With the attachment this time. On 30 November 2011 15:14, Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu> wrote:
Hi Lynn
Thanks for that on the order of the whole report.
Sorry, I wasn't very clear in what I was suggesting. I'm not saying the entire thing should go into an appendix. Far from it. I attach a mark up showing my thoughts on what could go into an appendix, and some minor text edits otherwise.
Please let me know what you think.
Kind regards
Emily
On 30 November 2011 14:20, <lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com> wrote:
Agreeable to putting the Consumer Trust chapter after Chapter 7- Law Enforcement. My feeling is that rather than an appendix for the Consumer Trust Chapter, we should just make appendicies of the two User Insight powerpoint slides. The slides are clear and lay out the same details.
But I am reluctant to continue editing on my own working document and feel I should wait for your marked up version. I will also be happy to help Alice with administrative edits such as grammar, spelling, formatting and creating the Table of Contents. There was a section of content I removed because it looked like a Table of Contents to me. It said here is how our paper is laid out. Lynn
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Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Recommendations and general update From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu> Date: Wed, November 30, 2011 8:00 am To: lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com Cc: rt4-whois@icann.org
Hi Lynn
Delighted to have you online, and thanks for joining so early. Please press on. I'll be sending out a marked up version of the recommendations (showing the source - the best of my abilities) within the hour. The table of contents is excellent, and very helpful for the reader.
Please would you take a careful look at the following:
1/ We discussed by e-mail last night the possibility of shifting some of the content from the Consumer Research chapter into an appendix. Could you have a look at this, and make suggestions? 2/ Please would you give careful thought to the positioning of the Consumer Trust chapter. Peter, Kathy and I were thinking it would go very well after the Chapter 7 (what law enforcement want) and before our findings (Chapter 8 ) and recommendations (9). I see that in your latest mark up you have the chapter where it originally was. I think this not such a good position, because after it we immediately flip back into background stuff like the history of how the policy developed, what the compliance team does. The consumer stuff I see as real meat and potatoes - good for the analysis section. I would appreciate your thoughts on this Lynn.
Kind regards
Emily
On 30 November 2011 12:20, <lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com> wrote:
I'm back at my computer - my time zone is GMT -5 and it is morning here. Not sure whether to do any further editing or not so will stand by and be available to help.
I did feel very encouraged that in just making administrative edits and removing the yellow highlighting, it was easier to see the remaining points of contention.
Also felt that creating a Table of Contents is needed. Happy to help in any way to move this forward. Lynn
-------- Original Message -------- Subject: [Rt4-whois] Recommendations and general update From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu> Date: Wed, November 30, 2011 4:41 am To: rt4-whois@icann.org
Hi all
Thanks for your work overnight (or at least, my night).
I'm trying to pull together the threads of the many e-mail messages that have passed in the last 12 hours or so.
1. Version control - this is proving a nightmare for everyone. I am sorry that so many of you have been struggling with this. I can see that we have had comments on the whole or part of the report from Bill, Susan, Peter, Lynn. I understand that Kathy was unable to see Bill's edits, so rolled back to an earlier version. There is also an incredibly annoying, persistent "comment" that is repeated about 100 times randomly throughout the document, and needs to be eliminated as it's confusing.
*Action: Alice, please would you circulate the latest copy of the Report to the list as soon as possible, getting rid of highlighting except where it indicates a major disagreement, and leaving in all the comments from Bill, Susan, Peter and Lynn, but removing that buggy one.
*2. Recommendations - Peter noticed that the ambit of the privacy recommendations seems to have changed since Dakar, without an explanation of how or why that change was made. Clearly, this will tend to reduce confidence, so my focus this morning will be to review and circulate a copy of the recommendations. I'm assisted in this by Kathy's work yesterday. She and I have been puzzling over how to clean up/wordsmith/ etc the recommendations, while respecting the negotiated text. This is a very difficult task. There are also new recommendations on proxies, the one from Lutz on common interface, and one which I put in about the Whois Data Reminder Policy (from the compliance letter).
*Action: I will review the latest draft recommendations, and compare with the Dakar text. I will circulate a clean and marked up copy, with the latest versions of the recommendations, and an explanation for what has changed and why.
*3. Deadline. I'm not prepared to give up yet! This is our draft report. It is not our final version. I will call it at 5pm UTC today. I want us to make every effort to get this out when we said we would. I really believe we can do this.
Kind regards
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