Re: [Ws2-guidelines] Guidelines Draft Report for Initial Read
Lori, I suggested a few changes/comments that I though clarified or fixed problem. That was the purpose of the review period I thought. Lito also identified some typos (such as "The will avoid..." in section 2d. I am attaching it here. If you wish to ignore these and fix them prior to second reading, fine. Alan At 31/01/2017 06:45 PM, Lori Schulman wrote:
Alan,
I found the omission in 2 a. I canât find any others. Litoâs comments were about whether all elements were required. We decide to change the âshouldâ to âmustâ in response to the comment. I canât find the other omission. The redline is attached if it is easier for to make notes on that.
2. SO/ACâs shall have procedures for consideration of board removal notices to include:
a. reasonable time frames for investigation by SO/AC counsels or the equivalent if the SO/AC deems that an investigation is required
Thank you for finding the omissions.
Lori S. Schulman Senior Director, Internet Policy International Trademark Association (INTA) +1-202-704-0408, Skype: lsschulman
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From: Alan Greenberg [mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca] Sent: Tuesday, January 31, 2017 4:55 PM To: Lori Schulman <lschulman@inta.org>; Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard@gmail.com>; MSSI Secretariat <mssi-secretariat@icann.org> Cc: ws2-guidelines@ICANN.org Subject: Re: [Ws2-guidelines] Guidelines Draft Report for Initial Read
Lori, the comments made by Lito and me were not incorporated!
Alan
At 31/01/2017 12:10 PM, Lori Schulman wrote:
Dear Bernie,
I am pleased to submit our subgroup�s report for an initial read by the plenary.
Lori Schulman Senior Director, Internet Policy International Trademark Association 1250 Connecticut Avenue, Suite 200 Washington DC, USA +1-202-704-0408, skype: lsschulman <http://www.inta.org/>www.inta.org
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