-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA256 Dear all, With the deadline drawing near Tatiana and I have made new additions to the document in which the comments are summarized. This time we have provided a draft analysis of the comments in line with the 'DelBianco Postulate' as proposed by Greg (thanks for that!). We have two concrete question for additions to the document to Bernard and/or Leon: (1.) to summarize the outcomes of the poll on rights language, and (2.) to provide a language proposal for the metrics. We would like to reiterate this is a draft text, simply to help us have a constructive and productive discussions and hopefully come to good decisions on our submission to the CCWG in the call later today. Additions, contributions and corrections before the call are of course very much welcomed. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qGYKB3d2pjx0iFGj8a8lywgM7WgYqTpis_4- ldkbtg8/edit?usp=sharing or in short form: http://is.gd/wp4delbianco Best, Niels - -- Niels ten Oever Head of Digital Article 19 www.article19.org PGP fingerprint 8D9F C567 BEE4 A431 56C4 678B 08B5 A0F2 636D 68E9 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2 iQEcBAEBCAAGBQJWFlJQAAoJEAi1oPJjbWjp2IQH/AoUl37hIrfuZUIMDAjl40h+ CrDD15+nzVhiJnN8BgJu/UQ2HWmYQWcG9pzPnXCsADp7lIbgbZgeQCi5zaBsnLjK XicUFqFzHEozwuaMjXkK4Vr/KtvNzSMYbE+JOdDdbPrd6eEtnTHUiblsf3iEn9VQ hNESEtts3w/V4QqvmE8Xcsaf9KJNH3gthjKp7Tit9FCAsESeD5zQMZZUOCE5LBP2 roiBGaaOBDqZ0rX5bJr/XOKrvFcEZTpR0TLCqGMrwlC0sogPa1UeeTynCyRp8muz Ms+UNE8rgR3CEOA9NTWEjioXvzch0EjGz/MjODgyqYUF3m7OVP+c9rgV4cFeenQ= =RAok -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----