Re: [Ws2-guidelines] Guidelines Draft Report for Initial Read

Feb. 1, 2017

      Lori, I suggested a few changes/comments that I 
though clarified or fixed problem. That was the 
purpose of the review period I thought. Lito also 
identified some typos (such as "The will avoid..." in section 2d.

I am attaching it here. If you wish to ignore 
these and fix them prior to second reading, fine.

Alan

At 31/01/2017 06:45 PM, Lori Schulman wrote:
...
Alan,
I found the omission in 2 a.  I canât find any 
others.  Litoâs comments were about whether 
all elements were required.  We decide to change 
the âshouldâ to âmustâ in response to 
the comment.  I canât find the other 
omission.  The redline is attached if it is easier for to make notes on that.
2.    SO/ACâs shall have procedures for 
consideration of board removal notices to include:
a.            reasonable time frames for 
investigation by SO/AC counsels or the 
equivalent if the SO/AC deems that an investigation is required
Thank you for finding the omissions.
Lori S. Schulman
Senior Director, Internet Policy
International Trademark Association (INTA)
+1-202-704-0408, Skype: lsschulman
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From: Alan Greenberg [mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca]
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To: Lori Schulman <lschulman@inta.org>; Bernard 
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Cc: ws2-guidelines@ICANN.org
Subject: Re: [Ws2-guidelines] Guidelines Draft Report for Initial Read
Lori, the comments made by Lito and me were not incorporated!
Alan
At 31/01/2017 12:10 PM, Lori Schulman wrote:
Dear Bernie,
I am pleased to submit our subgroupï¿½s report 
for an initial read by the plenary.
Lori Schulman
Senior Director, Internet Policy
International Trademark Association
1250 Connecticut Avenue, Suite 200
Washington DC, USA
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