NOT PROTECTIVELY MARKED Emily, I have taken time to read all of the comments, and don't have any other comments to make. This is one where the rest of the group have far more experience than me, and can add best value. Sharon Sharon LEMON OBE Deputy Director Cyber and Forensics Serious and Organised Crime Agency (SOCA) 07768 290902 0207 855 2800 -----Original Message----- From: rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Emily Taylor Sent: 16 May 2011 07:32 To: rt4-whois@icann.org WHOIS Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Comments on the Issues paper This is really good. Thanks Kim, James, Omar, for circulating your comments on the Issues Paper, building on Kathy and Bill's inputs. Peter, I note that you will be circulating your comments later on today. We now have a good range of comments, and comments on the comments. Others - I think that's Olivier, Wilfried, Lutz, Susan, Sharon, Michael, Sarmad - please either let us have your inputs, or some other indication of where you stand. Best, Emily On 16 May 2011, at 03:06, Kim G. von Arx wrote: voila. Kim <WHOIS Review - draft discussion paper REVISED wcs + JMB comments + KvA.docx> __________________________________ kim@vonarx.ca<mailto:kim@vonarx.ca> +1 (613) 286-4445 "Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars..." On 15 May 2011, at 19:36, James M. Bladel wrote: Emily and Team: My comments are attached, appended to Bill's draft. Most of these were composed somewhere over the N. Atlantic, so apologies if they don't make sense and/or need further explanation. Thanks-- J. -------- Original Message -------- Subject: [Rt4-whois] Comments on the Issues paper From: Emily Taylor <emily.taylor@etlaw.co.uk<mailto:emily.taylor@etlaw.co.uk>> Date: Sun, May 15, 2011 9:13 am To: "rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org> WHOIS" <rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>> Hi all A gentle reminder that we agreed to review the draft issues paper, and circulate comments by close of business on Monday. The Team has asked Alice to edit the comments, and we're hoping to set up a call on Wednesday with this as the only agenda item. So far, Kathy and Bill have circulated comments - thank you. Please let's have your comments by end of Monday. If you're happy with the paper, or have views on the comments already made, please say so. 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