Oct. 8, 2015
11:51 p.m.
All, As discussed on today's call, I've edited and cleaned up the Google Doc, getting all the options and commentary in the Options section (while leaving a copy of any comments that were also "options" in place). I also cleaned up the formatting and added the Human Rights section from the 2nd Report on the front page. I also made a few language changes and additions, which I did in "suggest" mode. I accepted most of the prior changes in the document, but left the comments on the poll in place, since that section is still a work in progress. In terms of organization and appearance, the document is now fairly stable. This should make it easier for all of us to review and refine the text (in "suggest" mode). Enjoy! Greg