Hi Niels, Nigel: I would like to note a particular request to our intrepid drafting team of Tatiana, Matthew, Jorge, and Greg for today’s call, if possible. It would be interesting to hear their perspectives on the utility of using Google docs at this stage. I have to admit I am struggling with it – and I have just been a reader of this document so far, not a contributor. It seems to me a very useful tool when the number of commenters and comments is manageable but loses its usefulness as those grow. I also admit a preference, probably developed in WS1, for the development of issues on list prior to putting pen to paper for a rough or final draft. The problem might simply be uniquely mine and I will have to deal with it. But as our drafters worked up page after page I wonder if they developed views on this tool at this stage of our work. Thank you David David McAuley International Policy Manager Verisign Inc. 703-948-4154 From: ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Dr. Tatiana Tropina Sent: Tuesday, October 11, 2016 5:32 AM To: ws2-hr@icann.org Subject: Re: [Ws2-hr] Proposed agenda + documents meeting October 11 - 19:00 UTC Hi Niels, since the new FoI document proposal is still work in progress, can we perhaps rephrase the agenda item 3 to reflect this? Right now the agenda item sounds like the small team produced the new document, but in fact we are still discussing and drafting - and our points of disagreement actually reflect the general disagreements of the group as a whole. Shall we rather say "3. Analysis and discussion on the progress of the drafting team working on the new proposal for FoI" or something like this? Cheers Tanya On 11/10/16 11:00, Niels ten Oever wrote: Dear all, I hope this email finds you well. Please find underneath the proposed agenda for the call of our subgroup on 11 October 19:00 UTC. Please find also attached the proposed slides as well as the document the Drafting Team consisting of Greg, Tatiana, Matt and Jorge, have been working on this week. You can also find that document here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XFmkzSFh4CuVR7uWWh6-ZUNii4iVd-jQwx9eZ01C... All your comments and suggestions are of course very welcome. 1. Administrivia Roll call, absentees, SoIs, etc 2. Analysis and discussion of proposed definition of applicable law by David McAuley 3. Analysis and discussion on new draft FoI document produced by Drafting Team 4. AOB I'm greatly looking forward to see you all on the call. Best, Niels _______________________________________________ Ws2-hr mailing list Ws2-hr@icann.org<mailto:Ws2-hr@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ws2-hr