Nov. 23, 2015
3:32 p.m.
In reviewing the Third Draft, the "Principles" section of the Second Draft seems to have disappeared entirely. This section contained a number of important parts of our proposal, and is an integral part of the overall proposal. I anticipate a response that these recommendations have somehow been parceled out and absorbed into other sections of the Third Draft, but even a spot-check show that this is clearly not the case. It appears that our quest for readability has resulted in significant and difficult to find changes to the substance of our proposals. This undermines the proposal as a whole and makes the job of reviewing this draft much harder. I am deeply concerned. Greg