Thank you Pranav, for your valuable input and time. I have reviewed them addressed them all in our slide on local drive. Some of the formatting look different on Google slide, we will ensure that these look proper on the final version. Best regards, Seda From: Pranav B Tiwari <pranavbtiwari@gmail.com> Date: 16 February 2024 Friday at 08:02 To: Seda Akbulut <seda.akbulut@icann.org> Cc: "ua-comms@icann.org" <ua-comms@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [UA-comms] Request for input: ICANN79 Draft slide deck for Community Update session Hi Everyone, I'm Pranav, a tech law and policy professional and an ICANN79 Fellow, newly joined in the group :) I have reviewed the PPT and suggested some grammar and design edits, which you can find here [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1Rbr1cF_d90Qmr...>. These should help enhance clarity. Looking forward to collaborating more and learning from everyone. Thanks & Regards, Pranav Bhaskar Tiwari [linkedin.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/www.linkedin.com/in/pranav-bhaskar-tiwari-...> This email is governed by the Disclaimer Terms which may be viewed by clicking here [goo.gl]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/goo.gl/9MPK4D__;!!PtGJab4!5lo478gG7HxiIu5a...>. On Thu, 15 Feb 2024 at 02:08, Seda Akbulut via UA-comms <ua-comms@icann.org<mailto:ua-comms@icann.org>> wrote: Dear all, Please share your input on the slide deck [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/presentation/d/16Vlqg9XDw...> for ICANN79 Community Update Prep Week session, by end of Friday,16 February. We have shifted some slides to the appendix, due to the short of time. Each WG will have about 3-4 minutes, and 2 slides before the questions sections. Thank you for your review and input. Kind regards, Seda Akbulut _______________________________________________ UA-comms mailing list UA-comms@icann.org<mailto:UA-comms@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ua-comms _______________________________________________ By submitting your personal data, you consent to the processing of your personal data for purposes of subscribing to this mailing list accordance with the ICANN Privacy Policy (https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy) and the website Terms of Service (https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos). You can visit the Mailman link above to change your membership status or configuration, including unsubscribing, setting digest-style delivery or disabling delivery altogether (e.g., for a vacation), and so on.