Thank you, Cheryl. To the rest of the subgroup, I heard from ICANN legal today and they see no conflicts with our proposed guidelines and California law. I will update the report accordingly and add Cheryl’s notes. Lori S. Schulman Senior Director, Internet Policy International Trademark Association (INTA) +1-202-704-0408, Skype: lsschulman From: Cheryl Langdon-Orr [mailto:langdonorr@gmail.com] Sent: Friday, January 20, 2017 8:51 PM To: Lori Schulman <lschulman@inta.org> Cc: MSSI Secretariat <mssi-secretariat@icann.org>; ws2-guidelines@ICANN.org Subject: Re: [Ws2-guidelines] Lastest Draft of Report Hi Lori, Thanks for this... I hope my brief read over and very minor edit (format) comment both for page 5 are not a sign of a "... ... forrests and trees' issue from me, but I thought the doc was just fine... So minor format and edit points page 5... unless in response to our Q2 to ICANN Legal, we are quoting them with the TBD , I suggest we replace that placeholder with a term like 'pending' / 'yet to be received' or some such... And... Just one of my personal niggles is orphaned text so I please check if on your master doc, as I use android OS so it might be just my display, if we can ensure that the subheader 2. Escalation is connected and not on a separate page to its following text... Thanks again... On 21 Jan 2017 8:43 AM, "Lori Schulman" <lschulman@inta.org<mailto:lschulman@inta.org>> wrote: Dear Team, Per Wednesday’s call, attached please find an updated draft of the report with “Legal” section included. I have marked where the ICANN Legal Opinion will be inserted. Please use the list for feedback or submit redlines. I will incorporate any new comments into the next draft for our meeting on Wednesday, January 25. Please be ready to discuss nonetheless. Have a good weekend. Lori Schulman Senior Director, Internet Policy International Trademark Association 1250 Connecticut Avenue, Suite 200 Washington DC, USA +1-202-704-0408<tel:+1%20202-704-0408>, skype: lsschulman www.inta.org<http://www.inta.org/> Find us on: [Description: Description: Description: cid:F361C18F-02FE-4CF0-A43E-AA8566DC2514] Twitter<https://twitter.com/INTA> [Description: Description: LinkedIn] LinkedIn<http://www.linkedin.com/groupInvitation?groupID=69899> [Description: Description: facebook-logo (2)] Facebook<http://www.facebook.com/home.php?#!/GoINTA?ref=ts> [Description: Description: pnpb_sig.png] _______________________________________________ Ws2-guidelines mailing list Ws2-guidelines@icann.org<mailto:Ws2-guidelines@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ws2-guidelines ________________________________