Section 4.1, second paragraph, "The latency in the distribution system" needs to be changed to "Latency in publishing available data". Section 3, third bullet - is this still true? If this was for NSD, it has been corrected. Section 2.1 - For v3 of the document I would like to see more details on how this value should be computed, for the sake of consistency. For example, I have six servers that receive notifies directly from the distribution masters. Should the load-time value be computed on each server separately and then averaged (this is what I am currently doing)? Or should the notify and load times from all servers be collected centrally and the value computed by subtracting the earliest (first received) notify time from the latest/last load time? What if a notify is never received (by an individual server in the first case or by any of the servers in the second case)? Section 2.1, second paragraph - "may present as anomalies in measurements", perhaps change to "may introduce anomalies"? Section 4.1, "If not load-time metric is available...", change "not" to "no". Section 5, make title plural (Recommendations) Thanks, Howard