That is not in the Bylaws. Slide 17: Spell out BWG since this is the first occurrence. Slide 17: Sub-bullets 2 and 3 of the 2nd major bullet (It is interpreted... and While these ...) seem to be sub-bullets of the first (From the mandate...) Slide 21: Draft Recommendation really does not makes sense in light of the Temp Specification and planned Expedited PDP. I suggest we delete it from the slides and discuss it at a future meeting. Slide 29: Define ARS here (and can delete definition slide 36). Slide 36: 4th bullet defining WDRP is really just a statement of known fact (and known to the last WHOIS RT). I suggest we delete it here. Slide 37: Rec# 6 Rationale - Do we mean the ARS IMPLEMENTATION is on-going as opposed to the ARS on-going? At 25/06/2018 11:36 AM, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:

Dear review team members,

In preparation for your engagement session this Thursday 28 June at 17:00-18:30 (EST), please find attached the latest draft version of the slide deck.

Please note that slides 18 (WHOIS1 Rec #1 – Strategic Priority), 21 (WHOIS1 Rec # 2 – Siingle WHOIS Policy), and 60 (Objective 3: Law Enforcement Needs) are still awaiting input or confirmation from rapporteurs. Thank you for looking into these.

Kind regards,

Jean-Baptiste