Hello Greg, I like to note 2 minor comments. 1. Calling an issue "generally" doesn't seem to communicate well. I suggest something in the line of "US sanction on countries" 2. Last paragraph on page 6 can start from "Initially..." Regards Sent from my mobile Kindly excuse brevity and typos On Sep 18, 2017 6:46 AM, "Greg Shatan" <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> wrote:
All,
Attached are copies of the OFAC recommendation, revised to reflect the issues raised and the results of discussions during the reading of the recommendation on last week's call. The Google Doc has been revised following that reading, and Word and PDF copies reflecting these revisions are attached.
Please review this version prior to the call. I would like to suggest that the upcoming call be considered the "second reading" of the Recommendation, and the Recommendation be left open for 48 hours afterwards for comments from those unable to attend the call.
I look forward to our call.
Greg
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