Draft looks fine to me, though a little long. Just an inquiry. Is it fine to mention affiliations of SO/AC with each new member (in parenthesis) in the draft? Cheers, Naveed - On Sun, Sep 2, 2018 at 8:16 PM Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> wrote:

Thanks for the pointers to other blogs. The CCT RT put a picture at the top of their blog, and that seems appropriate for the "re-start" message here.

Thanks for putting this together. I have attached some editorial suggestions in the attachment. None are big. Accept or reject to easily accommodate the suggestions by others.

Russ

On Aug 31, 2018, at 3:34 PM, Denise Michel <denisemichel@fb.com> wrote:

Hi, All.

As discussed on our call, I rewrote the draft “communiqué” kindly provided by Staff, to bring it in-line with the more “approachable” blogs that are the standard for review teams (e.g. see RDS Review Team blog <https://www.icann.org/news/blog/rds-whois2-review-team-submits-terms-of-refe...> and CCT Review Team blog <https://www.icann.org/news/blog/update-on-competition-consumer-trust-and-con...>). The attached blog, once finalized, would be posted on the Team wiki and shared with the SO/AC Chairs.

I’ve also drafted an email for Russ to transmit to the SO/AC Chairs (w/ Board Committee Chair and Phil on cc) to formally close the loop with them on the “re-start” tasks they assigned. It follows the blog text in the attached.

Red-line edits are welcomed. *Can we agree to share them on the list by Sunday night (PT) Sept. 2?* That will give us time to resolve any issues and generate final documents for transmission by Sept. 4

Thanks! Denise

Denise Michel Director, Domain Name System Strategy & Management Facebook, Inc. *denisemichel@fb.com <denisemichel@fb.com>*

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Hi All, Before this goes out (not sure who’s sending), please look at the very last paragraph in Russ’ draft email and s/whish/wish Thanks, Steve On Sep 2, 2018, at 9:15 AM, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com<mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>> wrote: Thanks for the pointers to other blogs. The CCT RT put a picture at the top of their blog, and that seems appropriate for the "re-start" message here. Thanks for putting this together. I have attached some editorial suggestions in the attachment. None are big. Accept or reject to easily accommodate the suggestions by others. Russ On Aug 31, 2018, at 3:34 PM, Denise Michel <denisemichel@fb.com<mailto:denisemichel@fb.com>> wrote: Hi, All. As discussed on our call, I rewrote the draft “communiqué” kindly provided by Staff, to bring it in-line with the more “approachable” blogs that are the standard for review teams (e.g. see RDS Review Team blog<https://www.icann.org/news/blog/rds-whois2-review-team-submits-terms-of-refe...> and CCT Review Team blog<https://www.icann.org/news/blog/update-on-competition-consumer-trust-and-con...>). The attached blog, once finalized, would be posted on the Team wiki and shared with the SO/AC Chairs. I’ve also drafted an email for Russ to transmit to the SO/AC Chairs (w/ Board Committee Chair and Phil on cc) to formally close the loop with them on the “re-start” tasks they assigned. It follows the blog text in the attached. Red-line edits are welcomed. Can we agree to share them on the list by Sunday night (PT) Sept. 2? That will give us time to resolve any issues and generate final documents for transmission by Sept. 4 Thanks! Denise Denise Michel Director, Domain Name System Strategy & Management Facebook, Inc. denisemichel@fb.com<mailto:denisemichel@fb.com> <Blog and SOAC letter draft v1-rdh.docx> _______________________________________________ Ssr2-review mailing list Ssr2-review@icann.org<mailto:Ssr2-review@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ssr2-review