Dear Review Team Members, Please find attached the latest version. Also available at: https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report Thanks, Kind regards Alice -- Alice Jansen Assistant, Organizational Reviews 6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt.5 B-1040 Brussels Belgium Direct dial: +32 2 234 78 64 Mobile: +32 4 73 31 76 56 Skype: alice_jansen_icann From: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org>> Date: Mon, 28 Nov 2011 08:07:01 -0800 To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>>, "rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>" <rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>> Subject: FOLLOW-UP: [Rt4-whois] Newest version of our Reprt Dear Review Team Members, This is now available on the wiki at: https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report Note that I will be circulating a version later today that includes diagrams, Susan's comments on the report and comments submitted by Lutz on the brief guide to WHOIS. Please stay tuned! Thanks, Kind regards Alice -- Alice Jansen Assistant, Organizational Reviews 6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt.5 B-1040 Brussels Belgium Direct dial: +32 2 234 78 64 Mobile: +32 4 73 31 76 56 Skype: alice_jansen_icann From: Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>> Date: Mon, 28 Nov 2011 07:31:43 -0800 To: "rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>" <rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>> Subject: [Rt4-whois] Newest version of our Reprt Dear All, I hope you had a great weekend, and a good holiday. In the background, I see many groups working, exchanging email, and talking. Tx you! Emily and I have been talking on a daily basis to massage the report into shape, and she, I would like to share and wanted to share the most up-to-date version of our edited report. Alice, could you kindly post this to our Wiki? Quick notes; - report follows editing format we we agreed on Wednesday -- not using track changes, but instead a format that keeps all the text within the report to show the proposed changes: e.g., [KK Add: ] [KK Delete: ]. - chapter breaks, titles, and material rearranged a bit into a different order. It's all still there! Lynn's chapter, Sarmad's chapter, all given prominence in new chapters - More and bolded subtitles, etc., to make the document easier to scan Longer note: Emily, Peter and I have worked this weekend on the Gap Analysis, and breaking it into two chapters. Please note that Chapters 7/8 are not updated in the current draft -- and we'll be circulating a proposed draft within the day. All the best and enjoy, Kathy --