Thanks Greg. I have made an additional change, following up on a suggestion Matthew made regarding one of my comments. David David McAuley Sr International Policy & Business Development Manager Verisign Inc. 703-948-4154 From: ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Greg Shatan Sent: Monday, October 09, 2017 11:57 PM To: ws2-jurisdiction <ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Ws2-jurisdiction] FOR YOUR REVIEW: CHOICE OF LAW AND CHOICE OF VENUE RECOMMENDATION All, Please review the Choice of Law and Choice of Venue Recommendation as soon as possible. In about 24 hours, I will turn another version of the document, accepting as many edits as possible. If there are parts of the text or the edits that you strongly object to, please say so now. The Google Doc is at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xAyla8FTaL7jZ0D2rYtAzQUr3gEnirTKiAG-kqD0... Word and PDF versions are attached. (In the PDF, the blue changes are by Raphael, the pink ones by David McAuley and the purple ones by me.) A VERSION OF THIS WILL BE REVIEWED IN OUR MEETING OF OCTOBER 11 AT 19:00 UTC ON OCTOBER 11, 2017 THIS MUST BE SUBMITTED (AS PART OF OUR REPORT) BY 23:59 UTC ON OCTOBER 11, 2017. Thank you for taking the time to review this. Greg