Dear Review Team members, Please find attached the most recent version of the master document. This version contains the following: * Lynn's edits including review of Sharon and Law Enforcement's comments * Susan's additional quotes from comments (NCUC, ALAC) * The Dakar definitions * Emily's language – findings section * The best practices text (Susan, Kathy and James) * Lutz' recommendations (along with alternatives - please refer to Kathy's email - No agreement on Lutz's recommendations - 1 Dec 22:51 UTC). Please proofread all and closely examine text, in particular 7,8,9. Note that footnotes have been added and that typos have been found. I *believe* this document is up-to-date. Should you notice a missing piece of information or inconsistencies, please email me asap so that I can rectify for subsequent versions. The document is also available on the wiki at: https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report Thanks, Kind regards Alice -- Alice Jansen Assistant, Organizational Reviews 6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt.5 B-1040 Brussels Belgium Direct dial: +32 2 234 78 64 Mobile: +32 4 73 31 76 56 Skype: alice_jansen_icann