+1 to Paul - I think these changes take care of the problem we discussed in our last meeting. Russ
On Mar 7, 2023, at 1:19 PM, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@icann.org> wrote:
On Mar 7, 2023, at 1:57 AM, Andrew McConachie <andrew.mcconachie@icann.org> wrote:
Dear RSSAC Caucus Members,
I’ve made edits to Section 3.1 in alignment with the new title. <https://docs.google.com/document/d/187k3b64DgkeCM6ib6ny6Ok7LzNxdT_v5X6FE0l0h...>
I also corrected the reference in Section 5.
Please review the new language in Section 3.1.
The new language looks good, and I like Dessalegn's change as well.
--Paul Hoffman
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