Hello Kavouss, I suggested on gdocs a little edits that may address the point you raised Regards On Tue, Feb 28, 2017 at 10:03 AM, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com
wrote:
Dear Niels, Thank you very much for the file. I still have serious difficulties to treat GNSO and ccNSO Recommendations from GAC Advice. Unless all three are not treated equally , I would continue to object to the texts proposed. I also have problem with the term " HUMAN RIGHTS BYLAW as there is no Bylaw for human rights .Perhaps we should say Human Rights mentioned in Bylaw. I therefore attaching my comments in a revised version of the doc., Regards Kavouss
2017-02-28 8:26 GMT+01:00 <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch>:
Dear Niels and all
Further to the comment below, please find attached a version of the document with further suggestions and comments/questions (which I have also included in the Google Doc).
It is unfortunate that I can no longer attend the meetings as they always are at the same time and at least in Europe fall in the evening, where other commitments and obligations of a different nature are due. Maybe we could reconsider the non-rotation of the meetings…
Nonetheless, I hope that these comments may be taken on board during today’s call.
@staff: please mention my comments during the call, as if I was there J
Kind regards
Jorge
*Von:* Cancio Jorge BAKOM *Gesendet:* Dienstag, 28. Februar 2017 06:38 *An:* Niels ten Oever <lists@nielstenoever.net>; ws2-hr@icann.org *Betreff:* AW: [Ws2-hr] Proposed Agenda FIRST READING considerations document Feb 28 19:00 UTC
Dear Niels
While I will not be able to attend the call this evening, I disagree with the wording of this sentence:
"However, there was not sufficient support to recommend the application of the UN Guiding Principles for the *interpretation *of the Bylaw."
The WG did not reach consensus or did not reach agreement - which is the way we worked. Saying that "there was not sufficient support" mischaracterizes the way we work(ed) and may imply that there was some sort of voting, which was not the case.
Therefore I would propose the following text:
"However, there was no agreement on whether to recommend the application of the UN Guiding Principles for the *interpretation *of the Bylaw."
Hope you may take this on board.
regards
Jorge
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*Von:* Niels ten Oever <lists@nielstenoever.net> *Datum:* 28. Februar 2017 um 01:16:01 MEZ *An:* ws2-hr@icann.org <ws2-hr@icann.org> *Betreff:* [Ws2-hr] Proposed Agenda FIRST READING considerations document Feb 28 19:00 UTC
Dear all,
It is with great pleasure that I can share with you the draft agenda for the meeting of February 28, 19:00 UTC.
The drafting group worked hard after the constructive session last week. With this document we might have arrived at a new milestone.
I am very much looking forward to have a first reading of the Considerations document with you in the call. As previously discussed, the Consideration document will be merged into one document with the FoI upon approval by the subgroup.
I am greatly looking forward to discuss this with you on the call.
Please find the proposed agenda underneath and attached, as well as the document.
1. Administrivia Roll call, absentees, SoIs, etc 2. First reading (of two) of the Considerations document prepared by the drafting team 3. AOB
The document can also be found here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KJfmglI5wBib7T5hgIMMysO7 x6J3Oi5NYwN4AItZjkY/edit
Please let me know if you have any question or suggestions.
All the best,
Niels -- Niels ten Oever Head of Digital
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