Dear Caucus Members, Thanks to the members who provided edits during the final week review of this document. There were no substantive comments made in this final review. Only nits, grammar edits and formatting changes. RSSAC023v2 will now be forwarded to the RSSAC for a vote on its publication. The final version is attached. Thanks, Andrew On May 22, 2020, at 17:09, Andrew McConachie <andrew.mcconachie@icann.org<mailto:andrew.mcconachie@icann.org>> wrote: Dear RSSAC Caucus Members, Thanks to everyone who helped review RSSAC023v2 and added comments and text into the Google doc. <https://docs.google.com/document/d/16FaQzGJnqBsy5zk4xmLPU2v7FUqLQT8readmSYI-... [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_16FaQzGJnqBsy5zk4xmLPU2v7FUqLQT8readmSYI-2Dve0_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=KNEpS67O2txk54bIz-1lXP0tI5Rmtg88Ogwh6PVSGXJyTMuY0E2SHr70jrG3fGLJ&m=yoELP8jsZ5EEHhxQgh0n6GS9-7cYIN6N6oW9LGYkrgk&s=78W2bnVh1VZbkUghdp_ZYAC3CwECHnFbFWfMTZjY9dQ&e=>> Based on all the comments and edits received I have prepared a a final draft ready for the one week final review. After this review RSSAC023v2 will be forwarded to the RSSAC for a vote. The Revision History(Section 6.2) contains the major changes between v1 and v2, and I’ve also reproduced it below. Section 1.1, Terminology was added Section 2.5, InterNIC was renamed to Internic and Continued Expansion to recognize that it covered more than just InterNIC Section 2.8, DNS Root Provision Modification (1998) was added Section 2.10, IANA Transition was added Section 2.11, Proposed Governance Model for the DNS Root Server System was added Many small edits were made to Section 2 for clarification and grammar Sub-Section titles in Section 3 were renamed in accordance with RSSAC050 Sub-Sections of Section 3 were each updated by their respective root server operator The identifiers and operator names in Appendix A were updated An introduction was added to Appendix B Many references in Appendix B were changed to more enduring citations Please add any comments by Friday May 29. PDF is also attached, but please add any comments into the Google doc if you can. Thanks, Andrew On Apr 8, 2020, at 15:29, Andrew McConachie <andrew.mcconachie@icann.org<mailto:andrew.mcconachie@icann.org>> wrote: Dear RSSAC Caucus Members, Thanks everyone who joined the call on Monday April 6th to discuss RSSAC023v2: History of the Root Server System version 2. As discussed on the call I accepted many suggestions in the Google doc and cleaned it up a bit. <https://docs.google.com/document/d/16FaQzGJnqBsy5zk4xmLPU2v7FUqLQT8readmSYI-... [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_16FaQzGJnqBsy5zk4xmLPU2v7FUqLQT8readmSYI-2Dve0&d=DwMFAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=KNEpS67O2txk54bIz-1lXP0tI5Rmtg88Ogwh6PVSGXJyTMuY0E2SHr70jrG3fGLJ&m=Bz_jddR7eiD0IN_x6vETgk1zteHxkp1GZhR3ShVm55s&s=xWXOQstKObOD_jxR9sSlZhUp2HyENe8uiO9oDk_KRnA&e=>> The major new edits we discussed on the call were to the following sections. 1.1 Terminology 2.11 Proposed Governance Model for the DNS Root Server System 7.2 Historical Copies of Root Name Server Information Please review those sections specifically and if you have any suggestions please add them to the document. There are still some formatting and whitespace issues that I need to fix in the document. I will be working on that this week and will produce a new version next week for the full 2 week RSSAC Caucus review cycle. 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