Dear All, I have not checked the doc. because it is not checkable. Standard procedure is that the initial texts are placed in one column and the amendemnets in the second column BUT WITH REVISION MARKS and NOT AS CLEAN TEXT SORRY IT IS NOT WORKABLE TO CHECK WORD BY WORD AND LIONE BY LINE REGARDS Kavouss 2015-09-01 15:45 GMT+02:00 Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>:
Dear all, Please find attached the final version of the synopsis Becky prepared. The document can also be found on your second draft proposal wiki page at https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=53783460 We will have a link to the chart added to the public comment period box - https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-draft-proposal-201... . Thanks Best Alice
From: "Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch> Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2015 5:02 PM To: "Becky.Burr@neustar.biz" <Becky.Burr@neustar.biz>, Alice Jansen < alice.jansen@icann.org>, "accountability-cross-community@icann.org" < accountability-cross-community@icann.org> Subject: AW: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
Dear Beck,
many thanks for your prompt and responsive answer. I feel many will benefit from this added explanations.
Regards
Jorge
*Von:* Burr, Becky [mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz <Becky.Burr@neustar.biz>]
*Gesendet:* Mittwoch, 26. August 2015 15:59 *An:* Cancio Jorge BAKOM <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch>; alice.jansen@icann.org; accountability-cross-community@icann.org *Betreff:* Re: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
Dear Jorge,
I will attempt to insert an explanatory column this morning.
Becky
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*From: *"Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch> *Date: *Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 1:43 AM *To: *Becky Burr <becky.burr@neustar.biz>, "alice.jansen@icann.org" < alice.jansen@icann.org>, Accountability Community < accountability-cross-community@icann.org> *Subject: *AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
Dear Becky,
Thank you very much for this very useful comparison.
I wonder whether a third column with an objective impact assessment of the changes would be available, in order to better understand what each and every change intends to achieve specifically and what impact this would have on current ICANN activities and operations.
If this would to be done I would recommend that the explanation is inserted directly into the column and that we refrain from just inserting references to sections in the report as this makes the reading and understanding of the changes much more difficult.
In addition to the foregoing, perhaps it would be useful to extend this comparison to any other specific Bylaw changes proposed in the Report, in order to benefit from a complete picture of what is being proposed at this level in one single document.
Best regards,
Jorge Cancio
*Von:*accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org [ mailto:accountability-cross-community <accountability-cross-community> -bounces@icann.org] *Im Auftrag von *Burr, Becky *Gesendet:* Dienstag, 25. August 2015 22:31 *An:* Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>; accountability-cross-community@icann.org *Betreff:* [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
I’ve put together a chart with the requested comparison. Hope it helps. Alice, I assume someone will post as appropriate
Thanks,
Becky
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*From: *Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org> *Date: *Monday, August 24, 2015 at 5:04 PM *To: *Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org> *Subject: *[CCWG-ACCT] Call with advisors
Dear all,
This is to inform you that as part of your outreach and public comment process, a call will be held on *Monday, 31 August - 13:00-14:00 UTC *to collect CCWG-Accountability Advisors' input on the Second Draft Proposal.
May we also take this opportunity to remind you that your third webinar is scheduled for tomorrow – *Tuesday, 25 August – 18:00-20:00 UTC* – see https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-08-17-en <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_news_anno...> for details.
Webinar Q&As on your second draft proposal are compiled on a wiki page at: https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=54695403 <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pag...>
Thank you,
Kind regards
Alice
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