Dear Colleagues, So of course I am having my normal troubles with Google docs even though trying to enter in "Suggesting" mode. Per my previous e-mail, I added a suggested edit re less formal grievance procedures than RFR and IRP at the end of the first section. Less formal processes should be instituted so that matters could be resolved before reaching this stage. Then in relation to the Human Rights Impact Assessment section, I added a reference to the fact that HRIAs should "avoid cherry-picking" and be conducted with "due regard to principles of proportionality". Here I want to be very forthright again about the fact that creator's rights and the rights of indigenous peoples are also human rights. Too often we hear only about privacy and free expression and it is clear there is a balancing that must occur, especially in the ICANN context. Especially given the content of the CCWP Human Rights discussion on Wednesday and the SSAC letter, I think these considerations will be important in the processes to come within ICANN. Thank you for your consideration of these points in advance of the call on Tuesday. I hope you all are having safe travels. Anne Anne E. Aikman-Scalese Of Counsel 520.629.4428 office 520.879.4725 fax AAikman@lrrc.com _______________________________ Lewis Roca Rothgerber Christie LLP One South Church Avenue, Suite 700 Tucson, Arizona 85701-1611 lrrc.com -----Original Message----- From: ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Niels ten Oever Sent: Monday, March 13, 2017 1:20 PM To: ws2-hr Subject: [Ws2-hr] Copenhagen Drafting Team Consensus Dear all, The drafting team has been working hard during evening and early morning meetings and managed to come to a drafting team consensus of the considerations document, for your consideration. You can find the document attached and at the following link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rDYyuXacrSYDtlSK5JqNQe7XOX2LbM86AzfDay8z... If you have questions, comments or suggestions, feel please bring them up on the list or in our upcoming meeting. But also feel free to approach the members of the drafting team during ICANN58 Copenhagen for more background. All the best, Niels -- Niels ten Oever Head of Digital Article 19 www.article19.org PGP fingerprint 2458 0B70 5C4A FD8A 9488 643A 0ED8 3F3A 468A C8B3 ________________________________ This message and any attachments are intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which they are addressed. If the reader of this message or an attachment is not the intended recipient or the employee or agent responsible for delivering the message or attachment to the intended recipient you are hereby notified that any dissemination, distribution or copying of this message or any attachment is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately by replying to the sender. The information transmitted in this message and any attachments may be privileged, is intended only for the personal and confidential use of the intended recipients, and is covered by the Electronic Communications Privacy Act, 18 U.S.C. ยง2510-2521.