Draft looks fine to me, though a little long. Just an inquiry. Is it fine to mention affiliations of SO/AC with each new member (in parenthesis) in the draft? Cheers, Naveed - On Sun, Sep 2, 2018 at 8:16 PM Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> wrote:
Thanks for the pointers to other blogs. The CCT RT put a picture at the top of their blog, and that seems appropriate for the "re-start" message here.
Thanks for putting this together. I have attached some editorial suggestions in the attachment. None are big. Accept or reject to easily accommodate the suggestions by others.
Russ
On Aug 31, 2018, at 3:34 PM, Denise Michel <denisemichel@fb.com> wrote:
Hi, All.
As discussed on our call, I rewrote the draft “communiqué” kindly provided by Staff, to bring it in-line with the more “approachable” blogs that are the standard for review teams (e.g. see RDS Review Team blog <https://www.icann.org/news/blog/rds-whois2-review-team-submits-terms-of-refe...> and CCT Review Team blog <https://www.icann.org/news/blog/update-on-competition-consumer-trust-and-con...>). The attached blog, once finalized, would be posted on the Team wiki and shared with the SO/AC Chairs.
I’ve also drafted an email for Russ to transmit to the SO/AC Chairs (w/ Board Committee Chair and Phil on cc) to formally close the loop with them on the “re-start” tasks they assigned. It follows the blog text in the attached.
Red-line edits are welcomed. *Can we agree to share them on the list by Sunday night (PT) Sept. 2?* That will give us time to resolve any issues and generate final documents for transmission by Sept. 4
Thanks! Denise
Denise Michel Director, Domain Name System Strategy & Management Facebook, Inc. *denisemichel@fb.com <denisemichel@fb.com>*
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