I have made significant edits a couple of days back which have already been resolved, I have also made a few edits just today. That's all from my side. Kind regards, Dessalegn On Tue, Sep 10, 2019 at 3:14 PM Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain@icann.org> wrote:

Dear All,

I have done and editing pass, and I have suggested some substantive edits for your consideration. Kindly review.

Regards, Sarmad

*From: *RZ-LGR-SG <rz-lgr-sg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> *Reply-To: *Dennis Tan Tanaka <dtantanaka@verisign.com> *Date: *Friday, September 6, 2019 at 7:42 PM *To: *"Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> *Subject: *Re: [RZ-LGR-SG] INPUT REQUIRED - Final Draft 4 Sep 2019

Gently reminder. Please review the latest final draft by end of day today; if you have any comments please record those in document or by email to this list.

*Monday meeting is cancelled*. I don’t see a reason to hold the call on Monday, so we’ll cancel it and continue the conversation on the mailing list.

As next steps:

- On Tuesday 9/10 and Wednesday 9/11, Sarmad and I will do a proofreading check, and - On Thursday 9/12 the document will be circulated for a final call until Friday 9/13 (please note you should not wait until the final call to suggest material changes, so please review the document now while it is a draft)

Enjoy the weekend.

Best,

Dennis

*From: *Dennis Tan Tanaka <dtantanaka@verisign.com> *Date: *Wednesday, September 4, 2019 at 11:50 AM *To: *"Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> *Subject: *INPUT REQUIRED - Final Draft 4 Sep 2019

Dear all,

A revised draft (ver 4 Sep 2019) is ready for your review and input. This version:

1. Incorporates the proposed language from Edmon for Appendix B, option B.

2. Has editorial edits

3. Includes a new recommendation 7 as a result of breaking former recommendation 11 into two parts (one for GP and one for GNSO/ccNSO). So now we have a total of 12 recommendations.

Please take some time to review this latest draft and register your comments/observations on the document itself or send via email to the list. As of now I intend to cancel next Monday’s call but we’ll decide that later based on the input we receive on the draft. PLEASE COMPLETE YOUR REVIEW BY FRIDAY 6th.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks, Dennis

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