Aug. 23, 2018
8:30 p.m.
Dear all, Please see attached my take on edits and comments on the ToR. This is the version end of Thursday 8/23/18, day two F2F, D.C. Please keep in mind that I followed this discussion and resulting edit suggestions as well as I could — thus, my notes may be incomplete or not perfectly capturing the comments made. An updated version might be following after further discussion. Many thanks and best wishes Laurin