Great - thanks Sharon Alice - please amend the latest draft of the report to show this definition of law enforcement. Alice - Please also update the DNS intro and move it out to an appendix. On 30 November 2011 14:46, LEMON, Sharon <sharon.lemon@soca.x.gsi.gov.uk>wrote:
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Happy with this definition:
Any entity charged or otherwise mandated by governments with enforcing or ensuring observance of or obedience to the law; an organised body of people officially maintained or employed to keep order, prevent or detect crime and enforce the law
Moving intro to DNS to Appendices good ideas. Alice had the latest version, with Lutz's included.
Sharon
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-----Original Message----- *From:* Emily Taylor [mailto:emily@emilytaylor.eu] *Sent:* 30 November 2011 14:30 *To:* LEMON, Sharon *Cc:* rt4-whois@icann.org *Subject:* Re: [Rt4-whois] WHOIS Policy RT - Law Enforcement comments.
Hi Sharon
Thanks for working through this.
Sorry to say it, but I will - I don't think your new version of the law enf. definition will work. It includes the world and his wife. Can I have your snap response to the following proposal:
Any entity charged or otherwise mandated by governments with enforcing or ensuring observance of or obedience to the law; an organised body of people officially maintained or employed to keep order, prevent or detect crime and enforce the law.
Unfortunately, your colleague from Canada was working to quite an old draft, which has been superseded several times over. I can see the comments, and note what is said about impact. We have been discussing moving chunks into appendices. Would the intro to the domain name system be a good candidate?
Can you give me finalised text for that section, please, which incorporates the latest comments made by Lutz and others - this version seems to be based on an older draft.
The comments from Gary and others later in the text, and gap analysis are good. I'd like to see how we can incorporate some of them. At the moment my priorities are to get the bits lining up in the right places, and have the executive summary, findings and recommendations agreed.
Kind regards
Emily
On 30 November 2011 13:48, LEMON, Sharon <sharon.lemon@soca.x.gsi.gov.uk>wrote:
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Sorry for arriving at the party late, I have been watching in awe the hundreds of emails flying about. We gave until today for our international colleagues to comment and we have just had our own internal meeting to finalise the comments on the paper.
The paper complemented our ongoing law enforcement work within the ICANN community and there are not comments of major significance -ours are in green. I know that Alice is currently going through the nightmare of trying to organise the version control. (Good Luck and thanks Alice). I have replaced the definition of law enforcement with:
Any entity with a responsibility to enforce or ensure observance to or obedience of the law, whether mandated by government or otherwise.
We could go on forever with this - but let me know if there are any show stopping objections.
I hope we make the deadline of 5pm ;-)
Sharon
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-----Original Message----- *From:* KIBBEY, Gary *Sent:* 29 November 2011 14:34 *To:* FLAHERTY, Jonathan; ADDIS, Benedict *Cc:* CURLEY, Cliona *Subject:* FW: Emailing: WHOIS Policy RT - Draft report - 24 Nov - Clean CC GK Comments
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If you have any comments -can you drop onto this working copy. Don't track changes - just comments.
Ta
Gary
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