Thanks for this information, Anne. I don't see any effort in addressing the three Government inputs. In our case they meant wide interministerial exchanges and consultations. Really sad to see such little accommodation to the input from three engaged Governments in the multistakeholder effort. Seems it will be difficult to explain internally how not even a mention to the universally accepted standard is included as a potential guideline for ICANN Org... regards Jorge ________________________________ Von: Aikman-Scalese, Anne <AAikman@lrrc.com> Datum: 15. August 2017 um 20:09:55 MESZ An: 'Niels ten Oever' <lists@nielstenoever.net>, ws2-hr@icann.org <ws2-hr@icann.org> Betreff: Re: [Ws2-hr] Proposed Agenda August 15 19:00 UTC Hi Niels. The proposed text is pasted below in blue. "3.1 When examining its internal operations, ICANN the organization could, if it so chooses, consider using a mechanism to assess its impact on Human Rights. Whether and, if so, what mechanism to choose is solely up to ICANN the organization to decide. No such assessment should directly or indirectly impact gTLD policy formation or execution without being fully consistent with existing processes and protocols. The results of the organization's analysis should be reflected in its annual reporting" The old text (and redlined text per your suggestion at the last meeting is attached.) It appears the primary changes from the old language to the new proposed language from the drafting team are: 1. Add “if it so chooses” 2. No specific reference to any specific assessment tool – either HRIA or UNGP 3. Specific reference to any impact on gTLD policy formation to be consistent with existing ICANN processes and protocols Hope this helps. Anne Anne E. Aikman-Scalese Of Counsel 520.629.4428 office 520.879.4725 fax AAikman@lrrc.com _______________________________ Lewis Roca Rothgerber Christie LLP One South Church Avenue, Suite 700 Tucson, Arizona 85701-1611 lrrc.com -----Original Message----- From: Niels ten Oever [mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net] Sent: Tuesday, August 15, 2017 6:12 AM To: Aikman-Scalese, Anne; ws2-hr@icann.org Subject: Re: [Ws2-hr] Proposed Agenda August 15 19:00 UTC Hi Anne, Thanks for this, I reckon this means the drafting team hasn't come together and wasn't able to provide us with alternative text? Anne, could you provide us with the old text, new proposed text and redline version so we have very clear what do discuss? Thanks, Niels On 08/14/2017 11:47 PM, Aikman-Scalese, Anne wrote:
Thanks Niels. Have not heard from anyone though I raised my hand to
volunteer. I propose adding the following language to whatever is
determined for the changed language to accommodate the public comment
from the governments:
“To the extent that the foregoing assessment may impact gTLD policy,
ICANN the organisation will review such mechanisms in accordance with
the existing processes and protocols”.
Anne E. Aikman-Scalese
Of Counsel
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Dear all,
I hope this email finds you all well. I am looking forward to discuss
with you tomorrow the statement prepared by the draftig team.
Unfortunately I haven't received the statement from them yet, but I am
sure they are working hard on it.
Please find all proposed items for the agenda below and attached:
1. Administrivia
Roll call, absentees, SoIs, etc
2. Review proposed change by drafting team 3. Discussion approach to
statement to CCWG 4. AOB
As always I'm greatly looking forward to the call, you questions and
suggestions.
All the best,
Niels
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