Hi Emily, I have reviewed the Compliance chapter and have no revisions. You did a great job of pulling it together and it reads well. I do agree with Peter's point and adding his language into the current recommendation. Susan Kawaguchi Domain Name Manager Facebook Legal Dept. Phone - 650 485-6064 From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu<mailto:emily@emilytaylor.eu>> Date: Mon, 30 Apr 2012 07:42:10 +0100 To: "Nettlefold, Peter" <Peter.Nettlefold@dbcde.gov.au<mailto:Peter.Nettlefold@dbcde.gov.au>> Cc: "<rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>>" <rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Compliance chapter - draft [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED] Hi Peter Thank you for your comments on the compliance chapter. I fully support your proposed additional recommendation and look forward to feedback from others in the Review Team today. This would be a separate recommendation numbered sub-point 3 in the current text, is that correct? Kind regards Emily On 30 April 2012 04:14, Nettlefold, Peter <Peter.Nettlefold@dbcde.gov.au<mailto:Peter.Nettlefold@dbcde.gov.au>> wrote: Hello all, First, thanks very much Emily for taking the lead on drafting this chapter, which I fully support. This is a critical part of our report, and goes right to the heart of our earliest discussions, where we identified the ‘missing regulator’ in the system (noting the sensitivity about that specific term) as a key issue for us to focus on. In conjunction with the strategic priority findings and recommendations, I think that this chapter covers the key concerns we have been grappling with in this area, at the same time as acknowledging and substantively responding to the comments we received from the community. I have noted a few minor typos, and suggested one or two very minor wording changes, all in revision mode, but have nothing else to add to the text. My one outstanding concern relates to the actual workflow systems and processes in place to support the compliance function. This is different to the staffing question, and the issues of structure and accountability, which we have already addressed. In short, it may be useful to explicitly say somewhere that the compliance team should have the tools it needs to do the job, particularly in light of the scaling issues associated with the new gTLD program. If others agree, we could supplement the existing recommendations with something along the lines of the below: · ICANN should provide all necessary resources to ensure that the compliance team has the processes and technological tools it needs to efficiently and pro-actively manage and scale its compliance activities. The review team notes that this will be particularly important in light of the new gTLD program, and all relevant compliance processes and tools should be reviewed and improved, and new tools developed where necessary, in advance of any new gTLDs becoming operational. I look forward to comments on this issue. Cheers, Peter -----Original Message----- From: Smith, Bill [mailto:bill.smith@paypal-inc.com<mailto:bill.smith@paypal-inc.com>] Sent: Saturday, 28 April 2012 4:11 AM To: Emily Taylor Cc: Nettlefold, Peter; Smith, Bill; Mikhail Yakushev; <rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>> Subject: Re: Compliance chapter - draft I have read the updated draft and support it in its entirety. Well done Emily and members of the team. On Apr 27, 2012, at 8:01 AM, Emily Taylor wrote: Hi there As discussed on my call with Peter this morning, I attach a first draft of the new Chapter 4, complete with Findings and Recommendations. 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